This is my first story on fan fiction so give me the hard critism its an old story im trying to revive from an idea started 4 years ago so its a little fuzzy so bear with me.
Chapter 1
Beep, Beep is heard throughout the room only accompanied by the slight sounds of groans and a hand slapping some wood. "Ah damn, turn off already. Ah ha snooze yes." Besides this human all around the room is crammed with clothes furniture, on the wall is painted symbols and posters. It's a disaster this is my room or as I would call it my hovel. I'm Garrett just another junior that goes to Peyton high school. Every morning is the same I get up scrounge something to eat for breakfast, crank up the stereo to wake my sister and her boyfriend in the next room ha ha. That always gets me in a good mood. Nothing out of the ordinary I play some Xbox and never watch the time so I always end up sprinting to the bus. I walk down the aisle to seat thirteen and wait till the next stop where my friend Kaylee gets on. "Hey Kaylee your crazy," I yell when she get son bus.
"Hey Garrett how's your morning going," she says kind of squeaky like. If you would describe Kaylee is she has brown slightly curly hair and big like grapefruit shaped but a very nice personality.
"Not much, I can't wait for tonight though it's going to be sweet"
"Huh."
"No one told you well then," smiling a big grin and sitting up to get comfortable. "Its simple really a whole bunch of us is going to play games on Xbox Live, I finally get to play with Sarah." As I say I turn red and grow a large grin on my face.
"Oh Garrett that's all you care about is that Sarah is Going to be playing"
"Ya and so what I got my priorities, I'm not the one that carries pink handcuffs incase I get arrested by Officer David," Saying with a grin and poking her backpack.
She quickly puts her hands on her backpack. "NO that's where your wrong I am willing to make a citizens arrest he he." She stretches her neck toward me with eyes blaring.
"Whatever," muttering as I turn my head to look out the Bus window. It was the middle of March and the sun was barely coming over the mountains to show the barren plains of the town. We pasted through the town dropping off the middle school. Sighing at the sight that school used to be the high school. As we drove away I get my normal flash backs of everything that happened in there. Going about another mile just out of town we pass the football field and turn on the dirt road to our school. It was a building that reminded me of Lego's plain colors block shape no grass and a cracking sidewalk. As I step off the bus I look over toward the student parking lot to see Sarah and Stephanie walking up to the main door. I run over there screaming, "hey guys what you two up to", keeping my main attention on Sarah.
"Just another day I suppose," says Stephanie, I remember having a crush on her she was quite slender figure, but was too quiet for my taste.
"You guys excited bout tonight!" I added
"I suppose I'm not sure its suppose to storm tonight," hesitant Sarah responds.
"Oh, well then it won't be for very long then don't worry nothing will happen except me winning the game woo!" yelling as I jump into the air. They turned and went inside including Kaylee. "What did I say something wrong?" Catching up with them only to be grabbed from the backpack and pulled back. Falling backward on the hard concrete stunned for a second I looked up and of course it was David. "Sup man just letting you know I am awake."
"Good then you'll be aware of how hard I beat you tonight in halo," says as he gives me a hand to help me back up. I grab it and hoist myself back up. "You know if everyone else is going besides you and me?"
"Yes David I'm sure they are all coming." We both walk into school and part ways for our classes through the eight hours I meet up with Caleb, Chris, and Amber. We all agreed 4 of us would be playing at my house while the rest would be at Kaylee house. The Rest of the day I swear I'd die of boredom, but I cheer when its time to go. The sound of a train bell lets all the students out of school and there is a swarm of bodies in one hallway trying to get their stuff to go home. I dip and duct to get to my bus to get my seat. It was a little windy outside and the sand was everywhere. "Curse this school for not having grass!" I yell into the air as the school buses are driving up the road and slowly stopping for each route. I'm the first one to run to my seat put my bag underneath and lie in the seat.
"Hey faggot," a voice said to me I look around to see Jake in the way back seat. This guy was barely a freshman and half my size. "What is wrong fag got nothing to say?"
Responding, "Nothing that your bitch-ass will understand now shut up and turn around." He glared at me and looked out the window.
"Whoa there man calm down," says kaylee's voice from behind me. I turn around and she is holding the pink handcuffs, as they sway back and forth, "do I have to arrest you for disturbing the peace." I watch them and look her feeling a shudder come up my spine.
"Nope but I think those things are disturbing my peace," pathetically responding. For the rest of the bus ride it was just meaningless conversations bout tonight and how much I own and this and that. The bus finally gets to my stop and I hastily jump off and start running for my house to get everything set up. "I only have an hour so much to do, oh wait" while looking in the house I turn and look at the driveway no vehicles in the driveway. "Good at least those two love birds aren't here." Quickly within 40 min I have all the munchies. I hear a feint sound of some doors slamming. I run to the window to see David, Caleb, Amber step up to the door. "Hey guys"
"Hey Garrett," they all say. Soon everybody found a spot to sit and grab a controller. A Couple of them are trying to match the Halo opening song and failing horribly at it. I walk over kick David out of my chair and sit down, sigh then log on.
"This should be fun but I'm not very good," whined Amber.
Unexpectily, Caleb says, "me either but it's just for chilling with all of us you know? We all keep chatting while we got our headsets on and got everything set up.
"Hey, somebody give me the phone I'm going to call to see what the others are up to?" I dial up Kaylee. "You guys ready yet? Your just bout there cool well we will be waiting."
"We are ready," four voices from the TV say in unison. Looking at the screen there was eight players all different colors with their assorted symbols to tell them apart.
"Ok all lets start this." I hit the button to start the count down. Bang out of no where outside it started to become very stormy. Continous lighting bolts was hitting the ground around our houses.
"Guys I don't thinkā¦" Sarah's voice was cut of for right when the timer hit zero a lightning bolt hit the telephone pull sending a immeasurable amount of energy to both houses. Everything went black.
The first chapter was how it always only i decided to change it a little and give it more detail into some character concepts and attitudes. (writer ALPHAScrubs)
