Hey guys I have written may stories/fanfics but haven't posted them on here, but have posted them on other sites e.g Kickin' it Wiki. So this is the first time that I am posting on of my stoires on here, so please be nice, I would love to here heaps of feed back on how I can improve. thanks again :)

This is my life

Hi My name is Crawford, Kim I live with my dad, and my little sister Layla who's autistic. My mum died last year, She got hit by a car, when she was on here way home from one of here binge drinking sessions. The driver stopped to see if she was ok, but she died at the scene. I don't need to go into all of that, So dad decided to moved us to a town called Seaford during the mid-term break a smaller location, transferring schools we now live in a 2 bedroom 1 bathroom apartment. My life at home is pretty hard because dad is always out drinking and gambling, since my mum died, he loved her, he was never like that before she died, He would go out for a drink with his friends occasionally on friday night to have fun with his friends to and to wind down from a hard week, now he's always coming in at 2 am in the morning. So i'm stuck looking after Layla, helping her get ready for school, her homework which I don't mind, cause she calls me mum from time to time, which I like because that means she trusts me.

Did I tell you Im 16, work on the weekends to pay for the rent, since dad doesn't I go to school on the weekdays, and look after 2 kids full time, Layla and DAD !

It's my first day at school tomorrow as well as Layla. She getting really nervous, I keep telling her it will be fine,

Layla: Kim I'm really scared about tomorrow, new people, a different school that I wont no my way around.

She started breathing heavily, like she was going to have one of her anxiety attacks, which might cause one of her Autistic moments, I sat her down on the couch and hugged her, calming her down, rubbing her back, kissing her on the cheek, the way a mum would do it. Mum was so good at that, when she wasn't intoxicated with alcohol. I grew up fast, when Layla was born, because I was always helping mum and dad because mum was a drinker much more then dad, and dad was always at work, working his BUTT off paying the bills. and supporting the family, sometime I wish it would go back the way it use to be.

Kim: Honey your going to be fine, I rang your school and my school up yesterday, reminding them that we were starting, and don't worry I'll walk you to school. Your going to Seaford pre prep school, and i'm going to seaford high. there right next to each other, ill be round the corner.

Layla: Thanks mum, Hesitates I mean

Kim: It's ok, come on, how about we go down to the shops and get something for lunch tomorrow and while were out we will have dinner.

Layla nods her head

At the shops

Kim: What would you like for dinner

Layla: Mac Donald's

Kim: Do you really want that junk,

Layla: Yes She says in a like abel voice

Kim: Ok how about we make a deal, You can have a chocolate . If you eat your vegetables

Layla: Ok

Kim: So how about Mac and cheese for dinner.

Layla: Yes please saying it in excitement

Kim: With Vegetables I said in a motherly tone

Layla: NO ! In a disappointing voice.

Kim: Layla, If you don't eat your vegetables, you don't get your chocolate.

Layla: Fine she says in an annoyed voice

Kim: Good girl.

SO we walk into the shops that I had be working at, and got transferred to and decided to grab a trolly, we grabbed some apples, Granny smith of course, the green one, there mine and Layla's Favorite. we also grabbed some Carrots, Broccoli , Spinach, Ice cream, some Yoghurt, and Cereal, and our favorite dinner Mac and cheese, the frozen on that come in the family pack.

Kim: Ok how many apples should we get ?

Layla: 4

Kim: Ok can you hold the bag open for me

We were in the fruit and veg section at the front of the store, so we grabbed all we would need that would get us threw the week,

Then we got to Layla's favorite section. the Candy aisle

Layla: Kim can we get a load of candy ? she asked. Putting candy ( Red licorice, Snakes, Chocolate, Fantailes) and more in the trolly

Kim: Layla honey, Do you want your teeth rot , Can you take those out, I only said you could have 1 not ... I started counting them, I couldn't be bothered any more so I said. The whole aisle. in a quite, mad voice.

Layla: But Kim ...

Kim: Layla. I said sternly

We walked round, and grabbed more items, and put them in the trolly, we came to the cearle aisle. Layla, and I had a long desscussion about what kind of cereal we should get. Suddenly a young male walked up to me, He was well built, wearing jeans and a striped t shirt, Blue and brown to be exact and asked me

Boy: Aren't you a bit young to be a mum

Kim: Oh, no no no ! I said worry that every one thought I was Layla's mum, I didn't mind, I got it back home, after mum died and dad started drinking. This is my little sister Layla

Boy: Oh, sorry

Kim: Thats ok, I get it all the time I smiled back politely

Boy: Do you need help with choose the cereal

Kim: Yes, What do you sujest that is health and Cheep.

The Boy Reached up, and grabbed some Musile Boy: Here, I get this one.

Kim: Thank you I replied

Boy: So you new around here, cause i haven't seen you around? As I got the trolly and continued to look around.

Kim: Yeah, we moved her at the start of mid term break.

Boy: Nice, so what school are you transferring form ?

Kim: Layla, is transferring from Joseph's pre prep, and i'm transferring Corby high, I replied pushing my trolly, as he followed me, as I looked behind, to make sure Layla was walking behind me, but she was still in the cereal aisle waiting for me to get the froot loops.

Kim: Come on Layla, were not getting those

Layla: Aw, As she walked back to me with here head down.

Kim: Come one, we need to get some pens and pencils and books for you and I. She ran towards me in joy as of the froot loops were out of her mind.

I grabbed 2 packs of pens and pencils for me and Layla, and a pencil case for the both of us, Layla chose HOT Pink and I chose my favorite colour Blue, I also grabbed 3 books for Layla, and 4 books for me, We walked around a bit more o see what else we needed.

Kim: Ok Layla, I think we have everything, time to go.

By the time we had finished it was almost 6 O'clock, the young boy was still following up and helping me.

Kim: Ok Layla, its to late to cook dinner, we can get subway

Layla: Macas She demanded back

Kim: Ok but you dont get your chocolate

Boy: You know your really good at this parenting thing

Kim: Thank you, It comes from my mum, I replied in a meaningful way

Boy: Where is your mum

Kim: AT home resting I lied, I was good at that, and I know its wrong, but sometimes you have to,

We got to the check out Layla, help me as well as the boy place all the items on the resister, I gave the lady one of my work colleagues my debit card, to pay, as we finished up I said to the boy

Kim: Well thank you for helping...

Who is this dashing young man, what school is going to be like for Layla and Kim.

stayed tuned to find out,

Thx for ready, hope you can comment, and give me some advice.