AU:This fanfic is for my best pal, she requested this fanfic because she was inspired by this story "Struck by lightning" by Chris Colfer. So she wanted a story like Carson Philips, she wants to make change or atleast change something for the better. Even though Monchele or Finchel is gone, imaginations can change that. She is also a big fan of Finchel/Monchele therefore the name -_-'. So Eloise Jannine Cordero your welcome, now make your lil' bro believe. Kay lang yan dude
Just an ordinary person brought change to Finn and Rachel's life, she played cupid for them to workout again even for others. Will she succeed or not?
Rachel was going to be late for her class in NYADA, she hurriedly got off her bed, showered, putted her clothes on, grabbed a toast and shutting the door so quick before Kurt can even greet her. She quickened her pace and hailed for a taxi.
Eloise Michele-Monteith is a 19 year old girl who recently graduated from highschool and just move to New York from Ohio, instead of going to college schools she wanted to enter the NYADA where she can pursue her dreams to become a musician, ever since she was little she loved music so that's what made her to live out her dreams. Here she was on her apartment running late for her first day in NYADA and her first class was dance. She hurriedly went out of the building and hailed a taxi.
At NYADA…..
Rachel was sprinting through the hallway only 4 minutes to spare until she gets to her class when suddenly….
"Oof!" Rachel oofed stumbling a little but gaining her balance when she opened her eyes she saw a female brunette who is like about her same height with a guitar.
"I-im so sorry!" the girl said while trying to get up and Rachel immediately helped her up
"I'm sorry for bumping on to you, you see I was running late and Im new here" the girl apologized again and explained embarrassingly looking down at the floor
"No no it's okay its just an accident" Rachel said at the girl in front of her and introduced herself "Hi Im Rachel Berry Im a junior here, Nice to meet you" holding out her hand as if to shake hands with Eloise.
Eloise couldn't believe what she heard,Rachel Berry as in Rachel Berry the one who is her idol and one of her inspirations, she looked up and blinked her eyes if she's dreaming but then realized that it wasn't "Oh my god its really you!" but then she suddenly realized that she suddenly shouted caused by her super shock and excitedness "uh sorry again for bursting out like that" Eloise grabbed Rachel's hand and shook it "Nice to meet you Rachel, Im Eloise Michele-Monteith I just recently moved here in New York and Im new here"
Rachel smiled "Well Eloise welcome to New York and here at NYADA, you said you are new here? Why don't you let me tour you aroud here?" Eloise agreed and Rachel asked again "So whats your first class?"
"Well lets see in my schedule it says Dance is my first class…." Eloise said
"Oh really! Its my first class too, here let me show you" Rachel said then the two went through the hallway and went to Cassie's class which is dance.
"Well Rachel you're 15 minutes late so that means your not going to this class today now get out" Cassie yelled at RachelRachel protested "Bu-but Miss July I know I was late but I met someone who needed help so I helped her way here by the way she's new here so cut us some slack will you?" then pointed at Eloise.
Cassandra looked at the girl which Rachel is pointing to and asked "So your new here? Let me see your application"
Eloise handed her application which Cassandra took away immediately and read it. "Hmm well ok its seems like its your first day here so I'll give you ladies your slack but now CHANGE AND START DANCING !"
With that Rachel and Eloise hurriedly went to the changing room and changed within less than a minute
"Well that was slow even your grandmother is faster than you!" Cassie angrily yelled at them
After the Dance class
Eloise and Rachel are on the changing room, while changing to their casual clothes again Eloise sighed loudly.
"Phew that was intense I heard that Miss July gets easily pissed off man but that wasn't pissed off its like she is another replica of the highschool bitch from my highschool" Eloise tiredly said while stretching her limbs
"I agree but sometimes she can be good if not from the influence of alcohol" Rachel explained
Eloise jerked her head and quietly whispered "Wait you mean she's like drunk all the time, like she's you know li-like That!?"
Rachel nodded "Well yeah I don't know her problems but lets just leave it there and let her be, as long she don't go kicking our butts…" with that answer Eloise just shrugged, she and Rachel are finished changing to their casual clothes and they made their way out to the hallway while walking Eloise looked at her schedule.
"Hmm lets see what I got here next, looks like Im having acting class" Eloise said and Rachel whipped her head and excitingly said "Really what a coincidence my next class is actually acting too…Hmm okay let me see your schedule" Eloise handed her schedule to Rachel "Yep well looks like you have the same class with me and that's okay atleast I can tour you around"
AFTER A FEW HOURS ITS ALREADY BREAK TIME
Rachel and Eloise went out to grab snacks, while they're eating Rachel broke the silence
"So you say are new here to New York? Where did you come from?"
"Oh yeah its my first time here in New York and I actually came from Ohio and graduated recently from William McKinley High School"
"REALLY!? I came from Ohio and graduated from William McKinley too"
"Yeah I knew that your on the school's yearbook and you guys were like my idols, you guys are AWESOME no no Im serious really but your my favorite among them and you inspired me to live out my dream so here I am trying to live out my dream to become a musician"
"Wow you are one ambitious person Eloise I like that kind of personality in every person, No matter what happens we wont give up and try our best" and Eloise nodded in agreement
After finishing their food they went back inside the NYADA with 15 minutes more to spare until their next class which is Music.
"Well looks like we are a little bit early for this class now if your new -"
Just then the bell rang and a middle aged man came in and greet his students
"Ok now you've heard that there is someone new joining us and she should be right here" then looked at Eloise sitting next to Rachel "Ah there you are young lady now why wont you come forward and introduce yourself"
Eloise stood up and started to walk forward until she reached the front row next to
"Hi everyone my name is Eloise Michele-Monteith or you can just call me Eloise or Loise and I'm a Freshman here" Eloise said clearly and louder enough for everyone to hear and understand which all the students greeted her.
"Now we all know all the rules here if your new you have to share your talents, now Miss Michele-Monteith care to share your talent? asked which made Eloise nod her head and went back to her seat to get her guitar and walked back to the front again and pulled up a chair and she started finger pick her guitar strings and began singing.
If I should die before I wake
It's 'cause you took my breath away
Losing you is like living in a world with no air
Oh
I'm here alone, didn't wanna leave
My heart won't move, it's incomplete
Wish there was a way that I can make you understand
But how do you expect me
to live alone with just me
'Cause my world revolves around you
It's so hard for me to breathe
Tell me how I'm supposed to breathe with no air
Can't live, can't breathe with no air
It's how I feel whenever you ain't there
It's no air, no air
Got me out here in the water so deep
Tell me how you gonna be without me
If you ain't here, I just can't breathe
It's no air, no air
No air, air - No
No air, air - No
No air, air - No
No air, air
I walked, I ran, I jumped, I flew
Right off the ground to float to you
There's no gravity to hold me down for real
But somehow I'm still alive inside
You took my breath, but I survived
I don't know how, but I don't even care
So how do you expect me
to live alone with just me
'Cause my world revolves around you
It's so hard for me to breathe
Tell me how I'm supposed to breathe with no air - (Uh - oh)
Can't live, can't breathe with no air - (No - No)
It's how I feel whenever you ain't there
It's no air, no air
Got me out here in the water so deep - (So Deep)
Tell me how you gonna be without me - (Without Me)
If you ain't here, I just can't breathe ( Breathe - No - No- aha)
It's no air, no air (No - No)
No air, air
No air, air
No air, air
No air, air
No more
It's no air, no air
No air, air
No air, air
No air, air
No air, air
You got me out here in the water so deep
Tell me how you gonna be without me
If you ain't here, I just can't breathe
It's no air, no air
No Air (No)
No Air (No - No)
No Air
No Air
No Air
After she finished her song everyone looked quiet even then she asked "Was I ba-" which was cut of when everyone bursting out clapping and cheering for her.
"Now I must say Miss Michele-Monteith that was an outstanding performance for someone at your age now please you may now sit"
"Thank you sir" Eloise walked back to her sit carrying her guitar and Rachel was looking at her astounded
"Wow Oh my Gosh Eloise that was wonderful! Don't mind if I ask you to join our band" Rachel said
"Really?! Are you serious?! Man that would be awesome! So when can I start auditions?"
"Well you can start tomorrow after classes and after today's class I'll take you to my apartment and introduce you to one of my bandmates also roommates" Rachel said
"Okay Excited level overloaded sure I'll be there!"
AFTER ALL THEIR CLASSES ENDED
Rachel and Eloise are heading to Rachel's apartment but Eloise stopped
"Whats wrong?"Rachel asked
"How'd you know that I live here?"Eloise asked confusingly
"Wait you live here also that's great I also live here now lets go meet and introduce you to my roommates" Rachel said excitedly and both of them went up the stair and continued to the hallway until they reached Rachel's apartment.
While Rachel was getting her keys to unlock the door Eloise suddenly said
"Woah were neighbors too I just live next door to you"while pointing at the other door next to Rachel's apartment
"And that's even more majorly great, were just not classmates but were also neighbors got to tell you girl I think were going to get so well!" Rachel said and Eloise nodded in agreement, when the lock of Rachel's door clicked open they both went inside and Rachel called Santana and Kurt.
"KURT! SANTANA! ARE YOU HERE I WANT YOU TO MEET SOMEONE!" Rachel yelled
"What is it hobbit finally found a boy-toy?" Santana sarcastically asked
"Santana again be nice to our guest, now Rachel who is this lady friend of yours?"
"Oh Kurt, Santana meet Eloise Michele-Monteith" Rachel said and extended her arm like to present Eloise
"Hey guys" Eloise greeted
"Nice to meet you Eloise!" Kurt walked up to Eloise to take her hand and to shake it
"Well hey there another hobbit, now Rachel please don't tell me you are going to enter the Lord of the Rings to replace the hobbits?" Santana said her hands on her waist,cocking one of her eyebrows
"Again Santana be nice to Eloise, I'm so sorry Eloise for Santana's behavior she's just always cranky"
"No no its cool, its fine its really nice to see you guys" Eloise said
"CRANKY?! OH IM SO GONNA GO ALL LIMA HEIGHTS ON YOUR SORRY PORCELAIN ASS LADY HUMMEL!" Santana yelled at Kurt
"Woah woah guys no fighting in front of our new friend here" Rachel stood in front of Kurt and Santana
"Ugh whatever" "Sorry Rachel" Santana and Kurt replied
"Now guys you wouldn't believe this, Eloise here has an awesome voice and I want her to audition for our band tomorrow and she already have my vote" Rachel excitingly said
"Really that's great! And cant wait for it now do you want anything for snacks?" Kurt asked
"If its okay with you guys anything would be fine"
"Okay now wait for a couple of minutes while I prepare our snacks Rachel? Santana? What would the two of you like?"
"Just Anything" they both replied
When Kurt went to go in their kitchen the 3 ladies sat to the couch, Rachel and Eloise talking and Santana is lazily pressing the TV remote while looking for a nice channel to watch but after a while she just gave up because she cant find any good channels and she turned to face Rachel and Eloise.
"So now little Midget where did you came from anyways?"
"Uh I came from Ohio…."Eloise replied quietly
"Really from that little ol' backwater town yep came from their too, so where did you graduated from?" Santana asked
"William McKinley" Eloise replied
"Okay okay enough with the questions your only giving me a one sentenced answer" Santana while wavering her hand as if to change topic
After a few seconds Kurt appeared holding a bowl of cookies with a gallon of milk placing it on the table and going back to the kitchen to retrieve the other snacks.
"Wow Kurt that is some mouth-watering cookies you made!" Eloise said
"Why thank you Eloise, cooking is one of my hobbies so enjoy them" Kurt said while placing a bag of Doritos chips with sour cream onion and cheese dip, 4 glass and a 1 large Coke.
The 4 of them ate while asking Eloise about Ohio and whats her life in there.
"Wow so you're a Filipino that's cool, can't wait you to meet our band mates and maybe in the near future our glee mates" Kurt told Eloise
"Wow really! You guys are really cool I'm thankful that my first day here in New York is going pretty well, can't thank you enough guys" Eloise thanked Kurt,Rachel and Santana
"Well don't like me pretty much cuz your still not on my favorite or at least on the list of my liked people but don't do anything stupid to let me put you on my Disliked list midget" Santana asked
"Santana Im not going to keep you reminding to be nice everytime for God's sake" Kurt told Santana which earned him an eye roll, "Anyways Welcome to New York again, the city where dreams come true lets have a toast shall we?" Kurt pulled out a champagne from the paper bag under the table.
"Hahaha thanks guys! You really are awesome" Eloise said
"CHEERS!" they yelled and clanked their champagne flute together.
So what do you guys think? Please leave a review to prevent my cat from eating my Cookies. :) (Just made some changes, I changed her age)