(A/N)- I redid this story, figuring since it sucked... I might as well do something about it. It might take awhile, so... bear with me. I just here to this computer and it's the only one that I can type the stories on. For all I know, it could take me a week to have the first chapter up. BUT- I promise they'll be less confusing and more exciting. Just a few reviews from the old story and my answers.
From viah(anonymous)- this has a good concept it just kind of doesn't make sense with the whole outburst from olivia it seems a bit out of character for her because she never breaks down. Also with the whole Xoxo letter situation i'm kind of confused on that too because is it part of a case or something. now don't take this the wrong way i think you have a very good idea keep writing
I understand the confusion concept, but bear with me, it's my first fanfic...thanks for the support and please keep reading.
From Katie(anonymous)- Okay... I like this story's potential, but don't you think Elliot would be freaking out if his daughters, son, and wife were missing? Especially since he saw the note at the beginning?
I'm a little confused, but I do like the storyline.
I do think he'd be freaking out by now, but I find he is one to hold the anger in, so he's basically holding that fuse together... he'll blow soon. Trust me, if you were in a car and he was what made the car move... you'd buckle up and SCREAM!
Soo... I might as well start, but I'm feeling a writer's block coming on, so... it'll take awhile. When the story comes, keep reading because you're gonna love it, I hope