Chapter 1 – A Revenger's Tragedy, A New Beginning
Disclaimer – Shakugan no Shana (Season 3 especially) and GTA (IV) does not belong to me. I only make this for fun, and not to take their respective copyrights.
"So this is what the dream feels like, this is the victory we longed for.."
A Serbian man walked with two of his friends, three of them carrying a machine gun each. A dead body was left behind them.
Two of them left, asking the first man to come with them, but he refused. "I'll catch up later. Take care, cousin. Stay cool, Jacob. I've got something to do." He turned and walked towards the dead body. However, the dead body was soon engulfed in blue flames, and disappeared.
"What?"
The sky turned red suddenly. Trees stopped swinging, birds stopped chirping. People stopped walking - paralyzed by a force that had never been seen before, in the history of Liberty City. Only one person can move. He directly ran towards two of his friends.
"Roman! Jacob! What's wrong. Move guys, run away!"
But to no avail. They both stopped walking. Their eyes, kept on staring at nothing, and when the Serbian man touched their chest.. "FUCK! They're dead! But why-?"
A giant monster came out of nowhere, and swallowed people along the streets in Liberty City. "What the fuck just happened!"
He quickly hid his two friends, and fired his machine gun towards the giant monster. The monster took hit, and turned over to him. The monster scratched him with its mighty claws. With great pain, the man yelled, "Ouch ! NOBODY FUCKS WITH ME AND MY FAMILY! GET OUT!"
He took his rocket launcher, and shot at the monster. The monster was knocked out, but it stood again soon. And suddenly...
This is my first fanfic.. Review it, please, so I can learn from you guys professional writers. Any suggestion to the story?