Authors Note: Hey guys,

Thankyou for reading this. This was my drabble for the first week of the LDWS challenge on LiveJournal dmhgchallenge. If it isn't too much to ask would you be able to give me your honest opinion on it. I'm really looking for any constructive criticism that would help me as a budding writer. Unfortunately I was one of the first to be eliminated, I just want to know how to be better.

The prompt was Platform 9 3/4

Title: Family Moment

Rating: PG

"Is Dad coming to see me off like he promised?" Hermione's smile slips and her breath catches as she thinks of her missing husband. She gives her daughter a watery smile.

"I'm sure he'll do everything he can to be here for you." The train whistle blows as Calliope kisses Hermione on the cheek before suddenly rushing in the opposite direction.

"DADDY!" Hermione spins around in shock. There he is, coming towards her, hugging Callie. Draco catches Hermione's eye and smiles softly.

Hermione tears up, "I was so worried. You didn't come back with the others"

"I made a promise"