Burst! This is a complete rewrite of the original story, I've read through the original and cringed, so I would like to restart it fresh. I do not own Naruto. -Line-Break-
crushed.
The survivors who are desperately trying to get to the Hokage's head in time all but fail as the demon's rampage was sudden. All they knew was their war-hero was the cause of this. A blond man stood up on a tall light post in the center of the mass destruction laughed his ringed blue eyes had an insane glee as he watches the rampaging beast slaughter the defending Shinobi. The screams of the fallen and the crushing of their bones was like a symphony to the fallen hero's ears.
"He,he HAHAHAHAHAHAH" The man laughed out his hand stretched out in a grandeur fashion. "THIS PLACE DARE TREATS ME LIKE THE WAY THEY DID AFTER EVERYTHING I'VE DONE FOR THEM!?"
"BURN KONOHA, Die Konoha." The perpetrator said grimly.
"MINATO!" A raspy voice called out, the now revealed Minato Namikaze turned around and sneered at the newcomer.
"To think you would fall this low, I'm disappointed in you, what would Jiraiya say?" The new comer chastised, An explosion rocked the village making the two men looked at Kyubi who seems to be spewing out Orange bubbles, the bubbles swirled around in the air, a building popped one of those strange bubbles and to the newcomer horror a chain of explosions let off.
"The power of the strongest Biju." He muttered in awe making Minato smirk.
"You should never speak of my master's name, Fourth Hokage." Minato said spitting out the revered title, "It is because of you this is happening, I SHOULD BE LORD FOURTH, I WON THE THIRD GREAT NINJA WAR FOR KONOHA! I SHOULD BE PRAISED!"
"Jealousy isn't a good look on your yellow flash." The appointed Fourth Hokage said. Minato clenched his fist, his blue ringed iris was gone showing pure white and blood shot eyes, a trait that always happen when his ire has risen to an extreme. The last time this happen is when his pregnant ex-fiancé Kushina broke up with him due to his 'aggressive behaviour' after he lost the candidacy.
"Why would you do this to us, just over some position?" The lord fourth said. "I can see why Kushina left you, your pitiful."
"DON'T YOU DARE SAY HER NAME IN FRONT OF ME OROCHIMARU!" Minato flicked a tri-pong Kunai toward the now revealed Orochimaru of the Sannins, who tilted his head letting the airborne weapon fly past him, Orochimaru quickly turned with a snake like grace pushed Minato's outstretched hand – who transported behind him via Hirashin- avoiding a Rasengan to the back.
"I've memorized your fighting style Minato, you will not win here today, and Because of you, your new-borne child will receive the hate of the village because of your actions today, congratulations your condemned a new life."
Minato falter his face turned distraught, he completely forgot about his child, HIS offspring with….
"I'm sorry Minato, I love you but…" "But what, what are you trying to say?" "I don't like the new you, y-you changed Minato and I-I can't handle that I'm sorry but i am breaking off the engagement, good-bye Minato." "Wait please, I-I'm sorry I'll change! Kushina please!" "The baby will be better of without a father like you, good-bye."
That bitch!
Hurt, anger despair raged his mind like the inferno below and he sneered.
"You think I care for that little shit?" Minato took out two Tri-prong Kunais and the one behind Orochimaru, He disappeared in a flash appearing behind the Snake Sannins he used his extra kunai to swipe off Orochimaru only for his hand to be caught by the man himself, Orochimaru used his free arm and launched multiple snakes at the blonde. The snake's fangs connect making the falling Hero scream out in pain and irritation.
Minato quickly cut away the snakes before the venom can reach his system, He threw his Kunai at the Fourth Hokage, Orochimaru turned around and blocked an incoming kick, but what he didn't anticipate was a Shadow clone of Minato ramming a large Rasengan in his back.
"AGH!" Blood erupted out of the pale mans mouth, Another Shadow clone appeared over Orochimaru and slammed another Rasengan, the impact made a large crater, Orochimaru's mouth widen and a shadow rushed out revealing a clean non-damage but slightly panting Orochimaru.
"D-damn, I'm glad my research was a success but that Jutsu is very chakra taxing." He thought, the Hokage candidate smirked at the panting Orochimaru and blurred in front of him landing punches after punches.
"Tch, you're so weak," Minato jeered. "How ARE you on par with master Jiraiya, HOW ARE YOU EVEN STRONG ENOUGH TO BECOME A KAGE!"
With the last sentence, Minato flashed a punch in Orochimaru's neck making the man tumbled down a tile roof, the roof that has taken a substantial amount of damage caved in under Orochimaru's weight making the man fall in the burning home. Minato smirk knowing that Orochimaru is crafty he jumped in the hole to finish him off.
Orochimaru looked up coughing and wincing due to the smoke in the air and pain he had taken he saw the blurry visage of Minato walking out of the flames towards him, those cold blue eyes with the hypnotising black rings in the centre gave the blonde an almost unearthly look.
"Like a god, no the king of demons them selves," In western religion there was an Angel, the most beautiful ever created and favored by God himself, but he to wanted to rule, but when was denied he rebelled causing a rift between the angels of god's domain, this was the King of demons himself, Orochimaru can easily compare that with the man who is currently stalking towards him.
Minato, favoured by all.
Beautiful, hell he even had a large fanbase rivaling his and Fukagu Uchiha.
But he wanted to rule and so when he didn't get what he wanted he rebel.
"How ironic." Orochimaru thought as he stumbled on his feet, one golden slitted eye shut and another glaring at the fallen hero.
"This is the end; you and your village will die here tonight." Minato whispered. Orochimaru opened his mouth and a long sword flew out of his mouth, it was so sudden Minato had no time to dodge, he took the blade to the stomach, blood sputtered out of Minato's mouth. Orochimaru took out the extended sword out of his mouth and spoke the words that will haunt Minato for eternity.
"My blade the sword of Kusanagi can cut through anything Minato, I've cut your stomach clean through and I can tell that you stomach acid is already burning away the rest of your organs, you're done for."
"O-OROCHIMARU DAMN YOU!" Minato jumped back and charged at his opponent, Orochimaru sighed and cut through Minato, cutting him in half, Minato blue eyes glared up at the man who put him in this state, he was cut in half from the waist down.
"Minato, I will stop the demon, and protect this village with every fiber of my body." Orochimaru started to turn.
"W-wait." Minato called out, Orochimaru stopped and turned around facing the student of his best friend.
"M-my child, is it a b-boy or a g-girl?" Minato asked.
"Kushina confirmed that the baby is male." Orochimaru told him, he doesn't know why he would tell an already dead man this.
"M-make s-sure he d-doesn't know about me, a-nd please, n-name him N-N-Naruto..." Minato rasped/begged. Orochimaru eyes widen before closing them with a small smile.
"From Jiraiya book." Orochimaru turned to face the already dead Minato, "I'll take heed to your request, may you have a peaceful slumber, yellow flash."
Minato Namikaze, the yellow flash of the leaf and the Harbinger of death to both Iwa and Konoha, died on the time 9:40 P.M. The flames burned the wood of the house and everything came crashing down the corpse of Konoha's fallen hero and now worst enemy, burning the corpse of the once respected and most feared man off the face of the earth, not leaving any remains.
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"DON'T LET THE FOX BREAK OUR DEFENSE, I WANT EVERY AKIMICHI HOLDING THE FOX BACK, EVERY SARUTOBI AND UCHIHA CLAN MEMBER UNLEASH YOU MOST POWERFUL FIRE JUTSU!" An old but commanding voice announced.
"YES, REVERED LORD THIRD!" The Shinobi's that surrounds the old man yelled out in determination. Three Akimichi's grew to the size equal to the tail beast and tackled the malicious mass of chakra, using everything they must to both hold the beast down and to maintain their expansion Justus, The Uchiha and Sarutobi clans appear around the still standing houses weaving identical hand signs, they then curve their index fingers and inhaled.
"FIRE STYLE: GRAND FIREBALL JUTSU!" Fireballs the sizes of buildings rain down the fox, making it screech in frustration, an explosion of chakra erupted around the fox flinging the defending forces back, the beast turned away from the Village and tried to leave now that his capturer was dead -shame that he didn't crush the damn blond himself- but Golden chakras wrapped around the fox,
"I CAN'T MOVE WHAT IS THIS, WHO IS DOING THIS?!" The fox voiced boomed through out the entire village making the civilian clasp their ears in pain. Red eyes full of malice locked on to a pale man with black hair and purple facial marking holding a baby with a tuft of blond hair and a red hair woman with the golden chain connected to her.
"WOMAN RELEASE ME THIS INSTANCE!" The beast yelled out shaking the very earth with his primordial voice.
The woman looked at her crying new borne, and flinched at how he looks just like his father, she prays that he doesn't develop his personality when he loses competition.
"Naruto, my baby" Kushina whispered out tiredly. "I'm so sorry that I brought you in this cursed world to bear a burden of being the offspring of the man who did this and a Jinchuuriki, the only way i know for redemption in your eyes I probably death, so…I shall die for you to live, I love you my beautiful son…"
She looked up to Orochimaru with tired but determined eyes.
"Do it."
Orochimaru set the child down and weaved through hand seals, the same very hand seals that will lead him to one thing that he feared all his life.
Death.
He looked at the child and smirk.
"Child, you may not know me, and you'll probably never will, but I was the one who killed your daddy." He said bluntly, he licked his cracked lips. "I'm dying for this village and your sake, so you better not fall down in the same path as your father or I will haunt you forever."
With that piece he clasped his hands. The Kyubi eyes widened, he knew what they were going to do, he tried to kill the baby, but the woman got in his way.
"REAPER DEATH SEAL!" The snake Sannin yelled out, and ethereal form of the grim reaper appeared behind Orochimaru, its long purple hand grasps Orochimaru soul and the Kyubi's. The Biju yelled out in a mixture of pain and fury. The reaper took the tanto out of its mouth and sever both Orochimaru soul and Kyubi's, severing their soul from their body forever. The Shinigami then sealed the Kyubi's soul in Naruto.
"Good luck" Orochimaru fell back, the Fourth Hokage of Konoha, the first of the legendary three ninjas to fall, died here in Konoha, on 10:58 PM. Kushina crawled to her baby and cradle him. Shadows flickered into existing revealing the Third Hokage, looked sadly at the scene, he lost his student and the woman who he see's as a granddaughter. He saw the baby with the blood of the one who did this and the holder of the Kyubi. He grew angry at the child, he stepped forward to end the child's first breathe of this world when Kushina's voice rasped out.
"G-grandpa." She called him out affectionatly making the old man heart break. "Protect m-my son, please I b-beg you, d-don't m-make h-im end up as h-his fa-th….n-no d-don't make h-him e-end up l-like M-ina-to. PLEASE!" She rasped out and her head fell back. Dead. Tears were streaming down Hiruzen face and he nodded his head,
"Yes Kushina, I promise you."
-END- Here is the rewrite of Burst, this is an Alternative universe of what if Minato lost the Hokage candidacy and was ridicule by the village because of his fallen out with his comrads, I hope you enjoy this rewrite. And please review on what you think. Your papa,
Papapryce.