Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, Masashi Kishimoto does :) LOL You know that

This is my first ever fanfiction, i have tried to put as much thought into it to make it more exciting. i hope you enjoy it and PLEASE comment. :)

OC: details

Name: Saito Kimi (false name, real last name is unknown)

Age: 12-13

Description: Kimi has a very delicate figure and wears a black zip-up vest with no straps kind of like a corset, black bandages on her legs (like pants). In the beginning with Orochimaru she wears a white cloak type thing over her vest and a traditional Orochimaru style pink rope bow around her waist. After she goes to Konoha, in order for her to not stand out as much she keeps her vest/corset, but puts a white thigh length skirt over her bandages on her legs and puts white bandages around her arms to hide all her scaring, the white is almost the same colour as her skin.

Personality: At the beginning Kimi is annoyed at everyone and has quite a self-centred personality, after she meets Anko, Kurenai and Ai she puts on a false identity (for her own sake) but soon her true attitude comes out and she begins to show her true colours. After a while Kimi's personality becomes more caring but she still manages to keep her spunky attitude.

Intro

Her black hair swayed as she dodged the kunai, her smile widened as she saw the next one flying in her direction.

With a swift movement she had already manoeuvred her way around it and towards its user, she ran smoothly between the other attackers, all whilst her eyes had not parted with the tall pale man at the other end of the room.

She was a young child, no older than 12

Her lips parted as her teeth grew, and she bit into her flesh and forced herself to concentrate.

The blood flowed softly and smoothly down her face, her vision redirected for a second in order for her to lick the warm red blood

She savoured the flavour, knowing that her wounds would soon heal and she would no longer have the privilege.

Her eyes darted back up, just in time for her to see the shuriken flying towards her, she hissed and in a puff of smoke, the girl's body melted into a pile of snakes.

The man at the end of the room smiled, and licked his lips at the thought of the girl's blood, his tongue whipped around his face several times before shrinking back into its original size.

The men that were spread out through the room all looked around puzzled, their eyes scattered around the emptiness, searching

The girl was hiding in the darkness, up in the roofing

She stealthily used her ninja skills to run along the banisters without making even a hint of sound.

She made her way down the room towards the pale man.

Orochimaru smiled as he looked up.

"You'll have to try harder than that." he commented looking up just in time to dodge the girl's final attack

"That wasn't my hardest." She whispered into his pail ear.

His head whipped around to see that the girl had a kunai that had been dipped in poison, held to his neck, there was also one held to his mouth to prevent him from using his tongue from any funny business.

He smiled, "You have done well, Kimi." He stated, and the girl lowered her hands, "I wouldn't expect any less from my daughter."

LOL that was a bit short, all my other chapters are longer.

PLEASE comment i would love some feedback, if you see any errors within it please tell me. :D