Hello Readers,

IMPORTANT! READ IT!

I re-posted it again because for some reason the last time I posted this it was deleted.

I want to tell you all this is an edited version of 'My Sensei's 14'.

I've been re-reading my current fanfictions and found them to be a bit childish, they also have a lot of grammar mistakes, wrong spellings, and wrong paragraph form thingy.

So I've edited it.

Don't worry! This is still the same story!

I might have just changed the dialogs and I'm terribly sorry to say that I might even change the pairing :(

I like ItachixNaru and all but I'm afraid I don't know how to write a good ItaNaru fic, plus their ages are different right so I don't really know how to pair them up.

Also if I made Itachi stay it'd be too Mary Sue.

I hope that these changes don't change your mind about this fanfiction, I like writing and I promise to update regularly from now on. School's just started so I'm still adjusting to the new life at school.

Plus…ummm…I get writers block a lot so there may be times when I won't update so regularly.

Oh I also changed Naruko's name to Naru.

Other than that I have nothing else to say.

Speech:

''brat'' – normal talking

'brat' – normal thinking

''brat'' – demon talking

'brat' – demon thinking

brat – flashback/memories

brat – jutsu

Warning:

Female Naruto

There may be some OOC-ness

May be a bit Mary Sue

Other than that No more!

Enjoy!


A little girl quietly walked down the busy road of Konoha with her head down.

Once the ANBU was done accompanying her as she shopped for supplies for her apartment she started to hear those hateful comments yet again. They thought she wouldn't hear them but she could, even if they were really quiet and weary about what they said; she could hear them whisper to one another.

''There goes that child.''

''It's a good thing she lives far from here, we know we can be safe.''

''There, you see her son? You shouldn't play with her got that?''

All the things they said about her behind her back hurt her.

She was just six; those words hurt, even if she didn't know what some of them meant, but the still hurt her because she knew they were bad, because they were talking about her.

As she walked towards her apartment she could feel them glaring at her. Their eyes held hatred, anger, sorrow and pain. She didn't know whether she caused it or they just hated her.

As she got to her apartment she broke down in tears like always.

'What did I do that makes them so mad?' She thought to herself.

'I don't even talk to them yet they hate me as if I caused some plague.' She cried.

The girl was thin and malnourished; she had shoulder length spikey blond hair, her normally bright and lively blue eyes were now red and puffy from crying.

Most six year old girls would be at home, while their mother prepared dinner and the father played with them after getting home for a mission. At night most girls would be told to take a shower and get ready for bed and slowly fall asleep as their mother told her a story about a ninja princess and a poor civilian. She never got that. She never felt the way a mother would ask you about your day, she never felt how a mother would sooth you as you cried. She never felt how a father would laugh at your silliness she never felt how they would tell you about a mission.

Her life was not one for a six year old girl.

She was always glared at and blamed for something she didn't even do let alone have knowledge of. She was always called names she didn't know the meaning of. She was always kicked out of stores when she would try to buy whenever the Hokage or the ANBU weren't around.

This was Uzumaki Naru's life.

She didn't know what she did to deserve this. She was already alone, wasn't that enough to satisfy those 'peace loving' villagers; knowing that there would be no one to take care of her, but apparently that wasn't enough. They still tormented her with their glares and hateful words. This wasn't the life a six year old girl was supposed to be living but no one could do anything about it, if she were to defend herself they'd be even angrier at her and torment her more or soon kill her.

The only thing, she supposed, keeping her alive was the Hokage's kindness towards her which she couldn't understand. She was grateful for his helpfulness, but even if he did help her she didn't see him as anything else but a generous old man. She wasn't mean, she just didn't want to trust to many people; she was afraid to get hurt.

Naru sighed as she walked over to her bed, but she never got there; because she fell unconscious on the floor.

Naru slowly opened her eyes; she had no idea what happened to her or why she blacked out. She looked around and immediately she felt something big was going to happen here, she just knew it.

She got to her feet and scanned the area. This wasn't the sewer where she originally thought she was; it didn't have an awful smell and the ceiling was much too high for it to be underground. She pushed the thought to the back of her mind and started walking ahead until she heard a loud purr at the end of the hall.

Once she got to the source of the purr she stared with wide eyes at what was in front of her; it was a cage that reached all the way to the top with two blood red eyes with black slits for pupils looking at her. She backed away at seeing the two eyes stare at her; she peered inside the cage and saw a massive shadow.

''Who are you?'' She questioned her voice a little shaky.

The shadow inside the cage stepped forward revealing a huge, orange fox.

The fox looked at the girl in front of him and scoffed.

''You are fairly close with Konoha's Hokage and yet you do not know who I am?''

Naru looked down. ''That's true, but I hardly see him and when I ask questions he changes the subject.'' She said.

The fox once again scoffed and muttered something to himself. Since she had no knowledge of what he was so how was he going to explain everything to her.

''I am the Kyuubi no Yoko. The most powerful bijuu in all the Elemental Nations.'' The fox proudly said.

Naru cocked her head to the side, ''Bijuu?''

The Kyuubi nodded, ''Right now there are currently nine, the Ichibi being the weakest and me the strongest.'' He explained.

''You see I was once imprisoned inside a human long before most of the villages were founded. My container's name was Uzumaki Mito.'' He said receiving a gasp from the little girl.

''Shodai Hokage-sama's wife?'' She asked earning a nod from the fox beast.

''Uzumaki Mito was my first container and when she was about to die my next container became a young girl with strange chakra: Uzumaki Kushina. But, just like Mito, Kushina hardly asked me for help, a very independent girl she was. Alas she died early.'' He said giving the child a weird look.

Naru looked down, but suddenly her head shot up so fast it was surprising it didn't get injured.

''Uzumaki?''

The Kyuubi smirked but nodded.

''Yes. So far I have only been imprisoned in an Uzumaki for they were the only clan that had enough chakra to handle me without losing their senses. Containers, also, must follower certain . . . rules'' He said.

''Rules?'' Naru asked cutely.

The Kyuubi nodded, ''The ideal container must be a new born child who's chakra coils have not yet formed yet, for an adult wouldn't be able to take the sudden surge of their own chakra and would end up releasing me. And they must have a large chakra supply when they grow up.''

Naru nodded her head, ''Why are you telling me this?'' She asked her brain had not yet processed why the fox was telling her this.

The Kyuubi sighed.

''Naru, Uzumaki Kushina was your mother. She died right after you were born because of someone extracting me from inside her during a container's weakest state.''

''Weakest state?'' Naru asked, her lips shaking from trying to control her emotions.

The Kyuubi nodded. ''Yes, the container of a bijuu is weakest during two times; when they are about to die or when giving birth. For Kushina it was the latter and the when the bijuu is extracted from its container the strain is too much for the human and the container dies; that's what happened to Kushina.'' He finished.

Naru looked shocked. Her mother was Uzumaki Kushina one of the toughest Kunoichis in history. And that's when things started to get a little bit clearer…

''Wait, if Uzumaki Kushina was my mother than my dad…'' She trailed off looking at the huge, orange fox.

The Kyuubi nodded, ''Yes. That means Namikaze Minato is your father he was also the one that sealed me inside of you.''

Naru's eyes widened, ''Wha-what?''

''He didn't do it because he wanted to he did it because he had to.''

''The one who extracted me from your mother was a powerful ninja. You must know Naru that every bijuu doesn't like to be imprisoned or turned into a weapon, every one of us wants to be free to cause havoc and chaos and I'm not lying. Once I was released I was transported to Konoha where I started destroying everything in sight. I hadn't been let out since Mito became my container and I did all the damage I could do but I didn't do it intentionally; I was controlled.''

Naru frowned slightly, ''Controlled?''

''Yes, the ninja was indeed strong if he was able to control me, the strongest of the bijuu. Your fatherstopped me by sealing me inside of you who were just born. The seal he used was one of his own creations; he summoned the shinigami, once I was sealed inside of you the shinigami took his soul.'' He explained.

''Wait, a while back you said 'were the only clan'. What happened to them?'' Naru asked.

The Kyuubi studied his container for a bit before answering the girl's question.

''Yes, I did say 'were'. You see, during the time when your mother was probably just at infant the Whirlpool Village was destroyed.''

Naru's eyes widened in shock.

''It was destroyed because most of the countries then feared their Fuinjutsu. It is believed that the surviving inhabitants of the village fled and took refuge in Konoha and Kirigakure.''

Naru has slight tears in her red puffy eyes. She looked down trying not to cry.

''So I did have a family.'' She mumbled quietly to herself, receiving a nod form the Kyuubi.

''I don't really wish to stay here forever without doing a thing so if you want I could train you.'' He offered.

Naru's eyes lit up.

''Train me?'' She asked to make sure.

''You will probably be starting the academy soon, so you will learn the basic ninja knowledge but a majority of the adults now I am inside your mind and will most likely try to fail you; trying to prevent you from becoming a ninja in fear of your bijuu getting out or you losing control.''

''It will be really slow and with my help you will rise through the ranks faster than any prodigy Konoha has seen.'' He said smugly.

''Ok, I want to train with you.'' Naru said slightly smiling.

The Kyuubi nodded and smirked; sure he wasn't very fund of humans but he had to do something to keep him from dying of boredom, and he was going to make her the most powerful being ever!


Okay Done!

What did you think of it?

I hope the changes weren't that much and didn't really differ from the original. SUPER SORRY for any remaining grammar mistakes and wrong spellings. I just hope you enjoyed the story.

I tried to make Kyuubi act a little bit more like a bijju and less like her best friend. Because in a majority of the fanfcts I read that involve the Kyuubi he's, somehow, helpful, kind, and has a friendship with Female Naruto. I found that a bit OOC.

I mean come one, a friendly nine tailed demon fox?

I know that was the original story but . . .

Naruto Dictionary

Bijuu- giant amounts of chakra

Ichibi- one tailed

Kirigakure- I think this is the 'Mist Village'? But I'm not that sure heheh sorry

Shodai Hokage- first fire shadow (leader of Konoha)

Thank You sooo much for reading!

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