I read a few fics and realized that rushing the 5417 out of my first fic was a terrible idea,
so now im going to try again:p. Then again, I doubt anyone saw the other first fic when i uploaded it in the middle of the night. ONWARD!
It was a simple dream, and one that almost became reality. To recreate America s glory, and with it, the world. But then the dream was corrupted. the government that once boasted its diversity,
became closed minded, the very dream they had worked for was destroyed by their own hand.
Not once, but twice had they been so close to victory that they could practically taste it. Were it not for them losing their history, they may have achieved their goal, and reclaimed their dream.
This is how I believe the Enclave should have done it.
October 23, 2077 7:00 PM EST. The White House.
(an aide enters the oval office) Sir, General Fenix wishes to see you.
(President Miller) Thank you Valerie, please send him in.
(the aide leaves) yes sir.
(The general comes in and stands at attention) Sir, we have reports that suggest the Chinese may launch soon.
How soon, general?
(the general glances at his watch, then the president)
Thats not very long general, are we prepared to retaliate?
I don t know sir, you have the switch, not me.
True... general, how did it come to this? Thousands of years of human evolution, and all we ve achieved is the ability to kill each other from a worlds length away...
I wouldn t know sir, im just paid to kill any commie sons of bitches that get in our way.
(The president chuckles) a perfect answer general, a perfect answer indeed.
Sir?
Nevermind,general, So im assuming you didn t come here just to tell me we all may be dead soon?
No sir, i came to evacuate you to the oil rig.
Oil rig?,general?
Yes sir, we have an oil rig off of the east coast that we ve convinced the Chinese is dry, it s safer than a vault.
Well then, off we go?
Yes sir.
So thats it for now, im pretty much rewriting everything, the BOS conflict will be shorter,
the NCR one may not even happen, and... wait, im giving out plot points! Grr.. oh well, like it?
hate it? wish people would stop sympathizing with the enclave? tell me by review, PM, or pigeon,
whatever is more convenient for you, also i may need OCs in the future...
i only have a few requirements, they have to be from the west coast, part of the brotherhood,enclave(mainly), or pretty much any fo1/2 faction, vaults included, they need a role to play,equipment,and a personality. anons are welcome, no Mary sues unless they re supposed to be (ex frank horrigan type experiments) and no NCR, im still deciding on them. but i will eventually go through Midwest and the east coast, and both places will have their respective BOS and ECV groups.
Also, should they try to recruit the BOS first? or shoot them for being deserters?... turns out i had a lot of requirements... Ted out.