A/N- This is my first story, so I would appreciate constructive criticism on how to make my writing better. It own anything.
Prologue
Warm tears streamed down Candace's red face as the menacing creature in the corner advanced. His emotionless grey eyes shone with mischief; making the young girl cry harder. As he stepped out of the shadows, the moon light hit his triangular face in a way that made his sinister smirk into a look of pure evil. Candace warily stepped backwards, only to collide with the wall furthest from the door.
God, if I die today, please let my family know how much I love them. If I survive, please help me live. Also-
Her thoughts were cut off as she felt his hot breath on her unusually long neck. She froze in terror as his cold, large hands grasped the edge of her new white skirt. No! Please! Then suddenly, one of his hands reached into his black hoodie and pulled out a sharp pocket knife And...
"No! Daddy please! I'll do anything else. Please don't do this," screamed the five year old red head as new tears blurred her vision.
"You can and WILL do this! Shut up if you want to survive this," slurred Mr. Flynn as he put a floral pillow over his daughters face. "Besides, the faster I'm done, the faster you are done for tonight," he mused in a somewhat nicer tone. Next, he slammed the baseball bat that Phineas left in the room on top of her head.
The small girl thrashed in terror and agony until she just about passed out from the immense pain that radiated from her head. While flailing around, the pillow slipped from over her swollen eyes. So, the glint from the sharp knife that was heading towards her stomach, was the last thing she remembered seeing as blackness clouded her vision and she fell limp in the arms of the one person who single handedly ruined her life.
"Kevin! You have to wake up! We will only be here as long as you need. You have to remember the rest! Please awaken," yelled the usually calm talking zebra as the present fifteen year old girl shot upright in her bed.
"Oh Ducky Momo! I had the dream again. What am I going to do?" sighed a very shaken up Candace.
A/N- well, review if you liked it... or if you didn't. It doesn't matter. Thanks!