Yeah, I know. I had a story like this called Changed Ways in Supernatural Form. But that didnt really fit, so I deleted it and put in Ash and Mary Lynette form. Sorry.
Chapter 1
Once upon a time in a faraway land called the Lost Kingdom, a prince named Ash couldn't go to sleep.
"Servants! Come to my room immediately" Ash cried out.
If Ash was a nice, polite prince then he would have sucked it up and tried to go to sleep. And he most definitely wouldn't wake up everybody at 1'o clock in the morning. But alas, Ash was not a polite prince, he was a bit too princely: always ordering people around, treating them like they were nothing, showing no signs of respect and he was very rude. His parents were not like him at all. They were in fact the complete opposite. They were the nicest and politest rulers the kingdom had ever had. They actually treated the peasants like human beings. Heck, even if a servant needed something, they would give it to them happily and try to solve their problems. This is why lots of people wanted to work for them. They had tried to reform Ash, but all had failed.
Quickly, all his personal 30 servants plus the 2 guards filed in Ash's master bedroom. The female servants took in Ash's appearance. He was 17 with dirty blonde hair cropped short. He had eyes that could change colours depending on what he was wearing. Sometimes, blue as the sea, green like jade, gray like smoked quartz or hazel like trees. Now, his eyes looked gray as he was wearing a gray t-shirt and gray sweats. You could see his muscles and abs through his t-shirt. All the female servants swooned over him, but he treated them like scum and didn't give a glance.
"I can't go to sleep! You, sing a song!" Ash commanded the frightened butler.
"Umm, Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star h!" the butler sang badly.
"Stop! That was horrible! Never ever do that again." Ash interrupted and shouted
"You, dance!" Ash commanded a maid who had also feverishly fell in love with him.
"Yes, Sir! Anything for you!" the little maid agreed.
This little maid was named Melinda and she was very pretty with blonde hair and brown eyes. Melinda had weaved so many dreams of marrying the young prince. She has also written his name in her skin, cutting herself in the process. She was hopelessly in love. The maid twirled around until she crashed to the floor.
"Can neither of you do anything right?" Ash screamed. This caused Melinda to burst into tears as she couldn't do anything for the man of her dreams.
"Ash, why are you shouting?" You're waking up the whole castle." His mother, a queen named Sarah who was blonde with green eyes said sleepily as she entered his room.
"I can't go to sleep! So I asked the servants to give me some entertainment, but they are horrible." Ash answered rudely.
The queen looked around and noticed Melinda sobbing. Sarah had known that Melinda loved Ash insanely. She had found out a few weeks ago when she had seen Ash's name cut in Melinda's skin. She sighed internally and thought of what the girls of today had become: chasing after men when clearly in her time, men used to chase ladies around.
"Okay Melinda, please go fetch the cook and tell him to make some of that special soup." The queen politely ordered Melinda. The maid quickly nodded and walked from the room. She rubbed her wet eyes with her sleeve.
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