Yo! Its me! Here is some poem combined with a letter and I actually think I did pretty good on it! Please No flames but "constructive critics" !
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Sakura folded the letter and re-read for the millionth time. She had once again been thinking about Konohas Avenger. Sakura was always thinking about him and where he could be, she missed him, but sadly her love for him was fading with each passing day. Today was NO exception. She remembered her friend Ino scolding her for thinking about him
"Dang it Forehead girl, you really need to forget about Sasuke!". "I know Ino but….Its hard, I mean you did it Because you have Shikamaru" said Sakura. "Well I mean we do make a cute couple don't we?" Ino practically screamed. Sakura grumbled a "Stop rubbing it in!"
"Whatever, but Sakura I heard of this exercise of relieving stress. You have to write a letter or a poem to a person your grieving about and here's the thing, don't send it!" Sakura leaned in interested and asked "So this will help me? And I can write a poem?" "YUP!" Ino said.
Sakura actually murmured a "Ill try it, then." And now, here she was writing this stupid poem crying her out it in it. She really did turn pathetic. "Karin!" called Sakura, her pet cat. She looked at it and said "Im going to read you my poem and hopefully Ino-Pig was Right about this making me feel better." And so she Began.
"This is for you Sasuke" She said before staring.
Im invisible
No one cares
No one hears
No one sees
Standing here,
By myself, on my own.
It hurts,
It really hurts.
All I wanted was love
Not hurt.
What a sad tale,
But what else do but wale?
I cry alone.
I cry tears of sorrow,
Waiting for tomorrow.
Until I see,
What was meant to be.
I was meant to feel
Loneliness,
Despair,
What a sad way to end.
This obsession with perfection,
Drives me crazy.
But that won't change a thing,
I'm like an angel with battered wings.
I feel alone.
Yes, that's it.
Alone. Alone. Alone.
But now that I've wrote this,
I don't feel….
so alone anymore.
Not anymore
Who would have guessed,
That this feeling would be a bless?
I've opened my eyes,
To what you really were.
And now I see,
What a fool I've been.
I hope your happy,
I really do.
But I know in your heart your hurting too.
Sakura finished her poem and looked at Karin. "So what do you think? And Be nice!"All she heard was a small "Meow." Sakura laid herself on her bed and thought, wow, that really helped.
She stood up and said "I need to thank Ino later!" While crumpling up the paper and throwing it in the trash.
Finally….she wasn't so alone.
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