this is my first fan fiction ever so please be nice and i would love to hear what you think of my story! I don't own any rights to Hollywood heights or the characters in it
Loren Tate has just gotten home from a year long tour and she is outside West
Valley Charter High School where she is waiting for her bff to get out of school and
surprise her. No one knew that when she was coming home from the tour so she
wanted to surprise her BFF. She heard the bell ring so she decided to text Mel
to Mel: "hey whats up long time no see!"
to Loren: "OMG! I KNOW! I MISS YOU LO! When are you coming home!?"
to Mel: "oh idk it might be a while"
As she sent the last text she heard the bell and was getting out of the limo and
headed into the court yard where she knew her bff would be. As soon as she got
out of the limo everyone started screaming and running towards her. She just stood
There and laughed, knowing that Mel would want to know what was going on and run to the very front. And that is exactly what happened.
Mel:"OH MY GOD! LO! YOUR HOME! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE?! WHY AM I STILL SCREAMING!?"
Loren:"well your mighty mel when are you not screaming?"
Mel:"i know right omg! I missed you so much super star I didnt know how much
longer I could have gone with out seeing you!"
Loren: "I know i need my mighty mel with me! oh by the way I love your outfit it
says 'im loud, im proud, keep up' it is sooo cute."
Mel: "really you dont think its to much? lisa says im wearing it for 'a cry for
attintion"'
Loren:"No, Mel I love it only you could pull it off"
From across the court yard mel hears one of her closest friends calling her name
Eddie Duran
Eddie: "Hey Mel, did you finish those notes for his..." Eddie couldnt believe his
eyes was Loren Tate actually talking to Mellisa someone hes known since grade 4.
Mel:"Eddie im glad your here have you seen Adam i want Loren to meet him"
Eddie:"um, no i havent seen him since 4th period"
Mel:"hmmmmm wonder where he is. oh, well he'll show up eventu..."
Mel notices how Eddie is looking at Loren and he clears his throat as a sign to
introduce them. Loren just stands there and giggles at what he just did
Mel:"oh, yea right ummm Loren this is Eddie Duran, Eddie this is Loren Tate"
Eddie:"I know who she is i'd be stupid if i didn't Mel..."
Loren:"well Eddie its nice to finally meet you ive heard so much about you."
Eddie:"really? how?"
Loren:"well every time im in town Mel starts talking about you almost like she has a
crush on you"
Loren starts eying Mel and Mel just stands there thinking" they would look so good
together, they have so much in common and they both love music... ohhhhhhhhh
light bulb! wait what did Loren just say?
Mel:"Wait what? No I do not have crush on Eddie I have a boyfriend that i am very
much in love with Miss Loren Tate!"
Loren: "Mel relax im just kidding wow didn't know you were so defensive.
well Mel i just came buy to ask you how many backstage passes you need?"
Mel:"oh well I'm sure Adam would want to come"
Loren:"Is that all? Eddie do you want to come?"
Eddie could help it she was so beautiful, any guy would be stupid not to think that
even if she wasn't a big rock star she would still be beautiful.
Loren was starting to get a little crept out because Eddie just stood there staring at
her with drool coming out of his mouth
Loren and Mel:"EDDIE!?"
Eddie:"yeah whats up?"
Loren:"did you want to come"
Eddie:"come to what?"
Loren:"my concert tonight at the Avolan?"
Eddie:"me?"
Loren: "yeah, any friend of Mel's is a friend of mine come on it'll be fun you can
hang out back stage be in the front row and youd get to come to the after party."
Eddie:"oh um yeah sure i'd love to go"
Loren: "Awesome! Ill be right back im just going to go to the car and get the
passes"
Loren walks off and Mel is eying Eddie. Eddie looks at Mel
Eddie:"What? Why are you looking at me like that Mel?"
Mel:"Because it couldn't of been more obvious that you are in love with my girl
Loren Tate!"
Eddie:"Psh what?! No im not..."
Mel:"yes you are! you cant hide that from me Eddie Duran!"
Eddie:"It doesn't matter she has a boyfriend its not like she would ever notice me
and besides shes a rock star she would never go for a high school boy like me."
Mel: "are you serious Eddie you are like her number one fan yo are in love with her
and she inspires you wright music"
Loren had just showed back up with the passes and heard that Eddie rights music
Loren: "oh, Eddie i didnt know you wrote music."
Eddie: "oh, um, no i dont think so its a work in progress" Eddie said a little
embarrased
Loren: "thats so cool maybe i could hear it sometime?"
Eddie:"oh i dont think so its still a work in progress"
Loren:"Eddie you shouldnt be afraid to show people how you feel thats all that
music is its showing people how you feel and why feel that way"
Eddie: "but im not like you i dont like to tell people how i feel "
Loren:"you dont have to be like me to tell people how you feel, you probaly wont
believe this but i used to be just like you, all shy and confused not wanting anybody
to hear my music and then i met Mel and she showed me how to have fun and not
care what other people thought about my stuff as long as i loved it. if it werent for
Mel i probaly be just a regular person still wrighting music in my room with the
door locked so no one could hear me. but im not i made somthing out of it and i
make people want to get up off there chairs and dance and sing along with me. i
really just wright songs now to thank people for being my fans and helping for
being where i am and who i am today"
Eddie: "i think for know ill just keep my music to myself for the time being"
Loren: "oh dont worry eddie i will get you to play a song for me one day and that is
a promise" smileing devilishly but jokingly "uh well i have to go as soon as i am
done signing some autographs i have to go meet up with Kelly she wants to have a
meeting about the concert tonight so ill see you guys later?"
Mel: "yea and ill try to get Adam to come he's a huge fan."
Loren: laughing "okay Mel, and what about you Eddie?"
Eddie: "wouldnt miss it"
Loren: "awsome ill have my driver pick you up around 6:30ish"
Mel: "okay bye Lo!"
Loren: "bye guys!"
As Lorens walking back to the limo after she signed a few autographs for her fans at
the school Mel couldn't wait till Eddie and Loren hooked up they were perfect for
each other she just had to get Loren away from that jackass of a boyfriend Tyler
Rorke. She knew he was cheating on Loren with someone at the school she just had
to prove it before she told Loren.
Loren was in the limo when she saw him.
Loren: "TYLER!"
Tyler: "hey, babe what are you doing here?" he said confused
Loren: "i came to surprise Mel. And to drop off the passes for her and some of her
friends"
Tyler: "You should really drop Mel shes just an anchor holding pulling you down."
Loren: "Ty! I cant believe you just said that Mel is my best friend, and nothing will
change that! Stop trying to change my life im sick and tired of all your bullshit of
trying to change me!"
Tyler: "Your right im sorry babe. Am I forgiven?"
Loren: "For now"
Loren still couldnt believe tyler just said that they had been together for almost a
year and he kept wanting to take the next level with her but she just wasnt ready
to do that.
Little did she know that tyler had a plan that she wasnt ready for and wouldnt be
ready for, for a long long time.
Eddie was so pumped he rushed home to see his dad tell him that he just met Loren
Tate and he was going to get to go to the concert and hang out backstage with Mel
and Adam and go to the after party he couldn't wait to see Loren again.
