This is a short poem that I wrote for a creative writing class in high school. I wanted to share this with others and such. Review please. I based it off of the vocaloid's alice of human sacrifice song. but put my own twist into it. enjoy

Within a place called "Wonderland"

There was a murder

Five of them were suspects

All named "Alice"

A red girl with blood on her

A blue boy with notes to spare

A green girl with laughter

Two yellow twins with dreaming stare

Since all of them were Alice

The cops were in despair

All of them had alibis

But no evidence

With nothing to convict them of

They had to let them go

Now freedom is what they wanted

So they can play again

Wonderland is now safe from any blood shed

The five scattered, the land is still stained

Hiding in the shadows they wait the faithful day

For now the five cards lay low within the deck