Hey ! i come again with a very short fanfic. I have write an other story but in three week i am in vacation and i want to finish to post this story before i go to my trip in Egypte. I try an other style of writing. Please tell me what you think of it.
The condition of the peace's treaty
Since two years ago king Randor want to have a treaty with the people of Chipiock. This people live in the dark hemisphere but they aren't in the evil side, on the contrary. But they are very shy people and they don't want to hold a place in the battle between the two side. They just want to live in peace and strangely never Skeletor or the snake men have attack them.
It had take time to the king to know them, but what he had discover only reinforce his wish to be ally with them. That's why he was so happy when an emissary of the king of the Chipiock come to the palace of Eternos. The emissary had whishing to see all the people who live in the palace without an exception. King randor was more than happy to please him and he had shown all the palace to the visitor.
The emissary had for name Virgin and he is one of the most wisest of his people. He had seen all the men and the women of the palace but he hadn't talk with anyone. The king is a bit startled by this attitude but he don't want to bothered his guess with question so he stay silent. After a long time Virgin spoke.
- There is a possibility of a treaty between our people. If you don't mind i want that your son and his best friend to come with me to my city. They must come alone. You have my word that all the time they stay in my city they are safe.
- Adam is the crown prince...
- I know this but i think that only them can convince my king that we can trust your people. If you don't want to, so let it be. I return to my city and you will never heard anything about us.
- I don't have say that ! But please understand that he is my only son and i am afraid for his secure.
- I understand but with his bodyguard and me, he is more in secure than in your palace. You have seen what i can do. I'm sorry but i can only allow them to come with me.
- I agree with you, sigh the king. Teela and Adam will come with you alone for discuting about this treaty.
- You have made the right choice king Randor. Be assured that i tell this to my king.
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Teela look around her with all her eyes. This is the first time that she come to the dark emisphere without a battle in mind. She wonder why she was choose to come to the city of the Chipiock. For Adam, there is no doubt why he was choose but her, she don't understand. She don't like the dark hemisphere and she is worried. But the snake men don't seem to see them. It's like they are invisible.
Adam stay silent in the Chipiock's ship. It is not the first time he come around but it is the first time he come as Adam and without Cringer. Virgin had say that only him and Teela can come and in spite of the fact that Cringer is a tiger, he can't come with them. Adam feels a little alone without his friend. Of course, Teela is there with him but since two years their friendship had disappear and now Adam don't know if they are just acquaintance or even less.
Virgin smile for himself. There is no doubt for him that he had choose the best of the people who live in the palace. His king will be happy. A treaty with this people can be very profitable to both of the country. Now there just a little detail at resolve and if he is right in less than four years Skeletor and all the evil will be only a memory.
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The city of the Chipiock is the most stunning thing that Adam and Teela had ever seen. If they don't know better they will think that this city is in the bright emisphere. The land and the city are an enchanting sight and the people who live here seems to be friendly. When they had landed, the people had look at them like if they are waiting something of them, but a glare of Virgin had stop this immediatly. Now Adam and Teela had been left alone to visit the city. The only condition who is telling to them is that they don't go appart. They must stay together all the time.
In a square a little girl had give them a glass of water with the brightest smile they had ever seen. The girl had say something to them but her mother had come suddently and had excuse herself for her daughter's misrespect. Adam and Teela have said that the girl had been very respectfull with them but the mother don't want to believe them and soon she go to her house with her daughter. Adam look at Teela and see the same stunning expression in her face than his. They continue their walk but they don't have the good mood for this now, so they decide to return to the palace instead.
In the palace they have discover that they must share a room for the night. Adam and Teela don't never know who had the redest face at this news but Adam think that only the anger make Teela's face this red. For him, this is another story but, like usually, he hide it the best he can. Fortunatly for them Teela's shout had catch an other couple attention. The woman, who's name is Nanie, had propose that her friend Joyan spend the night in Adam's room and Teela spend her night with her. Soon all of them had agreed of this.
They had spend a good evening with Nanie and Joyan. They had discover that their new friend are the best student of the year. Nanie don't know Joyan before she come to the palace but like for Adam and Teela the king had say that they must stay together. Adam had say that they are come to sign a treaty with the Chipiock for his father and he had say that he hope that the king will want to discuss about the treaty tomorrow. Joyan had crush his hope. He had said that tomorrow morning a big ceremonie must take place in the palace's garden. All the years at the same date this ceremonie happen. The people of the city don't know what about this ceremonie is, but they know that after only good thing happen to them so they expected it dreadly. After that they all go to sleep in their room.
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The next morning, Adam is wake up by Virgin. The emissary had come with new clothing in his hand. He had take one to Joyan and one to Adam and had tell them that they must wear it. After that he had left the room without an other word. Adam look at the clothing and wonder if he must wear it. Joyan had already put the clothing on. His is in a deep green colour and Adam's is in a blue sky. With a sigh Adam put the clothe on. The clothing fit him perfectly. It is as if he was made for him and not anyone. After that they left the room to come to the garden. Joyan is very happy to be able to see the ceremonie. It's such an honor for him, so few people can see it. Adam is more worried than his new friend. he don't like the fact that he don't know what will happen.
In the corridor they meet Teela and Nanie. They have new clothing too. Nanie's clothing is in bright red who suit her blond hair and Teela wore a purple dress. Like for him the clothing seems had to be made for herself only. What Adam think it's very strange is the fact that nor Nanie's nor Joyan's outfit seems made for them. Their outfit seem very old and Adam's like Teela's seems new. They greet each other and make their way to the garden.
When they entered in the garden an incredible slient fell upon the place. The four young seems a little startled by this. Virgin come to them and lead them to the king. After the meeting, Virgin lead them to an arch of rose and tell them to wait here. He had lead Adam and Teela in one side and Nanie and Joyan in an other side. A few minutes pass who seems like hour for Adam and Teela. Finally the king come again. He had a ribbon in his hand. He come first to nanie and Joyan. He say something in their ears and they bow. After that he come to Adam and Teela.
- Young people of the kingdom of Eternos would you take part to the ceremonie ? Ask the king.
In the corner of their eyes they see Virgin who show them that they must bow to the king. Not knowing what will happen but knowing that if they don't agree there is no treaty, the two young bow. The king seem most pleased by this and he say at the four young to come with him.
They come near from a bridge and the king explain to them that they must go from one side to an other side with the companion the council had chose. Teela and Adam exchange a stunned look but soon they focus again on what the king say. The king tie Nanie and Joyan hand with a ribbon and they cross the bridge. After that the water underneath the bridge seems more clear and a few cheer come up but the king glare at them and the silent fell again. The king untie the hand of the couple and come to Adam and Teela. Like for the other couple the king tie the hand of the two friend with the same ribbon and request them to cross the bridge.
Adam and Teela walk to the bridge but the more they come near the bridge the more it's difficulte for them to walk. Teela glance a worried look to Adam and, as worried as he is , he manage to smile to her. His smile seem to give her strenght and her strenght give him more strenght too. They cross the bridge like if they walk in a storm with the wind against them. After a long time they finally arrived in the other side and suddently there is nothing who prevent them to walk anymore. They heard loud cheer and clap from the crowd and they turn back to see what had happen. They can't think what they see. The water underneath the bridge is like a gold water. They have never seen such a beautifful spectacle. The king come to them again.
- Now we can discuss about a treaty. I'm sure we can easily agree for a treaty with your people. Thank you for your help Prince adam and princess Teela.
- I'm not a princess, say Teela.
- Of course you are. Your husband is a prince so you are a princess.
- Teela is not marrying with a prince. I don't want to be disrespectful but i know it if she was wedded.
- There is not disrespect but she is just be wedded with you prince Adam. You are wedded since two minute.
- WHAT ??
To be continued.
So this is the first chapter. I hope you have liking it. This story had only four chapter. I hope i can post at last one chapter per week.The other chapter must be shorter than this. I wait your review. bye. Stephanie.