Hello! Bi_gaming here! This is my first fanfic, so pls don't flame. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Plus, I've got no idea where to go after chapter 2, so Support & ideas would be great! Oh, and FYI, I'm going to be including the names from some of my favorite fictional books, such as the alchemist, the Septimus heap collection, etc. Just going to say this now, the story is based in Hoenn. This is the intro, just so you'll know who's who.
"Mom, I'm home!" Adam yelled as he walked in through the kitchen door.
"There's the birthday boy," Adam's mom said as she walked into the kitchen. "Do you know what today is?" "Today's my tenth birthday!" Yelled Adam, "Does that mean we can go and register me as a trainer?" "That's right," Said Amy, [the Mom] patting her son's shoulder. "Would you like to go now? We'd be back before the guests arrive." "YES!" Adam practically screamed. "I mean, yes please." He added, noticing the stern look his mother gave him. "Then let's get going." Amy said while putting on her hoes.
The walk to the outpost was quick, and when they got there Adam was literally jumping with excitement. "Calm down Adam." Amy said while opening the door. The ranger's outpost was very plain, decorated with only with a couch and a coffee table stacked with old magazines.
"Welcome to the Verdanturf town ranger station, how may I help you?" the lady behind the counter asked "Adam Scott," Adam said while holding out his hand, "Penny" the attendant said while shaking his hand. "I came to register as a trainer."
"Sure," said Penny, "Just stand over here so I can take your picture." She said while leading Adam to the camera. "I'll need your birthdate, uh-huh, ok now your address, ok now all you need to do is sign here," Penny handed him a digital writer, which he wrote his name on. "Okay, now we wait while the info is processing… And done." She finished as she handed him the piece of plastic that was his trainer ID. "Thanks!" Adam yelled at Penny as he left the station with his mom.
"I can't believe it, I'm a trainer now!" "Yes, but you don't have any Pokémon." His mom said calmly. "So?" Adam asked, "Uncle Steve said he was going to get me some Pokémon eggs." "That's IF he comes" Said Amy as they walked up to the house. "Yeah, Yeah, I know." Adam sighed. His uncle has been known to take extremely long journeys, which often brought him to faraway regions such as Sinnoh or Kalos.
Later that day, the guests arrived. First came in Aunt Angie and Adam's cousins; Josh and Sophie. Next came Adam's father, saying, "I got here as soon as I could." Adam's uncle Steve got there halfway through the gift-opening, during which Adam had received some clothes, a movie, and a poke-wallet.
"Sorry I'm late, had to stop by the daycare and pick up these." He said as he showed them two magnificently colored eggs. One was a slight pink, with green patches. The other was pure white, with navy blue patches. "Here ya go, Adam." He said as he handed the eggs to Adam. "I think I can hear noises coming from one of them, what should I do?" he rushed. "Bring them up to your room, Adam; too many people around it could scare it." "Okay" Adam said as he rushed the eggs off to his room. He set them down in the space against the two beds. [I'll explain later] When he closed the door, he saw the pink one shake. He saw it shake a second time as he walked towards it. Then, a chip fell off the egg, then another, and another! Soon, almost all of the egg was gone. There was only an egg-wall between Adam & the Pokémon. 'Who's there?' the voice sounded in Adam's head. "I'm Adam, and you can come out, I'm not going to hurt you." When the Ralts poked its head out from behind the shell, Adam gasped. What he saw in front of him was a normal-looking Ralts, but instead of willow-green hair and a red spike, it had sky blue hair and an orange spike. 'What's wrong?' the Ralts asked. "Nothing, in fact, it's a good thing, one sec." Adam replied, as he went to grab his Pokédex. "Let me scan you with this, it won't hurt, it'll just tell me information." He scanned the Ralts with the machine and it told him that it was a female, shiny Ralts. "Sorry, it's just that I've never seen a shiny Pokémon before." The sound of a hungry stomach shook him out of his trance, and he realized that this Ralts would need something to eat. "Umm, do want something to eat?" he asked 'that would be nice.' "Why don't you come down to meet my family? We could get you something to eat while we're down there." 'Sure, why not.' They went down the stairs together, so that he could help Ralts if she needed help. "Hey everyone, this is Ralts." He then went on to introduce all his relatives to the new Pokémon. "Gosh, never thought that you'd be shiny, Adam, take good care of her." Steve remarked seriously. "Oh, yeah! Mom, Ralts needs food, do we have any?" Adam said once he remembered what he came down for in the first place. "Sure." Amy said, as she ducked into the kitchen to get some food. After they ate, Amy looked at the clock and said, Adam, it's getting near bedtime. "Okay, ma :( "He said as he got up. "Oh, wait!" uncle Steve yelled as he remembered something. "These are for the Pokémon." He said as he handed Adam 2 luxury balls. "Be sure to catch your Pokémon, before someone else does." With that remark, Adam caught Ralts and immediately let her out. "Oh, and this is for you" Steve handed him a leather glove embedded with a Ruby, Emerald, and Sapphire "With that out of the way," Amy spoke up, "Off to bed with you two." "Okay mom, let's go Alice."
POV; downstairs.
"I wanted to give you this," Steve was telling Amy once Adam was out of earshot. "It's an item that'll make his two Pokémon even more powerful. I'm giving it to you because I don't think Adam is ready for it yet. You're his mom, so I guess that you'll know when the time is right. When it is, I want you to give those to him. Tell him there for his Pokémon."
POV; upstairs.
"You can sleep in my brother's old bed." Adam told Ralts as he entered the room. 'Wont your brother want it?' Alice asked. "Septimus doesn't live here anymore. He moved away a while ago. I was thinking of a name for you, and I think 'Alice' is good. How about you?" 'Sure' Alice replied. "Anyway, goodnight, Alice." Adam yawned 'good night Adam' Alice yawned, and they both fell asleep, not knowing the next day's wonders.
And there it is! This my first fanfic, so please, do comment, what could I have done better? What would you like to see? I already know what's in the other egg, and you'll have to wait till next chapter to find out! Bi_gaming out.