Hello, everyone! This is my first fanfiction, so it probably won't be very good. Please give me advice that could help me with the wording or structure. This is going to be an Inuyasha and YuYu Hakushaku crossover.
There are probably going to be a few people and maybe ideas twisted into the story from other anime or manga. I don't own anything. If someone seems ooc to you, I'm sorry, but it's either to fit the plot of this fanfiction, it's the way I interpreted them, or I don't know them very well.
I haven't watched YuYu Hakushaku before, so I'm not going to have a lot of that show's plot in this fanfiction. Everything I know about the show is stuff I've read repeatedly in fanfiction and what I read from show summaries.
I'm doing some major revisions to the plot of Inuyasha, but that can be said about a lot of fanfics. A lot is also going to stay the same.
I really like to use Japanese words in fanfiction, but I don't know many. Can someone please tell me some, or give me a website to go to to get some, please?
Translations:
Nee-chan: older sister
* sound*
flashback
'thought'
' voice of nature (only Souta heres it in this chapter)'
The One, True Shikon
Prologue
Souta's Pov:
Gazing out over the sunset, I looked to the person beside me "Nee-chan?"
"Yes, Souta?" came the voice I longed to hear every day for years.
"I miss you, Nee-chan! When are you coming home?" I probably sound like a desperate child right now, but I don't care. I want to see my Nee-chan. I need to see my Nee-chan.
"…..*Sigh*Soon, Souta. Soon…. I've got to go." My hopes shattered. She got up and started to walk away. I was rooted to the spot.
"Wait, Nee-chan! Don't go! Nee-chan-"
"Kagome nee-chan!" I woke with a start, reaching out for something that wasn't there.*Huff,huff*"….It was just a dream…."
"Souta, breakfast is ready," came a voice from downstairs, muffled by the closed door of my bedroom.
"Coming, momma!" I called back. Glancing over at my clock, I saw that it was 6:03am. Momma's up early. I'm up late. 'I wonder what that dream meant.' After I got dressed, I went downstairs and ate breakfast. When that was done, I quickly washed the dishes and headed towards the door…
"Where are you going?"..just to be intercepted. 'Why must moms have eyes in the back of their heads? I don't want to go through this again.'
" I'm going to sweep the shrine grounds." I answered truthfully.
"Near the well," she deduced disappointedly.
"That's part of the shrine grounds," I bit out, annoyed. 'Why does she always act like this? Doesn't she want to see Nee-chan too? How can she give up so easily? How can she expect me to give up on Nee-chan? I can't!' Inside, I was fuming. Outside, I refused to look at her as I grabbed the broom and continued toward the door. Apparently, though, she wasn't through.
" She's not coming back. You're only hurting yourself holding onto a false hope," came the whisper of her voice.
"Believe what you will. I won't give up on her so easily. I have faith in her." I was practically snarling. If I were a youkai, I'd be seeing red.
"I'm thinking of moving. There are too many memories here." I knew what she was doing. She was trying to force me to move on. But there's nothing to move on from. Nee-chan will come back, I know it. Besides, her constant jabbing at Nee-chan has made my outlook on her turn cold and sour.
"Move, then. Pack your bags, and move. Make sure you visit or at least call." And with that, I walked out, leaving momma staring after me in shock.
:Scene Change:
It happened while I was sweeping in front of the storage shed. The birds were chirping merrily, the gentle breeze was bringing a pleasant scent of the first cherry blossoms of spring, and the sun was shining a warm glow. Suddenly, the birds and forest creatures quieted, the breeze came to a halt, and the shrine seemed to be waiting in anticipation. And then it happened. An enormous wave of energy swept over everything in the vicinity of the shrine, coming from the well. As quickly as the wave started, it ended. I was up and flying towards the well house faster than any soccer game I've ever been in. Nearing the old, cryptic structure, I was just about to open the door when it was flung open.
Inside, I could see many people. But the only one I paid any attention to was the one in front who had opened the door. Long raven hair adorned the head of a much more mature looking person than the person I had known all my life, the person who had disappeared three years ago. But it was the same person. I could feel the tears building up and starting a slow trail down my face, but I didn't care. There was only one thing on my mind. "Nee-chan?...Is…is that really you?"
A voice that flowed as sweet as honey responded, "Yes, Souta. It's me. I'm home."
As soon as the words left her mouth, my body started moving on its own. And as I flung myself into her awaiting arms, I could have sworn I heard voices, the voices of the shrine and everything on it, whisper softly as to not disturb the moment, 'She's back.'
