Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, if I did Itachi and Naruto would have killed everyone already.

WOOT! I'm going to start my first story

anyways, basically dark Naruto, trained by an OC… not really it's Madara Uchiha
in chapter 309 page 3, when Sasuke meets Kyuubi, not a Mary sue

Also I need Help and a beta reader and someone to translate jutsu and give me Japanese OC names.

Btw anyone know how old was Sasuke is when the Uchiha clan was killed? If not I am going to put it when he is 9 and Itachi is 13.

Anyways… ON TO THE STORY!

Thought
Kyuubi speaking
Jutsu used in battle

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8 year old Naruto put up a note when he was walking to eat at Ichiraku ramen, It just seemed to find his eyes…
it was almost like fate, but it doesn't matter he doesn't believe in fate, because one day, he would show everyone to respect him and become Hokage. People would look up to him

His stomach growled.

That reminded him to that he didn't have lunch, a morning of pranks was tiring work. Pocketing the paper he picked up and started sprinting to his long awaited bowl of ramen.

Turning the corner he bumped into someone "OWWW!" he said. This person had dark onyx eyes, black hair (like Itachi's hair without the ponytail), wearing a black shirt with baggy black ninja pants. Rubbing his ears he replied "awfully loud aren't you?" the person was a little bit older than Naruto about 9.

"Umm gomen… "Then he started to shout "HI MY NAME IS UZAMAKI NARUTO AND I'm GOING TO BE HOKAGE WHATS YOUR NAME!"

"And rude too, my name is Uchiha Madara" (I don't know if Madara is a boys or girls name but in my story he's a boy)

"Hi nice to meet you and Bye!" Naruto said while running to Ichiraku ramen.

Hmm the Kyuubi child… interesting…This thought in the head of one Madara Uchiha walking home.

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During Class one day…

Iruka was giving a lecture on something about the 5 Shonobi nations when Naruto randomly ask
"Iruka-sensei why does it take so long to become a Shonobi?"

"Because it is hard work to become a Shonobi and one cannot just become one and Naruto"

"yes?"

"THAT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH WHAT I'm TALKING ABOUT SO SHUT UP AND PAY ATTENTION"

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In the forest
after Mizuki told Naruto to still the scroll

Naruto was learning Kage Bushin when Madara saw him. At first the young Madara came here to relax after a day of D-Ranked missions. Missions for a boy at age 9 were tiring even if it was D-ranked he was tired. Heh I'm supposed to be a Genius, tiring over silly missions like weeding gardens and catching cats. When he came into the clearing he saw the boy he met today Uzamaki Naruto, the one who was loud and annoying. Wearing an Orange jumpsuit that screamed "KILL ME"

"Hey Naruto, what are you doing out here with that scroll" from the kanji on it seems to be a forbidding scroll. Thought Madara

"Training of course! There's no short cut to becoming Hokage"

Even if Madara was tired, this boy seem to radiate energy making him feel like joining him, so he did
with the help of Madara, Naruto learned Kage Bushin easily, now to the next one jutsu on the scroll. It was to be used with the Kage Bushin, a skill where the clone would blow up, used for suicide and assassination missions. But after spending some time they both learned the technique.

Watching all this was the Hokage. It seems that both of them have found there first friend. Madara had always been a loner, and Naruto, well he had a fox sealed in him.

After all this Madara left, about a second later Iruka showed up.

"NARUTO WHAT ARE YOU DOING"

"Iruka-sensei do I get to become a ninja now? "

"What are you talking about?"

"Well Mizuki told me if I learned a jutsu from the scroll I would become a ninja and I LEARNED 2!"

Suddenly Mizuki appeared, chuckling he said "Well if it isn't Naruto the demon fox himself"
"MIZUKI DID YOU TRICK NARUTO INTO STEALING THE FORBIDDING SCROLL?" Iruka said

"of course no one would care if the demon child was locked up" Mizuki then faced Naruto. Naruto, do you know why everyone hates you?" He paused as Naruto's eyes widened. He had always wondered why everyone hated him "It is because you have the 9 tailed fox sealed within you! And now I will do everyone a favor and kill you!"

Mizuki threw a Fuuma Shuriken at Naruto only to be blocked by Iruka, Mizuki was stunned, and here a guy, whose parents were killed by the demon, protected him. Mizuki angrily shouted "Why do you protect the demon, don't you hate him for what he has done?" Iruka smiled as he replied "Of course I do, I hate Kyuubi" Naruto's eyes saddened, Naruto too shocked and everything he just heard he chose to remained quite. Iruka continued "But Naruto is not the demon he is just like you and me, human" Naruto's eyes lighted up, Naruto's emotion changed from shocked, confused, depressed, mad, sad, surprised to happy in about 5 minutes.

Taking this time to strike Mizuki tried to kick Iruka in the fast but was caught by a hand. Naruto's ice blue eyes stared into his "IF YOUDARE TOUCH IRUKA-SENSEI I WILL KILL U!" Kage Bushin no Jutsu

Naruto just started punching and kicking, after a few exploding clones Mizuki looked like chopped meat.

After Naruto finished beating Mizuki to a pulp,
He fell over from exhaustion. Iruka Started to carry him.

But in Naruto's mindscape he appeared to be somewhere, it was dark. Then a loud and deep voice said

"Hello Kit"

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Prologue only really short, chapters soon to come will be MUCH Longer
just need to get the thought out of my head for now.

Vote for pairings!

I'm thinking of Naru/Ino I will decide Madara's when Naruto's pairing is decided
NO YAOI!

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