Hey Everyone this is my First Fanfic so PLEASE DON'T HATE appreciate or jus c yah way OUT…
Anyhow I was READING the NARUHINA FICs and was a bit UPSET…1st of all its fanfic can you make the girl more confident and not so dam vulnerable and dependent shheeesshhh,
Speaking/thoughts
"Wow, it's really been 2 years!"
It was a clear day, the sun was shining and the wind was blowing intertwined with the pink flower petals that came from the cherry blossom trees. There stood a pale figure with long black hair that almost looked blue it was a kunoichi that went by the name Hyuuga Hinata.
A lot has changed, her hair was much longer near her knees and her signature bangs had changed it had caused her forehead to much sweat now it was much longer close to her chin and swayed near the left eye tugged behind her ear. Her Jacket was no longer seen and there was nothing hiding her curvaceous figure she had the perfect hour-glass body that made every man's jaw drop to the floor and with it glares from their side (obviously other woman).
She had walked through the village hidden in the leaf known as Konaha, it seemed there was something big about to happen "maybe there's a festival coming up hhmm" she walked and saw a familiar ramen shop as she entered she was then greeted by an old man in a chefs hat name Teuchi and his daughter Ayame. "Welcome!" in unison
"Hinata" Ayame said in surprise. she went to give a friendly hug to the kunoichi. "oh my you look hot." hinata was smiling and returned the hug "thank you Ayame-chan but how did you know?" the young cook moved to see her friends face "silly its a girls intuition." ayame said with a wide grin.
" Oh Hinata-chan it's so good to see you back you've grown!"
"hey old man stop being perverted."
"Tch. I didn't mean it that way get back to work Ayame." an angry yet embarrassed Teuchi said
"Oh just one question if i could please have your time." Ayame turned waiting to hear her friends question." whats going on around the village?" a laugh was all she hear as a first response Hinata's eyes wer confused and as Ayame kept it together she told her friend "In a Few days it will be that knuckle head Naruto's Inaugration!" Hinata held a smile and thought " I see. Naruto you have your dream now I'm happy for you" behind the smile there was a small bit of sadness.
Hinata had walked towards a Mansion known by all one of the most Respective Clans and is being runned by the head household a nobleman named Hiashi Hyuuga, the land was hyuuga territory and was a fourth the size of the village. She stood with her head held high and took in a deep breath.
Knock. Knock. Knock
The door creaked just a little and was open there she was greeted by a man. "Yes. May I help you Miss?"
Much to the man surprise he didn't know who she was "who is this beauty." he can tell that she is part of the hyuuga family but from which household?
"Ko-kun have you really forgotten me?" the man stared at the women one more time and thought "Dam did I have a relationship with her? Nah she's too hot hhmmm she does look familiar." At the moment Hinata grabbed out a cinnamon bon and asked "would you like some?" at the moment tears overflew the man's face for the only kindness ever shown too ko was that of hers.
"La-Lady Hi-Hinata?"
"Yes about time you remembered!"
Ko had done a formal bow but heard a sighed and felt his shirt was tugged up..he was embraced by the rightful heiress "Oh Ko you are one of my most trusted friends please Never bow to me again ok?" Ko was still teary and hugged the long haired beauty back. "Ko I have come to see Father." She said without fear but out of courage she knew the day she came back is the day she would fight her Father and take her place amongst the Hyuuga clan.
Lol so you'll see why she has to fight Hiashi in a quick Flash back and why i havent introduced the rest of the konoha 12 how ever its my fanfic its my story lol see yah soon for sure!
