Hi people, this is Garbo(gaabo) and here is chapter 6. I would like to say thanks to my friend candy(sweetxcandyx) who let me help her and do this 2 way story thing. This might be a different ending and you guys might not like it but i hope you will. I got this ending from reading the review from Catlover12. So Catlover12, i'd like to thank you=D Um...i'm new at this and i dont have really nice and good language when it comes to writing so this ending will contain regular dialog words and sentences. SO because of that i'd like to say sry(sorry) and um...if you like how this ending is heading then please say so in a review, but if you dont, dont be a hater and make a review or even suggest something and i'll see if i can change anything to make a better ending. thank you, enjoy, and review! =D
"Maybe you should pack everything that belongs to you. Since, you know, you're moving in with me."
"Not forever," said Thierry in a very soft voice. He doubt that Maya even heard him. "I don't have a lot of things I'll need, just a couple of shirts, pants, shoes, and basically everything in my closets and wardrobes."
After Thierry finished packing and ended up with 5 big suitcases, he loaded them into the small white mini cooper. Surprisingly, the small car could fit all 5 suitcases. Obviously, Thierry couldn't just leave yet. Something had to be done first.
"Maya, take the curse off now!"
I had headphones in my ear, but I could hear Thierry all the way from the front garden to the third floor where my room was. Although all I heard was muffled noises, I knew it was him. He was leaving with Maya, as promised to keep me alive and safe.
"Fine,-snap snap- there, we can go now."
When I saw her snap her fingers twice, I thought I was done for. I thought she tricked us. But surprisingly, nothing happened to me.
"Wait, how am I so sure that the snap didn't kill Hannah? I need to go check on her before I leave"
I was hoping that Thierry wouldn't come up. I don't want to see him before he goes for how long it'll take him to escape from Maya. I didn't want to see him. If I saw him, even one glance, I know I'll miss him and want to see him very badly. The good thing is, from where my room is, all I can see are the tall trees that are planted in the garden. Even hearing a muffled voice, which I know was Thierry's, I already miss him a lot. Missing Thierry already, Hannah began to shed tears.
"Thierry, Thierry, Thierry, a deal's a deal. We leave now, as promised. I take the curse off and you leave with me."
She said it so calmed and...not nasty. Maya, she seemed different today. She kept her words, but could this all be part of her plan? Like she said, I stepped into the car and depart from my mansion.
Without any goodbyes, farewells, and see you soon's, Thierry and Maya drove away in the small white mini cooper. Wherever they were headed...Thierry knew that he will return home and stay home forever with his love, Hannah Snow.
Finally, they arrived. As Thierry stepped out of the car, he felt a sudden chill down him back. Hm... this place feels dull and dead...could it be? We're at Maya's Place?
"Thierry, since you're my very special honey, you get to choose whichever room you like in this mansion," said Maya with a very evil but somewhat happy smile.
Could it be? Maya's gone nuts? She's being too kind, letting me choose which room I want than forcing me to share rooms with her?....too kind. But, I can't drop my guard because of her tricks. Well, since Maya has tricks, I should use some of my own tricks too.
"No, I think I'll stay in the same room with you." This ought to throw her off guard. Bet you didn't see that coming Maya. No matter what tricks you throw at me, I will not lose. I will destroy your plan and go back to Hannah.
"NO, Thierry, I think you didn't hear me well enough. I said you-choose-your-own-room! And that doesn't mean MY room"
She threw those words at Thierry with a mad tone, and then slammed the car door shut until a window had cracked and left towards the house.
Something is wrong with Maya. Knowing her for all these years, she'd want me to share the same room with her. But I wonder what got on her nerves. It's only been one day and she totally changed, from evil and you-will-be-mine-Thierry to gloomy annoyed I-have-you-but-leave-me-alone.
Not wanting to stay any longer in the cold night outside the mansion, Thierry went inside.
While having the attitude of wanting to destroy Maya's evil plan, Thierry chose a room not far from Mayas'.
"This room seems big enough for me, although it's smaller than my old room and the smell-ew. At least there's a great view from this window. I think I should start unpacking my things. I might as well stay for while trying to figure out what Maya's evil plan is. Better yet, I'll destroy it and Maya once I find out." After unpacking and getting used to the new room and house, I noticed that Maya never left her room after going in.
Thierry, knowing the house was old, took a tour by himself. As he finished the tour and headed back to his room, he noticed that Maya's room door was slightly opened. Curious Thierry wanted to know what Maya was doing, headed towards the door and peeped. Shocked, Thierry saw Maya writing in a diary. Knowing Maya for a long time, Thierry never knew Maya had a habit of writing in a diary. I need to know what she's writing in there. I think I should return to my room now and wait till she's out and then I'll take that chance and snatch the diary and see what she wrote in there. Maya, this is the only time where you don't win. Just you wait, this time, I will win.
Not long after, Maya left her room and drove out. Before she did so, she stopped by Thierry's room and told him she was going to Safeway for some 'girl' stuff. She never left the time of when she'll return. But by where the house is, Safeway ought to be very far. Perfect, this was Thierry's chance to go into her room.
As he entered, he noticed something special. Right in front of his eyes was the diary sitting on the bed peacefully. Until Thierry picked it up and searched through. He whipped through the pages so fast he almost ripped one out. He scanned each page and found nothing about an evil plan. As he continued scanning each page, he came across something very interesting.
NOTE: people who just started read from this chapter, i suggest you go to sweetxcandyx for chapters 1-5
NOTE: this is chapter 6
Chapter 7 release date: Sunday, August 16, 2009
