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Disclaimer: I don't, sad to say, own Inuyasha or Yu Yu Hakusho.
Chapter 1: Hiei' s Savior, A new friend.
A group of students headed off to school talking loudly. This group consisted of a black- brown haired girl with an uncanny control over a certain loud- mouthed boy, who acted like he owned the world. "Yuske stop walking like you're god!" The girl said hitting him on the head, "Hey! What the hell was that for?! Damn it Keiko (Kayko, but the other way looks better.) You made my hair all messed up!" The boy, known as Yuske growled. In the back a smiling red- head kept making jokes about Yuske and how he looked like puppy and that Keiko was his master. "Kurama I can hear you!" Yuske threw a rock at Kurama, who dodged by instinct. "Stop picking on him he might blow his fuse throwing rocks at you fox." A spiky-haired boy with ruby red eyes spoke up. "Shut up Hiei." Yuske once again threw a rock only to have a boulder thrown back at him. "AHHH!!" "Hiei you might hurt someone," Kurama said, holding back a laugh. "Hn." Was all Hiei said in reply. A blue-haired girl wearing a pink kimono, riding a flying oar, (lol I always thought it looked like and oar from a boat...) floated over the group listening and putting in snide comments every once in a while.
Kurama suddenly snapped around looking at an empty street. "Hey, what's up Kurama?" Yuske asked. "I felt a presence... different from a human..." Kurama whispered. They all looked in the general direction and saw a human silhouette (you know like when someone is far away and all you see is like a walking shadow that's as good as I can explain it...) walking toward them. They all got ready for a battle, until Hiei stepped forward and looked closely at the figure. "Anyone you recognize Hiei?" Kurama asked. Hiei' s face turned red, "No." They all stared at him, making him turn redder, proving the fact that he was lying. "Damn it! If I weren't' t curious about this person Hiei knows, I would be gawking at how red his face is getting!" Yuske said, irritated that he couldn't irritate the small (sadly I'm truthful) fire apparition. All but the red- faced apparition nodded in agreement.
They were too busy wondering about Hiei' s strange allowance of emotion to notice a girl with raven- black hair standing among them wondering what was going on. Hiei spoke up, "Kagome..." he then pointed at the girl standing there. They all finally noticed and jumped in surprise. The girl smiled, "Hiei nice to see you again! Didn't expect to see you here! And you remember me!" "How do I forget the only remaining remnants of my family?" Hiei growled. "How is your sister, Yukina?" There was a deadly silence. "Fine." Hiei sighed. Everyone' s eyes bugged out. 'Did he just admit he was Yukina's brother?!' They all thought. "Are you not going to introduce me to your friends?" Kagome asked, clearly curious. "Why should I?" He coldly asked. Kagome fell onto her knees and wrapped her arms around Hiei. Everyone' s eyes looked like they were about to fall out of their sockets.
Hiei' s face was similar to the color of a cherry. "Kag..." Hiei stuttered, "Not in front of them!" Hiei hissed in her ear. Kurama and the others however caught this but didn't mention it. "Hiei aren't you gonna introduce me to your nice friends? I thought we were friends! Does this mean you were lying? Did you always lie to me? Was the time I saved you for nothing? Did I get nothing out of the time I spent with you so I could get to know you better? Did you just guess who I was and not really remember me? Did you?!" Kagome sobbed on his shoulder. Everyone glared at him like he was hell come to visit, making him feel guilty. "Eh...Kagome..." she continued to sob continuously on his shoulder. "Um...I...I...missed you Kagome..."Hiei gently whispered. Everyone gasped, a formerly ignored orange- haired boy with bad taste screamed like a girl. Kagome stood up, walked over to Kuwabaka (it's Kuwabara but I just don't like him no offence to anyone) and looked up at him. Hiei started to pick up her things. "You have problem? Huh? Are you making a big deal out of my little cousin talking? (Hiei twitched in the background) Do you want to make me mad?" Kagome asked wanting answers. Kuwabaka looked at Hiei who pitied him...slightly. "Um..." Kuwabaka stuttered. Hiei mouthed 'bad move' to the idiot. Energy flared around Kagome like flames but no one noticed. "Ah...um..." Kuwabaka stuttered again.
Later in the afternoon... "...And that is how Kuwabara got beaten up by a girl!" Yuske grinned. Hiei was watching Kuwabaka as the idiot did whatever Kagome told him to. Botan was making the same jokes Kurama made except it was with Kagome and Kuwabara instead of Keiko and Yuske. "Hey what did she mean 'save you' Hiei?" Botan asked wonderingly. "Oh that! I saved him from this one girl that tried to..." Kagome didn't get to finish because Hiei stopped her. "It was nothing!" Hiei growled. "Hey Hiei! What would you say if I only said I was your cousin? What if I wasn't really?" Kagome asked, after she got his hand off her mouth. "...I would probably ask you a few questions then kill you." Hiei answered bluntly. Everyone went silent. "But I wouldn't kill you!! I didn't mean 'I'll kill you'!!" Hiei said quickly. "So you do think of me as a friend!" Kagome smiled. "EH!? No!! I meant that you shouldn't be killed by me!" "So you want some other demon to kill me?" "No! I mean ARGH!" Hiei eyes went all swirly. Everyone laughed at how easily Kagome could get Hiei confused and at the fact that she couldn't understand how much it was different to them. She was a pure heart...
End Chapter Hey everyone please review if you want to!! I'll start my next chapter soon...Oh yeah and remember to give me some pairings you would like!! You know I'm weird when I want to be...(where did this come from?) This is two pages in Microsoft Word.
Disclaimer: I don't, sad to say, own Inuyasha or Yu Yu Hakusho.
Chapter 1: Hiei' s Savior, A new friend.
A group of students headed off to school talking loudly. This group consisted of a black- brown haired girl with an uncanny control over a certain loud- mouthed boy, who acted like he owned the world. "Yuske stop walking like you're god!" The girl said hitting him on the head, "Hey! What the hell was that for?! Damn it Keiko (Kayko, but the other way looks better.) You made my hair all messed up!" The boy, known as Yuske growled. In the back a smiling red- head kept making jokes about Yuske and how he looked like puppy and that Keiko was his master. "Kurama I can hear you!" Yuske threw a rock at Kurama, who dodged by instinct. "Stop picking on him he might blow his fuse throwing rocks at you fox." A spiky-haired boy with ruby red eyes spoke up. "Shut up Hiei." Yuske once again threw a rock only to have a boulder thrown back at him. "AHHH!!" "Hiei you might hurt someone," Kurama said, holding back a laugh. "Hn." Was all Hiei said in reply. A blue-haired girl wearing a pink kimono, riding a flying oar, (lol I always thought it looked like and oar from a boat...) floated over the group listening and putting in snide comments every once in a while.
Kurama suddenly snapped around looking at an empty street. "Hey, what's up Kurama?" Yuske asked. "I felt a presence... different from a human..." Kurama whispered. They all looked in the general direction and saw a human silhouette (you know like when someone is far away and all you see is like a walking shadow that's as good as I can explain it...) walking toward them. They all got ready for a battle, until Hiei stepped forward and looked closely at the figure. "Anyone you recognize Hiei?" Kurama asked. Hiei' s face turned red, "No." They all stared at him, making him turn redder, proving the fact that he was lying. "Damn it! If I weren't' t curious about this person Hiei knows, I would be gawking at how red his face is getting!" Yuske said, irritated that he couldn't irritate the small (sadly I'm truthful) fire apparition. All but the red- faced apparition nodded in agreement.
They were too busy wondering about Hiei' s strange allowance of emotion to notice a girl with raven- black hair standing among them wondering what was going on. Hiei spoke up, "Kagome..." he then pointed at the girl standing there. They all finally noticed and jumped in surprise. The girl smiled, "Hiei nice to see you again! Didn't expect to see you here! And you remember me!" "How do I forget the only remaining remnants of my family?" Hiei growled. "How is your sister, Yukina?" There was a deadly silence. "Fine." Hiei sighed. Everyone' s eyes bugged out. 'Did he just admit he was Yukina's brother?!' They all thought. "Are you not going to introduce me to your friends?" Kagome asked, clearly curious. "Why should I?" He coldly asked. Kagome fell onto her knees and wrapped her arms around Hiei. Everyone' s eyes looked like they were about to fall out of their sockets.
Hiei' s face was similar to the color of a cherry. "Kag..." Hiei stuttered, "Not in front of them!" Hiei hissed in her ear. Kurama and the others however caught this but didn't mention it. "Hiei aren't you gonna introduce me to your nice friends? I thought we were friends! Does this mean you were lying? Did you always lie to me? Was the time I saved you for nothing? Did I get nothing out of the time I spent with you so I could get to know you better? Did you just guess who I was and not really remember me? Did you?!" Kagome sobbed on his shoulder. Everyone glared at him like he was hell come to visit, making him feel guilty. "Eh...Kagome..." she continued to sob continuously on his shoulder. "Um...I...I...missed you Kagome..."Hiei gently whispered. Everyone gasped, a formerly ignored orange- haired boy with bad taste screamed like a girl. Kagome stood up, walked over to Kuwabaka (it's Kuwabara but I just don't like him no offence to anyone) and looked up at him. Hiei started to pick up her things. "You have problem? Huh? Are you making a big deal out of my little cousin talking? (Hiei twitched in the background) Do you want to make me mad?" Kagome asked wanting answers. Kuwabaka looked at Hiei who pitied him...slightly. "Um..." Kuwabaka stuttered. Hiei mouthed 'bad move' to the idiot. Energy flared around Kagome like flames but no one noticed. "Ah...um..." Kuwabaka stuttered again.
Later in the afternoon... "...And that is how Kuwabara got beaten up by a girl!" Yuske grinned. Hiei was watching Kuwabaka as the idiot did whatever Kagome told him to. Botan was making the same jokes Kurama made except it was with Kagome and Kuwabara instead of Keiko and Yuske. "Hey what did she mean 'save you' Hiei?" Botan asked wonderingly. "Oh that! I saved him from this one girl that tried to..." Kagome didn't get to finish because Hiei stopped her. "It was nothing!" Hiei growled. "Hey Hiei! What would you say if I only said I was your cousin? What if I wasn't really?" Kagome asked, after she got his hand off her mouth. "...I would probably ask you a few questions then kill you." Hiei answered bluntly. Everyone went silent. "But I wouldn't kill you!! I didn't mean 'I'll kill you'!!" Hiei said quickly. "So you do think of me as a friend!" Kagome smiled. "EH!? No!! I meant that you shouldn't be killed by me!" "So you want some other demon to kill me?" "No! I mean ARGH!" Hiei eyes went all swirly. Everyone laughed at how easily Kagome could get Hiei confused and at the fact that she couldn't understand how much it was different to them. She was a pure heart...
End Chapter Hey everyone please review if you want to!! I'll start my next chapter soon...Oh yeah and remember to give me some pairings you would like!! You know I'm weird when I want to be...(where did this come from?) This is two pages in Microsoft Word.
