My Second attempted on writing a SVTFOE First one got so much hate please don't hate this one Cover art was thanks to star-marionettej2x check her out on Instagram or Tumbler


In the magical kingdom of Mewni everyone was gathered in the castle people and monsters alike were waiting for the new queen of Mewni to come out but she was a little nervous about the whole thing. She was pacing around in her room in a robe staring at the clock every few seconds just then there was a knock on her door which startled her

"My Queen, it's almost time for your coronation." a familiar voice said

"Marco, there is no for the formalities, Star is just fine." the future queen said just then Marco Diaz walked in a suit of armor that fitted his body for easy movement for his karate fighting style

"I know that but as your soon-to-be personal knight, I'm bound to call you by that title Star." Marco said as he walked up to her grabbing her chin to look at him

"I just I'm not used to be called that yet." She said as she looked away from him Marco then hugged her

"Star, I've been by your side ever since we met and yes there is the time that I didn't trust your judgment on things or let you go out on earth by yourself."

"Geez that's making me feel so much better." Star interrupted

"But when you set your mind on something and go for it nothing stops you." Marco finished he then hugged Star "It'll be fine I'll be right in there if you get scared." Marco said as he left her to get ready

Meanwhile

Every knight was standing at attention as the huge doors opened and entered the new ruler of Mewni Star Butterfly walked in in a blue sequin dress a large purple bow on midsection a gold necklace that match the neckline puffy shoulder sleeves and elbow long gloves her hair was curvy as it almost reached the ground (the cover image) she then walked up towards the throne and in front of Glossaryck and got down on one knee in front of him

"Princess Butterfly from being a wee little girl I knew that you were destined for greatness and I know if your parents were still with us they would be proud." Glossaryck complemented "And I'm so proud to be doing this." He then placed the crown on her head officially making her the queen of this dimension she then stood up and looked over towards her knights and Marco she then walked out onto the balcony and looked down on her subjects they cheered as she waved at them she then smiled her signature smile, but it was short lived as pillar of fire came up and a man in a blood-red jacket with matching shirt and shoes and black pants came out of the fire Star and Marco both knew who it was. Marco then ran up to her and pulled her back behind her

"Well Well Well, look who finally grew up to a queen." the demon ex-boyfriend said

"Tom, what are you doing here?" Star asked

"Oh ya know just coming to see the new queen and ask her for her hand in marriage." He said as she got down on one knee with his hand out

"Tom, we broke up years ago move on." Star said

"Starship I'm not giving you a choice this time." he said as he snapped his fingers and hordes of Demons come out of the pillar of fire and started to storm the castle (no pun intended)

"Knights, protect the queen." Marco yelled as he pushed Star away from Tom the knights then carried away leaving Tom and Marco alone

"What makes you think you can stop me." Tom yelled with hands on fire Marco then took his battle stance and charged towards him

Meanwhile

Star was being pulled by Manfred towards a safe room

"Manfred, let me go I need to protect my people I need to help Marco." She said

"My queen, you too important right now and your wand might not work so please just stay here and let the knights do their job." Manfred explained as he locked Star in the safe room

Back with Marco

Tom fire was out of control Marco did his best to control it but found it was pointless he had to get rid of his armor leaving him in his earth clothes on the floor bruised and battered he looked up towards Tom.

"Oh look no more armor." he said as he grabbed his collar "Now time for you to die." Tom said as he created a pure red flame and held it close to his face Marco then closed his eyes envisioning Star on last time.

"Get ready Marco!" Tom yelled. "Wait Tom don't kill him we might need him."Said a voice that echo then sighed and drops him

"Man your plan better work cause I'm getting bored of it already." Tom complained

"Be patient Tomson you'll get your revenge and Star okay just wait a little longer." Said the voice "Fine." Tom said and created a cage for Marco and sent him away and went to find Star.

With Star

She was messing around in the safe room tossing her wand in the air waiting for something to happened just then a dimensional portal opened and Queen Ponyhead appeared(Princess Ponyhead)

"Yp b-fly we need to get you out of here." she said

"But what…"

"He's been captured by Tom." Ponyhead said bluntly Star then covered her mouth and was on the verge of tears

"I-Is he…?" Star didn't want to finish her sentence

"I don't know Star, but we need to get you out of here." Ponyhead explained but Star wouldn't move

"B-fly if Marco was here he would want you safe after all he is your "Knight"." Ponyhead encouraged "Would Earth turd be happy to see you all sad like this?" She asked

"No." She said

"Then c'mon gurl." Star then stood up and jumped out of the doomed dimension


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