Freedom is always Bitter-Sweet

Hello World!

DISCLAIMER: I OWN ABSOLUTLY NOTHING. Wish I did though...

Anyways, im super excited, as this is my first ever fan fiction, and first (two) OCs!

In fact, im so excited that me writing this note sounds kinda OOC...

I would LOVE any feedback, posistive or negative, so, review please! The prolouge is almost fluffy, but the rest is full of angst (at least for my taste)...

And yes, Texas WAS actually a country, but only for like twelve years.

italics always mean either thoughts or spanish.


The evening sunlight kissed the country side, bathing everything in a shimmering golden glow. Two people sat on a hill, one, a tall, brown haired man, the other a small boy of about seven. They watched as the sun started to sink, slowly swirling brilliant pinks and oranges across the powder blue sky.

Mexico looked at the older nation hopefully with his large, dark brown eyes. "Did you find it yet, Papi? Did they find the city of gold?" Spain chuckled softly, then ruffled the boy's hair. "Not yet, little one, but soon, we'll find it for sure. Just imagine it! A place so rich, they coat the rooves with riches..."

The smaller nation stretched and yawned a little. "Im getting tired, and its getting dark out. Lets go home and sleep." He got up, the sky now turning a rich shade of blue. "Do you think you could carry me?" "Now, how are you going to grow big and strong, and be able to fight if I always do everything for you, huh?" He teasingly replied, scooping up the child into a piggyback ride.

"yay!"

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At the small house, Spain set his son down on the bed. "Could you stay here with me, papi?"

"Of course i will, mi corazone." He sat on the bed, cuddling the child and softly chanting happiness tones.

"Fusososososo..."

Seeing him nearly asleep, he snuck out of the bed and walked away quietly.

"Papi?" A small, tired voice asked.

"Yes, Fenando?"

"When are you leaving again?"

Spain sighed. "Im sorry, but i have to leave again in a couple days, Miho..."

"I love you, Papi. I wish you could stay here with me forever. I miss you..."

Spain paused, then turned around and gave Mexico a hug. "So do I, Fernando, so do I..."

Satisfied and happy, Mexico closed his eyes, and started sleeping peacefully. He dreamed, sweet, peaceful dreams, where he could live with his father forever, and they would never be seperated again.

"I love you, Papi..." He mumbled, half asleep.

Spain smiled, then went to his own room to dream his own dreams.

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Finished! I feel strangely acomplished!

Is it just me, or did I do spain kinda OOC?...

Toni's not a pedo though!

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Review anyway! Hugs for everyone! And if i use any wierd Spanish, tell me, beacause my spanish skills are very little past 'manzana' (apple. its a long story)...

ill try to update at least once a week! ;D Love you all!