This is my first Inuyasha fan fiction. I would love your advice on it so please review. Thank you so much.
"I feel a jewel shard Inuyasha!" Kagome announced. "Really, where is it?" Inuyasha asked. "I think, no wait, umm…" Kagome was feeling unsure, it seem like the shards were in different directions. "Come on! What's taking so long?" Inuyasha said impatiently. "Inuyasha, you're so impatient. Kagome has always led us to jewel shards. You need to keep your temper." Shippo said. "Well, who asked you!" Inuyasha yelled putting up his fist.
"KAGOME!" A voice behind them called. They all looked back seeing a tornado coming right at them. "Hey, isn't that Kouga?" Sango pointed out. "Oh, great!" Inuyasha groaned. "Hello Kagome." Kouga greeted. "What do you want dirt bag." Inuyasha said coldly. "Oh, just here to decide who will have Kagome once and for all." Kouga answered. "Fine by me." Inuyasha answered putting his hand on tetsaiga.
"Now boys, calm down." Kagome suggested as they started fighting. Unfortunately they were fighting a bit too close to Kagome. She stepped back and accidentally fell off the cliff. "Now look what you've down!" Kouga shouted. "What I've done! This is all your fault!" Inuyasha shouted back.
The whole group ran to the edge of the cliff, Kagome was holding on a branch. "Don't worry Kagome, I'll save you!" Inuyasha called. "No you won't, because I'll be the one to save her!" Kouga shouted. While they were arguing on who gets to save Kagome, the branch broke and Kagome screamed as she fell off the cliff.
She shut her eyes but she felt her self stop falling. "What's going on?" She asked. Inuyasha and Kouga were staring. "If you're fighting over a girl, at least make sure the girl's safe." The girl smiled. Inuyasha and Kouga stared at the girl, she looked human but they could tell she was a demon. Her silver hair was down with a few small braids going down until her waist. She had brown eyes and a symbol shaped like star on her forehead. She had fangs a bit longer than Inuyasha's but a bit shorter than Kouga's. The girl was dressed in fur and armor with a sword strapped to her back.
"Just who are you?" Inuyasha asked. "Sit boy." Kagome commended and Inuyasha fell flat on his face. "What he means to say is that I am so grateful that you saved me. Can you tell us your name?" Kagome apologized. "My name is Miyu. Do you happen to know a half-demon named Inuyasha?" The girl asked. "That's him right here." Sango said pointing to Inuyasha.
"And what do you want with me?" Inuyasha asked after they went to Kaede's village and settled down in her hut for tea. "Don't talk to your older sister that way. Did you learn any manner at all?" Miyu asked and Kagome spilled all her tea on Kouga. "What do mean by older sister?" Miroku asked. "Just that. I'm Inuyasha's older sister, well half sister to be exact." Miyu answered taking a sip of her tea. "Inuyasha, you didn't tell me you have an older sister." Shippo said. "Well, I didn't know I had one." Inuyasha answered.
"You don't really look all dog demon to me." Shippo pointed out. "Well, that's probably because I'm not all dog demon." She said smiling. "Then you're a half demon?" Sango asked. "No, half wolf demon." She answered looking at Kouga. "I actually have another half brother." She said. "Do you know who he is Miyu?" Kagome asked. "Well, I could say he's sitting right in front of me." She said pointing to Kouga.
Kouga who was laughing at the fact Inuyasha had a sister earlier stared at Miyu in horror. "But doesn't that make Inuyasha and Kouga…" Kagome said looking at them. "Related, I know." Miyu said looking at Inuyasha and Kouga who just fainted at her words. "Brothers? BROTHERS! WAKE UP"
"That was strange. I just dreamed that I had an older half sister and that I'm related to Kouga." Inuyasha said when he woke up. "Yeah me too." Said Kouga. "That's because you do." Miyu said as-a-matter-of-factly. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" They both screamed. Then Inuyasha ran up a tree and started moaning while Kouga is under the tree running in circles.
"Do they always act this?" Miyu asked Kagome when she came to see the boys. "Not really." She said trying not to laugh at the scene while Sango and Miroku were laughing out of control and Shippo looked like he was about to barf. Miyu looked at them curiously wandering what's so funny.
"Isn't that a jewel shard?" Kagome asked looking at the necklace hanging around her neck. "Yeah, you can have it if you want it." Miyu answered. "Really, Thanks! Hey Inuyasha!" Kagome called. "Uh, maybe you should keep it for now." Kagome answered looking at Inuyasha still grumbling in the tree. "I suppose you're right." Miyu answered smiling at Inuyasha.