A/N: It's from Cloud's Point of view!!


I'm falling apart

bit by bit,

it's just the start

now I can not quit.

Keep telling myself

day by day,

my own worthless self

it's my price to pay.

I force myself on

step by step,

but you are far gone

in memories I've kept.

The sadness slips through

tear by tear,

hating what I knew

my life's become unclear.

I think about you

night by night,

my feelings are true

my heart once took flight.

But now it seems dead

beat by beat,

as heavy as lead

I wander this street.

Hoping for a glance

sight by sight,

your eyes were a trance

dissolved by that damned fight.

I've given up hope

piece by piece,

my heart can not cope

my emotions will cease.

But my love for you

shard by shard,

is nothing untrue

leaving my life scarred.

My feelings you found

one by one,

you came with no sound

'Till my shell was undone.

You showed me the way

path by path,

my heart was astray

you corrected its path.

My feelings came out

word by word,

nothing was in doubt

I took flight like a bird.

My mind was a haze

kiss by kiss,

left me in a daze

our hearts were pure bliss.

Darkness crept ahead

cloud by cloud,

my life filled with dread

thunder rumbled loud.

Heaven shadowed dawn

hour by hour,

by then you were gone

anguish fell in a shower.

The steel edge ripped through

drop by drop,

red glistened like dew

the river didn't stop.

It flowed from my wrist

trail by trail,

my pale skin it kissed

my dimise can't fail.

Because without you

cut by cut,

my life flows out through

a red slash taped shut.

So here I will lay

strife after strife,

and silently pray

God takes my useless life.


A/N: So what did you guys think?- It's my first real stab at writing poetry so any reviews or favs will help me out a lot. Let me know what you think about it! Oh and I have NOTHING against people who cut themselves or are depressed so please don't flame me for that. If it insults you that bad just let me know and I will take this down. But I hope you don't, I like this poem (

Thanks and have a great day!

Cranberry Crumpet