I do not own DBZ or Infinite Stratos. I do however own the original character, just not his name.
This is the second draft of the first chapter after making spelling and grammar corrections and a couple extra things I forgot the first time.
It has been nearly 150 years since the battle with Majin Buu took place and the earth has seen the longest breath of peace in a long time. We join a young man as he finds himself in a most unexpected situation. Ten years before a girl by the name of Tabane Shinonono invented a new method to explore space and improve the fighting capabilities of the user, called Infinite Stratos, the only thing is they can only be controlled by women. Until one day Ichika Orimura finds out that he can use them for some reason. Because of this he is sent to a school that specializes in the instructing of new pilots. And since he is the only male in the world who can use them he finds the situation to be rather unnerving. After a very awkward first day he is volunteered to become a class representative and that Ladies and Gentlemen is where we begin our story.
A very stern Chifuyu announces to her class. "Two weeks from today you'll be asked to choose your representative for the class tournament. A class representative will not only compete in the tournament, but also attend student council meetings and committee meetings. Essentially it's your class leader, okay. I will now take nomination, any suggestions?"
A student quickly raises her hand and states, "I nominate Orimura."
Ichika turns around in shock. "HUH?!"
Another student stands up. "Dude, I think that's a good Idea to!"
Ichika turns the other way. "Y-You do?
Chifuyu crosses her arms. "So, is there anyone else? If not then he'll be elected without a vote.
Ichika stands up in objection. "Hey hold on! What if I don't want to do it?!
Suddenly a girl near the back of the class. "I do not approve of this! This type of selection is totally unacceptable. It would be shameful to have a boy as our class representative. You can't possibly suspect that I, Cecilia Alcott*, should have to deal with the humiliation for the entire year. In the first place, simply living in a country with such an underdeveloped level of culture is unbearably painful for someone like myself, it's simply agonizing."
Ichika annoyingly retorts. "Well your country doesn't have that many things to brag about either! How often has England won the world's worst cuisine award?"
Cecilia scoffs at this remark. "We English have may delicious dishes! I can't believe you would have the audacity to insult my country!"
A moment a silence falls on the class. "Oh things are getting tense in there." An unknown figure thinks to himself while watching this interesting turn of events.
Suddenly the blonde girl points to the boy. "I challenge you to a duel."
"Fine by me, it'll be easier than debating." Ichika quickly responds.
"And if you should ever lose to me on purpose, I promise to make you my servant. NO! My slave."
"How much handy cap will there be?" Ichika snidely remarks.
"Are you asking me for a favor already?" Cecilia happily says to try and embarrass Ichika.
"No, I was wondering how much of a handy cap I should give you." Ichika confidently remarks.
Suddenly the whole class burst out laughing. A girl shouts out. "Orimura, are you serious?" Another girl tells Ichika. "Yeah! Men used to be stronger than women. But that all was before the I.S. was invented." Yet another girl states." People say that if men and women were to have a war, it wouldn't even last three days."
Ichika shrugs. "Oh damn, she's right."
Suddenly everyone hears a voice. "Well that's partly true, but I'd say it wouldn't last more than a single day."
The entire class turned to the window, where the voice came from. Suddenly Chifuyu and Houki are in shock as they see the man who made the remark. What they saw was a man with spiky black hair and black eyes wearing a blue fighting gi with an orange undershirt and what appears to be a brown furry belt. He appeared to be sitting cross-legged on something. He waves his hand. "Yo."
Houki stands up in disbelief. "You?! What the hell are you doing here?!"
Chifuyu walks toward the window. "I was about to ask the same thing. What are you doing here at a time like this?
"Oh, hey there Fuyu-san and Houki-chan how have you two been the last ten years?" He says as he jumps in the window. Landing in front of Houki and placing his hand on her head. "Man Houki-chan you sure grew up huh?"
Houki responds very softly. "Well of course, the last time I saw you I was like 5 years old."
The man thinking he heard something. "What did you say something Houki?"
Ichika becomes concerned at the fact that they both know this guy and he calls his sister by such a strange nickname. "H-Hey sis, do you know this guy?"
"Sis?" The man inquires walking toward the still concerned boy. Stopping mere inches from Ichika's face. Ichika can't help but feel awkward as a grown man stares him in the eyes. The man turns his attention to the boy's desk seeing the name hologram.
He backs up a bit allowing Ichika to breath. "Orimura?" he says thinking that it sounds familiar, and then suddenly snaps his fingers. "Ah! Hey Fuyu-san isn't your name Orimura?" Suddenly he gets hit on the head by the instructor.
"OW!" That hurt Fuyu-san. What was that for?"
"For still being a big idiot." Chifuyu states very agitatedly at the man. "But yes that is my name and this is my little brother."
The man stands back up. "Well, that figures he'd be related to you in some way."
Chifuyu glares at him. "What do you mean by it figures, huh?"
Dodging the question. "Oh nothing. Forget I said anything at all."
Chifuyu relaxes. "With pleasure."
Ichika questions the man. "Um, not to be rude but who are you and what did you mean it wouldn't last a day?
The man turns back towards Ichika and the class. "Ah, I completely forgot, I haven't had to introduce myself for some time." The man bows to the class. "My name is Vegito and I came here to see for myself the man who can pilot Tabane's invention." He turns his head to Chifuyu and whispers. "By the way what generation is it in now?"
Chifuyu sighs. "Third gen." Vegito turns back to the class. "Ah, thanks Fuyu-san"
Vegito starts grinning. "As for lasting only a day, in truth women would have the upper hand if I decide not to participate in the "war" or rather "spanking."
Cecilia feeling insulted shouts. "Are you insinuating that you are able to fight against an I.S. suit and win!"
Vegito smirks. "Not 'a' single one but all of them." The entire class gasped except for Houki and Chufuyu.
Then the girls started to laugh. A girl says. "This is some kind of a joke, right?!"
Then Houki grits her teeth and shouts. "He's not joking!" The class turned to Houki in amazement. "This man is the real reason that the I.S. suit was originally created." Suddenly the class became shocked.
Cecilia yet again shouts. "The I.S. suit was created for the purpose of space exploration! And what do you mean by he's the reason they were created?"
Vegito bursts out laughing.
Cecilia responds. "What's so funny?!"
Vegito catches his breath. "Oh my, I'm terribly sorry about that, but is that really what she decided to tell the governments of the world?" Vegito wipes a tear from his eye.
Houki speaks up yet again. "The I.S. suits were created in an attempt to defeat this man. That is the original reason that Tabane Shinonono designed the I.S. suit."
Chifuyu gets an evil smirk on her face. "Oh, this will be fun."
Ichika looks and Houki. "Ahh, Houki how do you know all this?"
Before she could respond Vegito walks towards Houki and puts his arm around her, smiles and states. "Because she's my little sister."
"EHHHH!" Ichika yells. "Houki! I didn't know you had a brother!"
Houki pushes the man away and angrily shouts. "We're not related!"
A girl asks. "Then what is he to you?"
Vegito squeezes the bridge or his nose. "I suppose I should have said future."
Ichika not getting it asks. "What do you mean by 'future'?"
Vegito crosses his arms. "Well I plan to marry Tabane one day, even though she is quite stubborn about beating me."
"Oh that reminds me. I know how much you're into kendo." Vegito reaches over his shoulder to a katana wrapped in a cloth. "It took me three years to craft this to perfection, consider it my gift to you for winning that Kendo competition last year." He takes the sword and gives it to Houki.
Houki shudders and manages to get out a, "Thank you."
Houki realized something. "Wait, how did you know? We haven't seen you in nearly 10 years?"
"Internet." Vegito say chuckling.
"What is that supposed to mean?" Houki angrily says.
"Well what I mean is before coming I decided to look up the name Shinonono and see what showed up." Vegito said. "Of course there was a ton of things on Tabane but there was one that featured your victory in the Kendo competition."
Cecilia approaches Vegito pointing in his face. "I seriously doubt that what you saying is true at all."
Looking at her finger in front of his face, then moves her hand out of the way. "Well I could show you I suppose, I mean if your teacher approves." He said looking back at Chifuyu with an idiotic smile very much like Goku's.
Chifuyu smirks. "Ok, but Cecilia you'll have to choose either you duel against Ichika or you fight with his man. Just know that if you fight Vegito, Ichika becomes the class rep by default."
Cecilia steps back. "Why do I have to choose one of them?"
Chifuyu sternly responds. "Because I said so."
Chifuyu crosses her arms. "So, which will it be?"
Cecilia holds her breath in frustration. "Fine, then choose to duel Ichika."
Chifuyu chuckles. "Alright then. The duel will take place Friday of next week."
Cecilia becomes confused. "Why must it wait that long?"
Chifuyu simply states. "Because I have to get it approved by the school board first."
Vegito chuckles. "Well that settles that, I'll take my leave no-"
Chifuyu grabs Vegito. "Not so fast, you gave me an idea."
Vegito laughs nervously. "And what would that be Fuyu-san?"
Chifuyu puts him in a headlock. "First off stop calling that, and second, you are going to be the final exam for the students this year."
Vegito sighs in relief. "Oh is that all? I thought it was something else."
Chifuyu humors him. "Oh, and what did you think I was going to say?"
"I thought you were going to tell me to that I had to stay and watch your classes or something." Vegito said scratching his nose. CRAP!
"That's a great idea. Well class we have new TA here." Chifuyu said teasing him.
"Well would you look at the time gotta go." Vegito said panicking. Vegito gets out of Chifuyu's grip and jumps out the window.
The class stared at the window where the man just jumped out of. "Umm… guys." Ichika said getting everyone's attention. Cecilia responds. "What is it now?"
Ichika scratches his cheek. "He just jumped out the window."
"Yeah, and?" Another says.
"Aren't we on the fourth floor?"
The entire class looked at the window, then everyone ran towards the window to see what happened to the man.
Ichika looks out the window and doesn't see anyone. "Where'd he go?"
Chifuyu rubs her eyes. "That idiot, why couldn't he use a door for once?"
All of a sudden the girls start to gossip. "What was that about?" One girl says. "I don't care he was cute." Responds another
Houki however sits at her desk holding tightly to the sword that she was just given. "Why did have to come back now?"
-Deep in the mountains-
Two men are found sparring with each other. They stop when one of them says. "Hey he's back."
The other responds. "That was quick I didn't think he'd be back here already"
Suddenly Vegito appears in front of the 2 fighters bowing to them. "Greetings masters, I'm back."
The taller one rubs his head. "Yeah, how bout that, we thought you'd be gone for a while."
Vegito stands back up. "Starting tomorrow I'm helping an old friend of mine so I'll be gone for at least half a year."
The taller one replies. "Wow, you got a job in half a day, that's great."
Vegito rubs the back of his head. "Yeah, I guess."
"Just remember that you are not to show your true strength!" The shorter one interjected.
"I know master." Vegito says to him. "Well ok, I suppose I should go back I just came by to let you know what was going on. I also want to thank you for all the training and guidance you have given me over these 10 years."
The taller one places his hand on the shorter one's shoulder. "Hey no problem it was fun for us too."
Vegito places his fingers on his forehead. "Well I'm off, thank you master Goku… Vegeta." Then disappears.
"Huh." Goku says. "I forgot I taught him that one."
"Tch." Vegeta responds in annoyance. "We've lived out here for nearly 125 years and you never once tried to teach it to me that move."
Goku rubs his head. "You never asked." Then nervously laughs.
Vegeta grows angry. "So you're telling me that you would have taught me the instant transmission technique if I asked? You didn't even teach your own sons."
Goku scratches his cheek. "They never asked either."
-In the deep reaches of space—
"My lord we will arrive at the planet Earth in about 4,320 hours"
A figure sitting in a thrown responds. "Excellent we shall finally get revenge to the sayian race after all this time."
If you have clarification question feel free to ask or you can review let me know what you think or have any suggestions. You can even rage if you like I just won't respond.
I won't post another chapter unless I know people are reading it.
(Ok I think that fixed all the error from the original post)
