Hi guys,
This is my first Percy Jackson Fanfiction. So it won't be the best, but please try and be supportive. I love constructive criticism.
Thanks
Disclaimer: I don't own Percy Jackson or any of the characters.
Annabeth turned around, looking in the mirror. She was certain that this dress was hideous on her, but her 'friend' Piper assured her that she was the definition of beauty. There was a party on tonight at Jason's place. Annabeth's friends were dragging her to it. It wasn't as though Annabeth was trying to look perfect, but … well … Luke was going to be there. He was and had been for quite some time, Annabeth's crush.
Bang! Piper barged into the room. How she got into the house was anyone's guess. "Come on. We are leaving now." Piper said, before moving towards the door. Annabeth groaned this was going to be a rough night.
"And if I don't want to go?"Annabeth asked in vain.
"Move it." Was all Piper said. The message was clear, you are coming whether you like it or not.
There he was, Luke stood in the backyard, still as hot as ever. Annabeth begun to make her way over to him, Piper had left her hours ago. There was a scream, Annabeth turned around at high speed. It was just Leo causing a fuss, typical. She looked back at Luke, only to find that he was in the middle of a very intense making out session.
Annabeth turned and fled the scene, into the house she ran being very careful not to run into anyone, Piper in particular. However, once she reached the front yard she just sprinted. She had to get away from here. It was all too much, right when she had the courage to ask Luke out he had to go and kiss someone else.
One moment she was engrossed in her thoughts, and the next, she was lying on the ground in pain. She must have fallen over, but what had she tripped on? She looked up to see the hottest boy she had ever seen. His jet black hair was windswept, and his sea-green eyes shined in the darkness. Yep, she was head over heels in love. "Hey, are you alright?" He asked seeming genuinely concerned.
"Yeah" was all that she responded with.
"Ookaaay? You want to back inside with me?"
"Back… I… I just got here" Annabeth stuttered
"Sure, and that was your lookalike that just came running out of the house. Did something happen back there? You started to walk toward Luke before sprinting out of there"
"I sort of used to like him"
"Used to?" Mr Gorgeous Man asked hopefully
"Yeah"
"My name's Percy"
"Mine's Annabeth." Percy grabbed her arm and together they went to the party. Well she was sure as hell never going to forget this night
So what do you think? Isn't the best but, I really like the plot. Please review, they really help me when I am writing my next bit of Fanfic.
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