hey well, uhm this is my first fanfic,(im phsykick btw, no that is not my real name lol,) its probably sucky.. ehe but please read it and tell me how i did :3 fyi I DONT OWN NARUTO (wish i did.. dont we all?)
kay well, if i get like 1 or 2 reviews ill continue, since if theres none, no one probaly likes it haha.. i dont really mind hateful comments but, try not to critisize it since its my first. also i'd like to say that if u can give me tips please do.
"TALKING"
'THOUGHTS'
THIS WILL BE YAOI IF I CONTINUE! SO EARLY WARNING X)
Sparks: the accident
He was so excited for the Halloween party! Sasuke had invited him, that itself made it important and special. He had a crush on sasuke since he was six. Ever since iruka-sensei had made them fight, forcing to do the symbol of harmony handshake. This year, Naruto was dressed as Kyuubi. He wore brilliant red contacts, and he had 3 wisker marks on his face. Eagerly, he put in his fangs and ran out the door slightly tripping, getting up and running again.
The party was HUGE! There were so many people and so many different costumes. it was going to be great, if only he could find sasuke. FOOD, of course was what he saw. Making his way through the crowd, he accidently bumped someone. Said person quickly turned around
"Yo , naruto"
Naruto jumped at the sound of this, he turned around, half expecting the voice to be a ghost. Seeing Kakashi-sensei, he relaxed. Kakashi sensei was a wizard with shiny blue robe and hat. Of course still holding his icha icha paradise.
" ne, what are you doing here Kaka-sensei?" naruto questioned.
" huh? oh, sasuke invited me here." Still not taking his eyes of his porn.
"oh… well, im going to get food, talk to you later" yelling over his shoulder, he quickly left. A few minutes later an announcement went up.
"'scuse me, 'scuse me… HEY!, thank you, well, welcome to the uchiha annual Halloween bash. I am your host, sasuke uchiha. I hope you all had a good time so far, and will continue to. Ill leave the rest to you, DJ." Quickly and swiftly he jumped off the podium and went to naruto.
" Dobe, didn't think you will actually come, oh, and hello Kakashi-sensei."
"SHUT Up TEME!" Naruto yelled while smashing the table.
"c'mon dobe, you need to come with me, I have to give you something."
Slowly, naruto followed sasuke into his room. Sasuke went through his drawer and took out a bandaid. " Dobe, how'd you get a stupid cut on your face."
" ah, it was when i fell before i left."
Leaning over, saske put a band aid over naruto's face. Naruto, who was blushing furiously felt sasuke's breath upon his face and couldnt control himself. Naruto suddenly leaned in and kissed sasuke on the cheek. Sasuke eyes widened and he was to shocked to step back. Naruto, to shocked at what he just did just sat there. After a few seconds, they broke apart. Both shocked at what just happened. registering what happened, Naruto whispered a broken "sorry" and ran out.
' Sasukes going to hate me forever and ever and ever." Naruto ran, a single tear falling from his eyes.
R&R? please? :3