My first Pride and Prejudice fanfiction…I hope you enjoy

My first Pride and Prejudice fanfiction…I hope you enjoy. This is all set when they are in high school. If you don't like the idea of them cussing, then I suggest you don't read this story. 90 of teenagers cuss, so I thought I'd make this a little more realistic.

Chapter 1: The New Guys

"Elizabeth!" a blond to-be-junior called to her twin sister. "Lizzie, where are you?"

"Over here, Jane!" Elizabeth called. She had long, wavy, reddish-brown hair that came down to the middle of her back. She was 5'7", and had a very athletic body. Her sister, Jane, on the other hand, had light blond hair that came to her shoulders, she was 5'5", and had more of a petite body. They were nothing alike but they still loved each other very much.

"Liz, two new guys are coming to our school!" Jane squealed. "I'm so excited!"

"Whoohoo, yippee, hurray, I'm really looking forward to it." Elizabeth said sarcastically.

"Aww…come on, be more enthusiastic!"

"I don't know why you work yourself up about a couple of guys. I don't get what's so great about them anyway. They're jerks who just care about themselves." Elizabeth replied.

"But they're handsome, and strong, and--" Elizabeth rolled her eyes at her.

"And conceited, and selfish, and stuck-up. Oh, don't you just love them?" she said, clasping her hands in mock excitement.

"Whatever. You are so unfeeling."

"No…I'm just not stupid enough to believe in true love…at least not with those pigs. Maybe there is a guy somewhere who isn't like that, but if there was, he'd be taken."

"So…are you going to become lesbian on me?" Jane said jokingly. Elizabeth shoved her.

"Are you kidding me? I would never ever, EVER, turn out like Lindsay Lohan. Yeah, I like some guys that aren't complete and total jerks, but I don't obsess over two new ones coming to our school."

"Yeah, but I was still getting to the best part! They're moving in just a few miles away, at that old estate called Netherfield." Jane was almost jumping with excitement.

"Seriously? Nobody can afford that place!"

"Well, seems like someone can. And this is great, we'll finally have neighbors!"

"So…what's their last name?" Lizzie asked. She wasn't that interested in them, but she was curious. They lived on a farm in the middle of nowhere, and they hadn't had neighbors for a VERY long time.

"Not name, names. Bingley and Darcy. The Bingley's are the ones that own the estate, but the Darcy kid just lives with them. I can't remember their first names, but I'm really excited to meet them."

"Just like you're excited to start school tomorrow. You're crazy." Elizabeth said matter-of-factly.

"You know you're excited, too. It's our junior year, and that means prom for us!" Jane loved dressing up, so prom was perfect for her.

"Yeah, I'm really excited about prom. You know I hate dressing up. Anyway, all the guys will be falling at your feet, begging for a dance." Lizzie pretended to be some random guy in love with Jane.

"Please, fair maiden, dance with me! I beg of you!" That made Jane and Elizabeth start laughing hysterically. Elizabeth wiped a few tears from her eyes that had slipped while she was rolling around on the ground.

"Liz, you want to go so you can make trouble. I heard from a senior that we get Mrs. Sawyer this year. I heard she has so much Botox that she looks like Michael Jackson."

"Nah, that can't be possible. But it will be fun annoying her." Lizzie smirked.

"Just try not to get detention every single day." Jane said, smiling.

"Hey, what are you smiling about? That's a serious matter. I probably will get detention every day, considering we still have the same detention teacher, or whatever you call them. If I get detention one day I will tick him off so that I have it every day. But then he'll kick me out…hey, I like where I'm going with this." Lizzie pretended to be in deep thought.

"Don't try to get any ideas, Lizzard, we don't want you getting suspended on the first day, do we?"

"Actually…"

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"So Will, I hear there's a few girls that live a couple miles down the road from us. Do want to visit them later today?" Charlie Bingley asked his best friend, Will Darcy.

"No, we'll meet them at school tomorrow. We don't have to waste time meeting them now." Will replied coldly.

"Aww…Will, you don't have to be such a jerk. It would be nice to know some people going to the same school as us before we started school. Maybe they could show us around the school."

"Yeah, but they live on a farm, and I hate the smell of farms." Will said dryly.

"C'mon, Will. Okay, I bet you 20 bucks that you can't go to their house and say hi without turning back." Charlie knew Will wouldn't back down on this. He didn't care about the money, but he never said no to competition.

"You're on." Was all Will said, and then he walked out the door and got in his car. He drove down to the Bennet's house (though he didn't know that was their last name yet) and parked his car next to their long driveway. Then he walked almost all the way up the driveway when he stopped. He saw two girls about his age talking in their backyard. He didn't know why, but he wanted to listen.

"Liz, two new guys are coming to our school! I'm so excited!" a pretty blond-haired girl practically squealed to the other girl. He figured they were talking about him and Charlie so he decided to keep listening.

"Whoohoo, yippee, hurray, I'm really looking forward to it." Will heard the voice of the other girl dripping with sarcasm. Her voice sounded like that of an angel. It was smooth and clear and hinted with laughter. He wondered if her face was a beautiful as her voice. It was. She looked like the most beautiful creature on the Earth to him. She had long brunette hair, bright green eyes, and she had a few freckles on her nose. She looked like she smiled a lot, and when she did smile, it was a wide, brilliantly white smile that showed off rows of perfect teeth. He listened to more of their conversation, but was mostly paying attention to the brunette.

"Elizabeth, remember what you did to Ms. Kessler? That was hilarious!" the blond-haired girl said.

"I know. I got suspended for a week. First I wrote on the board that she loved screwing our principal, and she didn't know who that was, but then she figured me out when I sawed through the chair leg and made it look normal so when she sat down she fell over. She was really ticked off and threatened to give everyone detention for a week if they didn't tell who it was. Finally that nerdy David kid told on me. I beat the shit out of him the next day." The brunette laughed at the memory. Will smiled at the thought of a girl getting in so much trouble. It was usually only guys that got suspended for that long.

"Wait, I think I hear rustling. Kitty! Lydia! Stop spying on me and Jane!" the brunette yelled. Will realized that they thought he was their sisters, and that the brunette would probably be coming this way in a matter of seconds, so he took off, jumped in his car, and sped back to Charlie's.

"Shit, shit, shit! I hope she didn't see me…"

"Will! Did you do what I asked?" Charlie asked, a smug look on his face.

"Well, I tried to, but they thought I was an intruder so I ran off." Will lied. It was partially true, but not completely.

"So…you lose. Pay up!" Charlie smirked.

Will pouted and handed Charlie a 20 dollar bill. "Whatever."

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"Hurry up, Lizzie! We're going to be late!" Jane called to her half-asleep sister.

"Jane, it's only 5:45. We don't have to be at school until 7:00." Lizzie tiredly said to her sister. "And it only takes 20 minutes to get there. So wake me up at 6:15."

Jane came over and yanked her sister out of bed. "I don't think so. We have to be there early today to get our schedules, and we have to look really good."

"Fine." Lizzie mumbled angrily to Jane, who was already dressed and ready to go. She was wearing a light blue poodle skirt that came down right past her knees, and she was wearing a white button up blouse with a matching blue shirt under it, and some white flats. She had pink lip gloss on, light blue eye shadow, pink blush, and some mascara on. Her hair was curled, and she had put some sparkles in it. All in all, she looked stunning.

"I get to dress you up today, Liz." Jane said smugly to her sister, pulling out a white skirt and green blouse. "This should fit nicely."

"No way in hell am I ever going to wear that." Lizzie got up, pulled out some brown Bermuda shorts, black long sleeved under armor, and a dark green shirt that had a black skull on it. "This is what I'm wearing." After she took a quick 5 minute shower she pulled on the shorts, put the black under armor on, and put the green shirt over it. Then she pulled up her naturally curly hair and put it in a ponytail, a few wisps coming out and going down the side of her face. She barely put any make-up on because she thought it made her look like a whore, and it just didn't fit her that well. She put some pink lip gloss on, a little bit of blush, a little mascara, and some sparkles around her eyes instead of eye shadow.

"There, I'm done." Jane rolled her eyes at her sister's stubbornness. Couldn't she at least wear something nice today? It was the first day of school for God's sake!

"Okay, whatever. Let's go get some breakfast." Jane said, already walking down the stairs. She almost fell over as Lizzie breezed past her and jumped off the stair case with 4 steps left. Sometimes Jane just didn't get her. How could she have so much energy?

"Ha, ha! I got the Cookie Crisp, slowpoke!" Lizzie yelled at her sister.

"I don't care. You know I hate those cereals. They have so many carbs! You're going to get fat from that, you know?" Jane replied, disgusted.

"You care WAY too much about your weight. You could gain some weight. Anyway, I exercise it off."

"Yeah, whatever." Jane said as she pulled out some Total cereal.

"How can you eat that stuff? It tastes like sawdust." Elizabeth wrinkled her nose.

"How do you know what sawdust tastes like? Oh yeah, when we were four you thought it would be fun to taste it." Jane smirked.

"It didn't taste that bad. It didn't really taste like anything."

"Still, your food has like 500 calories and way too much sugar." Jane didn't understand how 500 calories could appear appealing.

"Hey, you're the one who woke me up a 5:45! I need the energy!" Elizabeth defended.

"Just hurry up and eat! We have to leave in 10 minutes." Elizabeth rolled her eyes.

"Whatever you say, mom." She muttered.

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"Come on, Charlie, why do we have to go early?" Will complained.

"Because, we have to see the school before we actually start. How are we supposed to know where our classes are?" Charlie replied, annoyed.

"It's called we look at our schedules. They show the room number, dumbass." Will said, doing the retard sign.

"Just shut up. I have to concentrate on driving."

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"We're finally here…and we're 30 minutes early. Why couldn't I sleep in again?"

"Stop complaining. We're here, and that's not going to change. So just be quiet." Jane said sternly.

"You know you're only 2 minutes older than me. That doesn't mean you have a right to boss me around." Elizabeth said, ticked off.

"Yeah, but I'm a lot more mature than you are, so I do have a right to boss you around."

"Let's just go inside." Elizabeth mumbled; already out of the car and walking up to the front doors of the high school. When she walked in she saw her best friend, Charlotte Johnson.

"Yo, Char!" she called, running up to her. "Whazup?"

"Lizzie, you really need to stop talking like that. You need to talk more civilized." Charlotte said. Elizabeth pretended to act scared and backed away.

"They got you too! Not my dear, dear Charlotte, too! Please tell me they haven't brainwashed you into acting like a civilized lady! Please, noooooo!" Elizabeth cried.

"Liz, you're making a fool of yourself. And my mom thought I'd get a boyfriend if I was more girly."

"You can't become girly! We made an oath!" Elizabeth said, her eyes pleading.

"In second grade, Liz! We're juniors for god's sake! We need to act more civilized!" Charlotte tried to make her understand.

"Since when did juniors act civilized? I see Stacey making out with pretty much any hot guy she sees. Is that civilized?"

"Well, no…but still!"

"You're just like Jane…trying to turn me girly. Not gonna happen, sister. I will stand separate and strong!" Elizabeth put her hand over her heart and saluted.

"Yeah, whatever, Liz. Hey, Anne, wait up!" Charlotte called to a girl down the hall and ran after her.

Elizabeth pretended to sniffle. "My friends leaving me already? I thought we would last at least 5 more minutes. Oh, what will I do?" she wailed in a mock voice.

"What are you crying about, my dear Lizzie?" Thomas Collins walked up to her. Oh, god.

"YOU!" she yelled and ran off down the halls toward Jane. He really needed to leave her alone. Why can't he stalk someone else? She saw Jane talking to a guy who had red hair and bright blue eyes. He seemed really friendly, but his partner looked like he was in living hell. Which school could be at times.

"Hey, Janie, who are you talking to?" Elizabeth called to her sister, who seemed like she was already in love with the guy.

"Oh, hey, Liz. This is Charlie Bingley. Charlie, this is my sister, Elizabeth Bennet." Jane introduced them, while still staring at Charlie.

"Call me Liz. But who's that Mr. Friendly sulking next to you?" She said sarcastically.

Charlie laughed. "Oh, that's my friend, William Darcy."

"Ah," she curtsied "not very nice to meet you, Mr. Darcy." She said in a British accent.

"The feeling is mutual." He said coldly. Elizabeth just stared at him incredulously.

"What?" he asked, confused by her staring at him.

"What the hell does that mean?"

"God, I learned that in fourth grade. It means I feel the same way. In other words, it's not very nice to meet you either." He snapped.

"Looks like someone woke up on the wrong side of the bed." Elizabeth muttered.

"Charlie, can we go talk to someone other than this annoying girl?" Meanwhile, Charlie had been cracking up.

"Aww…come on Will, she's not that bad. I can tell you already like her."

Will face immediately turned bright red. "I do not! She's an annoying bitch!"

"Calling me a bitch, oh King of all Asses?" Elizabeth said in her annoying British accent.

"Stop talking like that! It's really fucking annoying!" Will yelled.

"Will, you know you love it." Charlie was still set on making him embarrassed.

"Yeah, at least I'm not staring at her sister non-stop like you." Will got him back.

"Hey, it's not my fault she's incredibly hot." Charlie said sheepishly, shrugging. Jane's face turned red.

"Come on, Charlie, let's go." Will said, dragging him away from Jane.

"Well, he seemed very friendly." Elizabeth said to Jane.

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By the way, the DS is my borderline since borderline isn't working for me right now. Anyway, there's my first chapter. Not very good, I know, but it gets more interesting later on. I decided to mix things up a bit, so I made Jane and Lizzie twins, and I made Lizzie have green eyes. Not a big change, but still. And Will and Charlie are both going to be juniors, too. Well, I hoped you enjoyed. Please review.