Love Lost
This is my FIRST FY fanfic. What do you think?!?!?!
A red, blinding light filled my vision. It was all that I could see. My eyes were filled with it and I couldn't move. I was paralyzed, stuck to the spot that I was in without being able to move a single muscle in my body. Pain, furious, searing pain enveloped my whole being. Not a single part of my body was spared the horrible hurt. It felt like my each square inch of my body was being cut through while I was still alive. Oh, the PAIN!! Out of nowhere the mark on my neck burned brightly as my clothes fell away. For some reason I wasn't embarrassed. My whole mind and body was focused on the pain and the light, that bright light.
"Help me!! Help me, Suzaku! Save me! Don't leave me here to die! Please!!! Help me!! Help…………."
I woke up with a start, my symbol burning brightly still, gradually fading into oblivion. The pain was only a dull, faint throbbing, gradually fading as well. Soon, it was only a memory. I looked down at my neck, which was still bare. The mark was now as much as a memory as the pain.
What happened? Who was that calling???? MIAKA?!?!?!?!
I ran out towards her room, my heart pounding. How could this happen? NO!! nothing
can happen to her! I love her! Please, Suzaku!! Don't let anything happen to my Miaka!!
The sound of my footsteps rang on the floor as they were soon joined by two more sets. I looked behind me. Chichiri and Tasuki. They must have had the same thing happen to them that happened to me!! Oh, Miaka!! We'll save you!! Everything will be all right!!
I could hear screaming further down. The sound of Miaka's voice cut through the still night like a sharp knife. She was screaming for help!!! Soon, I heard the sound of Tamahome yelling. He was trying to get into her room, but the door must have been locked! All of a sudden, Miaka's voice stopped. No!! Nothing could have happened to her!!
I reached her door where Tamahome was still standing at, pounding on it, still trying to get in. I, too tried to get in but to no avail. Nothing would work. At this point, Chichiri, Tasuki, Tamahome, and all the others, including me, were trying to open the door, except Nuriko but it didn't budge an inch! What was stopping it? Where was Nuriko???
Suddenly, I saw a form running down the hall. NURIKO!!!! He reached the door and, with the help of Tamahome and I, puched it in. On the other side I saw that the door had been blocked by a….. boulder?!?!?! How'd it get THERE, in Miaka's room? But it was no time for questions. Miaka was nowhere to be found. Not a trace of her. Where had she gone? MIAKA!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Suzaku Seven did a complete and frantic check of the room. Nothing was gone, save for Miaka. We could tell that there had been a fight, a struggle. Clothes were everywhere and the bed was a mess with sheets all over the room, rumpled and torn. Decorations and tables were strewn across the room. Oh, Miaka!!! Miaka!! Where are you!! Miaka!!! Please, don't do this to me!! I love you!!! MIAKA!!!!!
To be continued!!!
What did you think?? It's my first FY fanfic!! I'm not done it yet, I just wanted to get it up!! Please R&R!!! I love FY!!!!! :
Note: this isn't done yet, I still have to finish it!! I just wanted to get it up!!!