This is my first fic so please give me nice reviews! Let's get this stuff straight first. This is sort of like Mulan but its placed in Ancient Egypt. I'm calling the Yugioh cast different names too. I found some ancient Egyptian names at this site. If I get anything wrong please tell me nicely! I tried to find the names closest to theirs! Here's their names:
Yami-Atemu(his true name if you read the manga)
Yugi-Yuya
Anzu-Abana
Seto-Setep
Mokuba-Mokhtar
Bakura-Bakenmut
Isis-Isis(duh!)
Jounouchi-Jarha(hehheh!)
Honda-Haankeef(sounds beef._;)
Shizuka-Sitra
Mai-Maharet
Rebecca(dunno her Japanese name)-Renefankh(I hate her but I guess I'll put her in anyway)
I think that's all of them. The couples are Yami/Anzu the main,a little Jou/Mai,and a little Honda/Shizuka story, k? Now on with the story!
Yuugi: FINALLY!
ennovy:shadup!
"Pharaoh, the tomb robbers have attacked the palace! We need reinforcements! We were able to fend them off, but we need them to guard the palace!"the wary pharaoh Ankhtify looked up at his general.
"Send them to protect the villages!" He had dark heavy rings under his eyes from lack of sleep and worry. "But Sire! The people need you!" his scribe protested. Just before the Pharaoh could speak, the large ebony hieroglyphic painted doors creaked open and an official walked through them. Anktify sat up straight surprised in his golden throne.
The official walked up the smooth marble stairs, "Sire! I-I'm afraid that your son, young Master Atemu has escaped again! We've looked everywhere for him!" The official stuttered looking down on the stair he was on. The Pharaoh groaned, this was definently not the time to sneak around. This was the forth time the prince had snuck out again! "He'll come back." He said warily rubbing his temple. He knew Atemu would come back. When the pharaoh had been a young prince, he was much like his son, sneaking around the palace and the surrounding village outside the palace walls. The door creaked again, but this time his younger son's attendant came in and kneeled before him crying, "My Pharaoh! Your son Yuya is gone too!" It seemed that Atemu had taken his younger brother on a trip. He held his hand up in a stop motion,"Do not worry about it, I think Atemu has taken him simply on a little nightly sneak-out trip in the vases again. And General? Send half of the soldiers here and the rest to protect the villages." He was so wrong about where his sons were.
Two riders on white and semi-black horses steered their horses to a nearby oasis. "Whew! What a trip!" the shorter and younger one exclaimed. His innocent violet eyes flickered with excitement. He looked down at his kilt. It was brown with desert sand. He patted it and a dust cloud came off. "Hm. Its dirty." He ran a hand through his blonde banged and red tipped spiky black hand shaped hair. His older brother Atemu glanced at him, he looked similar but had a few more bangs, hair slightly fringed, his normally fierce narrowed athmyst eyes half closed, "Yuya, let's get some sleep." "Okay, but I don't think I should sleep in dirty clothes, Hasputet tells me its unsanitary and-" "Yuya, It's not going to kill you. Look at me I'm not dead and I used to do it until that attendant to me the same thing." He cut Yuya off before he could do any further babbling, "Besides,"he sat down on the soft grass and leaned against a oasis palm trunk, "We still have a little farther to go."
"Man! It's been-I dont know five hours since we left the palace! Where exactly are we going again?" the thirteen year old looked to his fourteen year old brother. Atemu opened one slanted eye, "To al Baldari, remember? We're going to take part in this war, unless you have second thoughts? It's not too late to turn around." Yuya shook his head, "I wanna be a man too!" Atemu sighed and rolled onto his side listening to the the crickets chirp, "Then go to sleep."he grumbled.
"Kay."The younger boy leaned on the trunk and followed his brother silently to dreamland.
~Next day~
"Are we there yet?!"Yuya asked impatiently, they had been traveling since they woke up which was ten hours ago. "Yuya! Geez, you've been asking me that all day! Yes we are there!"Atemu said exasperately as they rode their horses to the the dirty white tents. Soldiers were outside in straight lines practicing with their swords, probably their family swords, very sloppily. As Atemu and Yuya approached the tent, a blonde haired boy and a brunette with his hair slicked into a spike on his head around Atemu's age at the entrance of the camp. They seemed to be fighting with each other. "You was da one who hit me in da head wit yer dull sword, baka!"the blonde barked rubbing a fresh bruise forming on his head. "It wouldn't have happened if you hadn't tripped me Jarha! (an: V_V; it was the only 'J' name in the male name section! Sounds like Jar Jar Binks! X_X;) The brunette looked at the two boys, who were sweatdropping, almost identical except for height, standing in front of him. "Uh, Jar?"
"What Haankeef?! Oh, Yo." the blonde boy scratched the back of his head, "You guys new?" "Yeah, When are we training?" Atemu asked.
"The commander announces when we train. I'm Haankeef and this is Jarha. What's your guyses(an:yep i say this too. ^^;)name?" "Erm-Atemu and Yuya,"Atemu said gesturing to him and then Yuya who stood just a little bit behind Atemu, I doubt any of these guys know who we are, he thought. Yuya waved a choked hand, "Uh, Hi!" Yuya looked at the camp excitedly, he was going to be a man with his brother. Jarha's stomach growled loudly, and everybody sweatdropped, "Eh heh heh! I'm hungry." Haankeef smacked his forehead, "We ate just an hour ago, Jar!" "Yeah, but dat was an hour ago, let's go to da grub booth!" "Fine. You guys can come with us."Haankeef said. Yuya looked at the different men in half closed tents branding themselves with metal shapes, Wow that's what real men do! Cool!
He ran to catch up with his brother, Jarha, and Haankeef to the food tent. "I'm surprised you haven't eaten all the food yet, dog."
Hmm I wonder who this is? You probably know already. Don't worry the girls will be coming in the story soon. I know Yami(Atemu) is kinda ooc but he's younger. Everybodys going to be a little ooc. Someone help me with a title. I know this is kinda short but itll get longer. I hope. Oh yeah review!^^
Yami-Atemu(his true name if you read the manga)
Yugi-Yuya
Anzu-Abana
Seto-Setep
Mokuba-Mokhtar
Bakura-Bakenmut
Isis-Isis(duh!)
Jounouchi-Jarha(hehheh!)
Honda-Haankeef(sounds beef._;)
Shizuka-Sitra
Mai-Maharet
Rebecca(dunno her Japanese name)-Renefankh(I hate her but I guess I'll put her in anyway)
I think that's all of them. The couples are Yami/Anzu the main,a little Jou/Mai,and a little Honda/Shizuka story, k? Now on with the story!
Yuugi: FINALLY!
ennovy:shadup!
"Pharaoh, the tomb robbers have attacked the palace! We need reinforcements! We were able to fend them off, but we need them to guard the palace!"the wary pharaoh Ankhtify looked up at his general.
"Send them to protect the villages!" He had dark heavy rings under his eyes from lack of sleep and worry. "But Sire! The people need you!" his scribe protested. Just before the Pharaoh could speak, the large ebony hieroglyphic painted doors creaked open and an official walked through them. Anktify sat up straight surprised in his golden throne.
The official walked up the smooth marble stairs, "Sire! I-I'm afraid that your son, young Master Atemu has escaped again! We've looked everywhere for him!" The official stuttered looking down on the stair he was on. The Pharaoh groaned, this was definently not the time to sneak around. This was the forth time the prince had snuck out again! "He'll come back." He said warily rubbing his temple. He knew Atemu would come back. When the pharaoh had been a young prince, he was much like his son, sneaking around the palace and the surrounding village outside the palace walls. The door creaked again, but this time his younger son's attendant came in and kneeled before him crying, "My Pharaoh! Your son Yuya is gone too!" It seemed that Atemu had taken his younger brother on a trip. He held his hand up in a stop motion,"Do not worry about it, I think Atemu has taken him simply on a little nightly sneak-out trip in the vases again. And General? Send half of the soldiers here and the rest to protect the villages." He was so wrong about where his sons were.
Two riders on white and semi-black horses steered their horses to a nearby oasis. "Whew! What a trip!" the shorter and younger one exclaimed. His innocent violet eyes flickered with excitement. He looked down at his kilt. It was brown with desert sand. He patted it and a dust cloud came off. "Hm. Its dirty." He ran a hand through his blonde banged and red tipped spiky black hand shaped hair. His older brother Atemu glanced at him, he looked similar but had a few more bangs, hair slightly fringed, his normally fierce narrowed athmyst eyes half closed, "Yuya, let's get some sleep." "Okay, but I don't think I should sleep in dirty clothes, Hasputet tells me its unsanitary and-" "Yuya, It's not going to kill you. Look at me I'm not dead and I used to do it until that attendant to me the same thing." He cut Yuya off before he could do any further babbling, "Besides,"he sat down on the soft grass and leaned against a oasis palm trunk, "We still have a little farther to go."
"Man! It's been-I dont know five hours since we left the palace! Where exactly are we going again?" the thirteen year old looked to his fourteen year old brother. Atemu opened one slanted eye, "To al Baldari, remember? We're going to take part in this war, unless you have second thoughts? It's not too late to turn around." Yuya shook his head, "I wanna be a man too!" Atemu sighed and rolled onto his side listening to the the crickets chirp, "Then go to sleep."he grumbled.
"Kay."The younger boy leaned on the trunk and followed his brother silently to dreamland.
~Next day~
"Are we there yet?!"Yuya asked impatiently, they had been traveling since they woke up which was ten hours ago. "Yuya! Geez, you've been asking me that all day! Yes we are there!"Atemu said exasperately as they rode their horses to the the dirty white tents. Soldiers were outside in straight lines practicing with their swords, probably their family swords, very sloppily. As Atemu and Yuya approached the tent, a blonde haired boy and a brunette with his hair slicked into a spike on his head around Atemu's age at the entrance of the camp. They seemed to be fighting with each other. "You was da one who hit me in da head wit yer dull sword, baka!"the blonde barked rubbing a fresh bruise forming on his head. "It wouldn't have happened if you hadn't tripped me Jarha! (an: V_V; it was the only 'J' name in the male name section! Sounds like Jar Jar Binks! X_X;) The brunette looked at the two boys, who were sweatdropping, almost identical except for height, standing in front of him. "Uh, Jar?"
"What Haankeef?! Oh, Yo." the blonde boy scratched the back of his head, "You guys new?" "Yeah, When are we training?" Atemu asked.
"The commander announces when we train. I'm Haankeef and this is Jarha. What's your guyses(an:yep i say this too. ^^;)name?" "Erm-Atemu and Yuya,"Atemu said gesturing to him and then Yuya who stood just a little bit behind Atemu, I doubt any of these guys know who we are, he thought. Yuya waved a choked hand, "Uh, Hi!" Yuya looked at the camp excitedly, he was going to be a man with his brother. Jarha's stomach growled loudly, and everybody sweatdropped, "Eh heh heh! I'm hungry." Haankeef smacked his forehead, "We ate just an hour ago, Jar!" "Yeah, but dat was an hour ago, let's go to da grub booth!" "Fine. You guys can come with us."Haankeef said. Yuya looked at the different men in half closed tents branding themselves with metal shapes, Wow that's what real men do! Cool!
He ran to catch up with his brother, Jarha, and Haankeef to the food tent. "I'm surprised you haven't eaten all the food yet, dog."
Hmm I wonder who this is? You probably know already. Don't worry the girls will be coming in the story soon. I know Yami(Atemu) is kinda ooc but he's younger. Everybodys going to be a little ooc. Someone help me with a title. I know this is kinda short but itll get longer. I hope. Oh yeah review!^^
