Hey guys, this the start of the rewrite I promised, hope you guys like the new version a bit better.
Bear in mind that I am keeping the characters the same, there are too many Warframe crossovers that have them so serious, these are people; they have thoughts, dreams, hopes and fears. So you have been fore-warned about this being a slight crack story, with some stupid moments that will have you scratching your head.
I own nothing in this story aside the characters I've made.
Intro music By I Prevail: Scars
In the heat of the moment when fear has you frozen, (Pheron is encased in a stasis-pod, before the camera pans around to see the void)
You're crashing and burning when life's at its coldest, (Shepard is fighting with the rest against waves of husks and Geth on the Citadel, with the rest of the team fighting behind her, all wearing helmets)
Don't fall too far from who you are (Pheron and the rest of the Tenno are running through the dojo to get to archwings)
They can cut us but we'll wear our scars, (they all launch out of the dojo like a swarm, twisting and turning the darkness of space before turning to the Citadel and launch a barrage of missiles, arming themselves with different weapons, Pheron has a centaur in his colours of black and red)
In the heat of the moment when fear has you frozen, (the Tenno force pass the Destiny Ascension and break through the Geth lines, with several dozen squads pulling and entering dog fights with Geth fighters and ships)
You're crashing and burning when life's at its coldest, (Shepard is now fighting Saren, Sovereign is in the back ground looking at the several thousand unknown ships swarming through Geth lines through the external cameras of the Citadel)
Don't fall too far from who you are (the arms of the Citadel open with Shepard and he rest of the Normandy ground team looking at the mass of colour that are the archwing, not noticing Saren turning into a husk version of him. Pheron sees the flashing lights in the council chambers and manoeuver through the tendrils of Sovereign)
Try to tear us apart but know that we'll wear our scars (Shepard sees the bright light both behind her and in front, before deciding to duck. Pheron then crashes through the window and then boosting to the now leaping husk and slamming into it with the shield part of his centaur and quickly switches his grattler [basic skin colour but with black energy/lights] and begins to fire)
Try to tear us apart but know that we'll wear our scars! (the husk is quickly destroyed under the explosive barrage from the weapon, Pheron then then sets down on the floor and walks to Shepard and just as the vacuum shields activate leans towards her with a arm out stretched, the wings of the archwing fluctuating causing it to gain a true wing like quality. Shepard looks up only to see a glowing figure of black and red with wings of white energy spread behind it before hearing Sovereign exploding and having several pieces of it falling towards them)
Shepard groans as the painful moments of waking after being knocked unconscious, hands coming up to the cracked visor of her helmet. She hears several people calling for her but they sound muddled, distant and distorted with one sounding similar to Anderson.
Lowering her hands from her face, she quickly noted that she was under some rubble and wreckage, oil and various other fluids had begun to pool around her, slowly inching towards her. As her eyes roamed round the floor of the area, she noticed a pair of feet, armoured feet clad in a strange form of organic metal before her eyes travelled up similarly armoured legs.
From the knee up until mid-thigh were a set of three diamond like shaped, pointed rings. Eyes moving up again she noticed that attached to the beings hips were two pouches full of knives oddly reminding of Japan back on earth. The waist was fairly normal, aside from where the hips looked like he pelvis was a bit more expanded and protruding, next was a series of patterns, raised armour and lights that reminded her of ribs from a skeleton.
As she took note of more facts and designs around the person who had saved her life, she noticed that they were holding up the large piece of wreckage around with a strange mix of sword and shield. It expanded from their arm and hand with several metal plates to form the shield whilst two pronged blades formed the sword.
"Um… Lady, now that you're awake could you please move?" came a male voice from the figure of the now confirmed male that had saved her from being squashed. "No, really, I mean I'm not sure how much longer I can hold this safely!"
"Oh, um, sure…," Shepard trailed off as she wormed her way to the nearest gap to her, still feeling a bit groggy.
As soon as her feet left the death trap to be, the sound of twisting metal and the scent of melting materials reached. Even through the helmet it was strong enough to be noticed, that or her helmet was damaged in some way.
Slowly but surely a pair of glowing blades cut their way through the reaper metal and allowed their owner to walk or to be exact, float out towards her. She finally took in the last detail, aside from the pair of mechanical wings coming from the waist the figure, which was the helmet of her saviour.
It was a series of diamond shapes in the centre, with the shade of black so dark it seemed to draw in the light around them, and then alternating coloured vector lines of the colours of that same shade of black, the bloodiest red she could ever imagine and the most bleached white. At the temples, she could easily see two lights that glowed an ominous red, she took an involuntary step back as the figured stopped looking around and focused on her.
"So," he started, "Nice weather right?"
Shepard would forever deny what happened next. She snorted.
Thanks guys for reading this teaser, I can't guarantee when I'm next going to upload a chapter but I will try soon, anyway I hope this is a bit more of better intro of how the Commander and the messenger first met.
