Intro:
So what I've done is retold the movie Dino king (Speckles the Tarbosaurus in other countries) with an additional character and told it from this character's point of view (which is actually me)
but anyway I originally made this story as a way to deal with stress and from the day I wrote the first chapter to when I set up my fanfiction account about a month later I had written 56 chapters. (Granted they are quite short with the exception of a couple, generally a couple paragraphs each)
The perspective of this story is somewhat goofy as I designed the character to reflect my personality. However it does have serious aspects and mainly exists to explain everything about the story including an explanation as to how speckles even has the ability to narrate in the first place.
Now since this was at the time a way for me to relieve stress I put down personal details I shouldn't just release on the Internet so I WONT be uploading everything at once but more likely every few days so I can revise each chapter to make the transition from stress release to legitimate fan fiction. So next is a disclaimer and then the prologue which is an initial explanation for the new characters existence in the story.
Another thing is I actually wanted to give a more in depth experience to the story so I made some images that I produced like for example the armor I use is largely based off a video game and I just really admired it to the point where I used it in the story
(I know it's sad but I think you'll understand why I liked it so much and I also provided an explanation as to why it was designed the way it was and why I wore it in the first place)
I also photoshopped some images to help visualize things better so I haven't yet decided if I'm going to include those since they're photoshopped. (poorly)
I'm gauging reaction here so depending on how people like it will determine whether or not I will continue to upload the chapters.
I'm sure everything I've written is extremely confusing so just read it and decide how you like it. (It's better if you've seen the movie)
Disclaimer:
I do not own the design of the armor used by my character in this work nor do I own any of the fictional weapons used by him, the weapons shown to be used by him are owned and designed by Treyarch and the armor is owned by Bethesda.
I made this for fun originally that's why I used whatever I wanted and I'm in no mood to change it so those are the copyright holders, also I do not own the story I have somewhat parodied/modified all rights go to
Han Sang Ho who is the original director of the story.
This is not a remake but an expansion of the universe with one new character and retold from this character's perspective but all the elements of the original story remain mostly unchanged.
I probably went overboard with this disclaimer but I'm terrified of copyright infringement.
So to recap other than the modified elements of the story I own virtually nothing of it.
Prologue
The year was 2023 and science had become more like magic than reality. time travel had been achieved through the discovery of the fabled "Graviton" that we used to alter the quantum foam that comprised the cosmos, using these particles we could bend time and even use them to make us immortal. Throughout the clamor and hype I was just an aspiring paleontologist who had been selected for the most monumental journey ever undertaken by humanity. an anomaly had been found. and we decided to use our new found time travel knowledge to investigate. We had discovered a family of Tarbosaurs (the Asian cousin of the Tyrannosaurus Rex) that had unusually large cavities in their skulls, indicating an astounding, possibly human level of intelligence. So we utilized a space cruiser known as the Venator, which was specially modified to blast through time itself to use as a central command.
With all the preparations made they presented me with a specialized armor suit for protection against the hostile creatures that lived there as well as keeping foreign contaminates like human germs out of the past, the suit came with a graviton fusion regulator that preserved my body systems in a time stasis bubble, rendering me immortal, this was because I was to spend up to 25 years until this dinosaur was fully grown and deemed fit to be taken to the 21st century (after his or her fossil had been replicated so it would be found in the first place of course). The rest of the crew would be immortalized in a stasis bubble on the ship, of course though I would not be on the ship.
I was presented with my suit, I raised my eyebrow.
"Looks a little demonic" I said.
"We think it will make you a bit scarier, ward off potential threats". Said commander smith.
"If you say so." I said,
"Go ahead try it on." Said smith.
"Ok." I replied cautiously as I stepped into the frame that had opened revealing a human sized space. The frame enveloped me in metal, The exoskeleton granted me nearly superhuman powers like increased strength and speed.
Then an attendant walked in, i evidently scared her so bad she jokingly enacted revenge on me by coining a nick name for me that would stick for a long time. General Night Terror. With my new suit and nick name we arrived at the year
75,647,549 B.C. We were sent down as a squad to identify the mother of our target and also to get a general study on the first live dinosaurs ever observed. We were careful to avoid mud lest our footprints be preserved and found by humans in the future. we tracked down the mother of our objective and were able to implant a brain implant that would allow her to understand us and vice versa and told her everything, to our surprise she was extremely intelligent and confirmed that she had a clutch of eggs, I was sent to verify the HVI (high value individual) while the rest of the squad was sent back the ship. It was night fall by this point and an unusually large full moon had risen over the horizon. The clutch of eggs or rather the one egg that had survived was hatching, I watched as a squeaking little dinosaur emerged from the egg, I took an
X-Ray and confirmed the skull structure matched perfectly. He had spots all over his snout, to which his mother right then and there named him, speckles, I ensured he was healthy and informed his mother I would return on his 1st birthday and would stay with him and his family until adulthood and then would take them to the 21st century. "I'll be waiting" she replied. I flew off with the jets in my exoskeletons feet, and boarded the Venator. I then awaited and studied until the day when my true mission would begin. I would be tasked with protecting speckles and his family alone. And I was more ready than Id ever been.
So that was the prologue I want to get some feedback before I decide whether or not to continue uploading the story, so any comments are helpful (but please don't be unnecessarily harsh) and I am totally open to revising future chapters based on suggestions, thanks for reading! also I have a couple of visual aids that I will upload as soon as I can (new users must wait 24 hours before using the image manager)
one more thing I wanted to keep this relate able to current events (you'll see why in later chapters if I do end up continuing the story) so I did Throw a bit of realism as far as technology goes to the wind but that's why i listed this as a Sci-fi story.
P.S I'm still new to this so I might be doing a couple things wrong.
