The Creature in the Woods

As I am strolling along

Alone in the woods

I hear a noise

Like a mouse tiptoeing along

I feel strange

Someone's here

Watching me

Awaiting an attack

I hear "Jaws" in my head

For someone is near

A rustle in the bushes

Whip! goes the wind past my bare arms

I shiver

For it is not the cold as the cause of my discontent

It is the feeling of forever being watched

I spot something flash past me

Followed by the stench of rotting flesh

As it slowed

I caught a glimpse of its face

The creature's face was death

It was covered in grotesque fur

Maggots and lice blanketed every square inch

I bit my lip to keep from screaming

For that would give away my location

I tasted the salty blood in my mouth

He moved stealthily

Like a cheetah stalking its prey

Blood trickled down the corner of its razor sharp fangs

I gasped in horror

The animal whirled around to face me

Its eyes were Hell

They burned with flames of fury

It bounded over in my direction

I was an unmoving statue

It couldn't see me yet

But even the slightest breath would be sudden death

I slowly backed away

And stepped on a twig

Crack! It went under my feet

The animal ran over to me

And rolled over like a dog!

Its eyes, now soft and bright, pleaded with me

I cautiously took a step closer to the animal

Got on my knees

And pet him

That was two years ago

Now the animal, whom I call Sparta, and I, are companions

Best friends, like a dog and its master

That shows something that everyone should know

Not all monsters are evil


See how much better my writing is from in 7th grade? Read "Snorterella" and you'll know what I mean. R&R!