My first fanfic! YAY! I would really appreciate reviews to tell me how I did and if I should do more!
Thanks and enjoy!
Title: He's Hibari's WHAT!
Author: IxBELIEVExINxEMO
Summary: It's Hibari v. Gola Mosca and the Vongola family is ready to win… But what happens when someone from the Varia looks strangely familiar? Read and Review please!
It's a chilly night in Namimori as the Vongola family waits for their cloud gaurdian to arrive. Though the stars are bright and the night is as close to perfect as it ever gets in this small Japanese city, their eyes switch from the Varia on the other side of the field to the entrance. The more time that goes by the more nervous the Vongola get.
"AHHHH! Where's Hibari-san! It's his fight tonight, why isn't he here!"
"Judaime, calm down! If that bastard knows what's good for him, he'll show up! Just you wait," Gokudera assures Sawada Tsunayoshi.
"Yea Tsuna, he'll show up!" Yamamoto Takeshi says in his usual up-beat mood.
"VOOOIIIIIII! Where's your cloud guardian, EH! Did he get scared and run away AHAHAHA!" Varia's rain guardian yells from the others side of the field.
"What was that?" a dark voice says from the back.
"Hibari-san! You came!" Tsuna says with relief obvious in his voice.
Hibari Kyoya approaches the rest of the Vongola guardians. His glare still glued to his face.
"'Bout time you bastard!" Gokudera yells as Hibari as he gets closer. Without stopping, he walks right pass them and onto the field where Gola Mosca waits. Hibari pulls his tonfa's out from inside his jacket and takes his fighting stance. But instead of attacking, Hibari's tonfa's fall to the ground and hi eyes open wider than anyone has ever seen them before. Wiping the glare that's been on his face for as long as anyone can remember right off his face.
But the biggest surprise is what he says next…..
"Dad?"
How'd I do for my 1st fanfic? Please review and tell me what i can do to improve it! Please and Thank you!
