Warning: This story contains a Mary-Sue character. I understand if you don't want to read it, but at least give it a chance.
This is my first time uploading a story so please excuse the way I write. Also, I'll be mixing English and some Japanese words I know. Italics will be translating what I want to say.
I will have Prince of Tennis' characters and scenes, which are created by Takeshi Konomi, and some of the other characters' and scenes' I made up.
Please comment and give some "specific" advices to make the story sound better.
Chapter 1: The New Transferred Student
It was lunchtime for the students in Seishun Academy, students were eating lunch and participating in their activities, when a 12-year-old girl with huge glasses that covers almost half of her face, have braided hair, wearing a white shirt and blue shorts, stepped into the gates of Seishun Academy. She walks toward to the school's door. There she met Horio and Ryoma.
The 12 year-old-girl asked Horio and Ryoma in English, "Excuse me, but where is the principal's office."
Horio was confused and replied, "Ehhh, what did you say?"
Ryoma spoke back in English, "The principal's office is straight ahead, make a right turn in the corner."
The girl answered in English to Ryoma, "Thank you!" In Japanese she told Horio "Arigatou (Thank you)!"
Then the girl went into the doors of Seishun Academy.
Horio asked Ryoma, "If that girl knows how to speak Japanese, then why did she speak English?"
Ryoma pulls down his cap and answered, "How should I know?"
Ryoma went back to the tennis court and Horio have to run to keep up with Ryoma.
"Wait up, Ryoma?" Horio yelled.
The girl with huge glasses and braided hair arrived in front of the principal's office.
The principal said, "You must be the new transferred student. We're happy to accept you, Hirugashi Kyoko."
Kyoko smiled and bowed, "Thank you for having me as a student here in Seishun Academy, I won't disappoint you."
Principal answered, "I know you won't. Why don't you start tomorrow, since it is already half a day already?"
Kyoko replied, "Hai (Yes)."
Kyoko walked away from the principal's office and walk around the campus. She walks all the way to the boys' tennis courts. There she saw Horio. Kyoko bow to Horio.
Kyoko told Horio, "Thank you for helping me getting to the principal's office."
Horio said with his hand on the back of his head, "Hehehe, of course, I've been here for a long time, I know where everything is."
Kyoko laughs, "Hai (Yes), I'll know who to find, if I ever need help again."
Horio blushed and put his hand behind his back and laughed. Kyoko looked behind Horio and noticed the regulars playing tennis. Inui and Kaidoh were playing against Eiji and Oishi. Kaidoh was hitting a Boomerang Snake and score a point. Eiji did acrobatic plays and Oishi did a Moon Volley. Momoshiro and Ryoma were against Takashi and Fuji. Ryoma serve with Twist Serve, Kawamura returned it with Two-Handed Hadoukyuu, Momoshiro did a Jack Knife, Fuji did a lob and Momoshiro returned it with Dunk Smash, and Fuji counters it with Higuma Otoshi.
Kyoko commented on the regulars, "My, my, the tennis players here have some talent."
Horio said, "Of course, our goal is to go to Nationals."
Then Arai noticed Horio talking to Kyoko, so he came.
Arai yelled, "Hey freshman, go pick up the balls." Arai looks at Kyoko and said, "And you, no outsiders are allowed."
Kyoko answered back, "Sorry, I'm new here so I don't know the rules. You shouldn't blame that person, I was just commenting about the talented tennis player you have. If I did anything wrong, please forgive me." Then Kyoko smiled.
Arai blushed "Uh, of course." Arai thought, "Why am I blushing for a little four eyes girl like her?"
Kyoko thought, "The boys over there look like they were having fun. I wonder if tennis is also fun for me."
Kyoko went to the opening door of the court and walked up to Ryuzaki-sensei.
Kyoko said to Ryuzaki-sensei, "Sorry if I'm rude, but may I play tennis too, even though I'm not in the club.
Ryuzaki-sensei look at Kyoko surprised "We don't usually let students that are not in the club play, but if you want to, you may. Who do you want to play?"
Kyoko smiled "I don't really care who I play with, just as long as I can figure out the rules of tennis."
Ryuzaki-sensei looks surprised again and looks around for a person that is not playing, "Arai, since you're not doing anything, why don't you play with this girl."
Arai looks shocked, "I have to play, with her?"
Ryuzaki-sensei sigh, "Hai (Yes)." Then she thinks "I wonder how well she plays if she doesn't know the rules."
Then Ryuzaki-sensei looks at Sakuno-chan, "Why don't you let her borrow your tennis racket, Sakuno? You're not playing tennis right?"
Sakuno gave Kyoko her tennis racquet. Kyoko thank her and walks up to the tennis court Arai was on. Ryuzaki-sensei was the referee.
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "Since…What's your name?"
Kyoko looks at Ryuzaki-sensei and smiled, "My name is Hirugashi Kyoko."
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "Since Kyoko is a guest she will serve first."
Kyoko looks at Ryuzaki-sensei again "Umm, I don't really know the rules that well. Can Arai-senpai serve first?"
Ryuzaki-sensei answered, "Fine, Arai, you serve."
Arai bounced the ball, "Are you ready? Even if you're a girl, I'm not going easy on you. So, here it comes."
The ball came toward Kyoko's right and with a forehand swing; the ball hit over the net and goes toward the doubles' alley.
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "Out! Arai, 15-love."
Kyoko looks confused, "But I hit the ball inside."
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "You can only hit doubles' alley if you're playing doubles."
Kyoko answered, "I see, all I have to do now is try to avoid the alleys." Kyoko gripped the racquet tighter, "Please continue."
Arai jumped to make a serve, "Here it goes, freshman."
Kyoko ran to her left and did a backhand return; it hit the net and rolls on it until it falls into Arai's side.
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "15-all."
Kyoko clasp her hands and laugh out of enjoyment "I score a point."
Arai gets irritated and shouted, "Don't get it in your head. I'll score the next one."
Kyoko answered, "We'll see."
Then the regulars came to see the match. Eiji jumped on Ryoma.
Eiji said, "Waaa! It looks like a freshman girl is trying to have a match with Arai. But doesn't she look a bit weird with those big glasses."
Oishi scolded, "Eiji!"
Eiji apologized, "Sorry, Oishi."
Arai serves again. Kyoko hit it back, Arai returned it, Kyoko returned it and it hit the line.
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "Out! Arai, 30-15."
Kyoko began to look puzzled, "But it's in by .5 millimeters."
Ryuzaki-sensei asked, "What do you mean?"
Inui answered the question, "That statement is true if you calculate the angle of the racquet, the speed and spin of the ball."
Kyoko looks at Inui smiling, "I didn't know another person around my age could calculate that well too."
Everyone was surprised, "Ehh, what? She calculates all that moves in her head."
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "If that's true, then Arai, 15-30."
Arai continues to serve until Kyoko won the first match.
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "Match! Kyoko 1-0. Kyoko to serve."
Kyoko answered, "Hai (Yes)."
Kyoko did a perfect twist serve after 2 turns. Everyone was surprised.
Horio, Kachiro, and Katsuo stammered, "That...that's twist serve."
Eiji laughs, "Ochibi (little kid), it looks like she copied your move."
Kyoko serve the next serve normally. Arai returned it to the farther left of Kyoko. Kyoko ran and while balancing on her hand, she returned a backhand serve and scored a point. Again everyone was shocked.
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "Kyoko, 15-love."
Tomo and Sakuno were surprised, "Ehhh, Eiji-senpai's acrobatic moves."
Fuji chuckled, "Looks like she copied your acrobatic moves too, Eiji."
Eiji was mad and wave his arms madly, "Acrobatic moves are a lot harder than it looks, nyaa."
Kyoko serve normally again. Arai did a lob. Then she jumps and did a Dunk Smash.
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "Kyoko, 30-love."
Kaidoh chuckles, "Looks like your move is too easy Momoshiro, that a little girl like her can copy it."
Momoshiro was mad, "Urusai! (Shut up)"
Kyoko serve again, Arai return it, and then she returns it with a Boomerang Snake.
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "Kyoko, 40-love."
Momoshiro snickered, "Who's laughing now?"
Kaidoh was angry, "You want to fight?"
Momoshiro became irritated and grabs Kaidoh's shirt, "You want to fight?"
Tezuka said, "You guys should stop fighting and observe the girl."
Kaidoh and Momoshiro said at the same time, "Buchou (Captain)!"
Throughout the rest of the game she uses Moon Volley, Two-Handed Hadoukyuu, Jack Knife, and Higuma Otoshi. When she also did Tezuka Zone (even though she never saw Tezuka did it) everyone was shocked.
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "Game and match! Kyoko won, 6-3."
Arai, sweating madly, collapsed in defeat and tiredness from the game.
Kyoko bow to Arai, "Thank you for the game, it was a fun match. I hope we play again sometimes."
Arai looks irritated and look away, "Whatever!"
Kyoko turn and bow to Ryuzaki-sensei, "Thank you for letting me play a game."
Ryuzaki-sensei said, "It was interesting to see an inexperienced person like you can play tennis very well."
Kyoko smile and answered, "Thank you for the comment."
Then Kyoko went to Sakuno, "Thank you for letting me use your racquet."
Sakuno shook her head, "It's no problem at all."
Then Kyoko went out the gate and goes toward Ryoma and the regulars.
Kyoko tell Ryoma in English, "Thank you very much for your help today." Then she bow to the regulars and said in Japanese, "Well, it looks like it is time for me to go now. I'll see you guys tomorrow." Then she wave good-bye and left.
Momoshiro look at Kyoko and back at Ryoma, "What did she told you?"
Ryoma answered, "Thank you very much for your help today."
Momoshiro chuckles and pounced on Ryoma "Are you sure that's all she says?"
Eiji pounced on Ryoma too, "What did you help her in?"
Ryoma answered, "Hai, that's what she said. I only told her where the principal's office is.
Then Ryoma got away from Momoshiro and Eiji and goes to the vending machine to get Ponta.