Chapter 1 the arrival on a destroyed planet

Why did we have to land on flamell asked luka Because there is a soler strom in space and its to dangerous to travel at this time said marvelous yes but you do relize that since we are here that ahim will have to face her demons right i though you didnt want her to face them so soon said joe to marvelous. Well yes but if we move now then we risk damageing the gallion said marvelous just then ahim walks in. What are we doing on my home planet marvelous said ahim we are just waiting out the storm right now said marvelous ok well iam going to go for a walk by my self ok marvelous said ahim actually ahim can i walk wih you asked marvelous to ahim. No if you wouldnt mind i would like to walk alone for a bit said ahim. outside ahims pov i cant stand being here after all i watch my family die and countless others as well plus my twin i miss them so much i cant tell the others i'll feel weak if i do thouht ahim she didnt notice that marvelous came up behind her and saw her deep in thought then he saw her run he runs after her yelling her name. AHIM wait come back yells marvelous he sees her stop at a tree and he hears her gasp then he sees her fall to her knees sobbing her heart out. I...I...I iam so sorry kai so sorry i shouldnt have been so selfish i thought i needed you but in reality you needed me more and for that i am sorry sobbed ahim marvelous comes up and put his coat around her shoulders. Oh marvelous its you sobbed ahim. Ahim tell me what wrong why are you crying asked a concerned marvelous. Because i miss them all of them even my twin brother who died before flamell was destroyed said ahim. Ahim can i tell you something asked marvelous. sure said ahim. well ahim i am deeply in love with you said marvelous oh marvelous i love you to and as long as i have you by my side i think we can face my demons togather said ahim. I wouldnt have it any other way said marvelous they reach the place ahim starts to tremble this doesnt go unotieced by marvelous. Ahim are you sure your up for this for this i mean your trembling and you look pale to said marvelous just as ahim is about to repley she collapsese marvelous catches her. AHIM! wake up begged marvelous.

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