Judy's terrible sexual molestation experience.
I was away from zootopia on vacation visiting my parents. Only to find out when i get there my dad was the only one there. It was odd enough but yet it was peaceful and quiet. I walked in and dad greeted me with a nice warm hug. "So judy, How are you doing?" He asked. "I'm doing fine thank you." I walked into the dining room to find the table was already set and the food was already prepared. After such a wonderful meal. I got up helped clean the table and asked where everyone is at? But stu only looked at me and laughed. What was that about; I thought to myself.
Hours passed by as I sat on the couch flipping through channels. But no one other than dad was around. I got thirsty and decide to grab a coke. I went to the kitchen but there was nothing in the fridge that was coke. So I decided to check the fridge in the basement. I opened the door and flickered on the light. *Click* But nothing happened. So I started slowly walking down the steps to find the other light. I felt the string from the light hit my face. I clasped it in my paw and pulled down. The light flashed on and my eyes widened.
I looked in front of me too see mom's head hanging on a meat hook. No eyes no body just her head. I looked at my feet to see blood everywhere. I slowly backed up and bumped into a soft object, I turned around and saw it was my little brother anthony who was not even one yet; hanging with a fish hook through the back of his head. I couldn't even scream I slowly started backing up again and bumped into something. I turned around to see it was stu. "So, sneaking around without my permission huh judy?" He put his paw over my mouth and one behind my head. "Looks like i'm gonna have to teach you a lesson." Black started fading around me and next thing I knew I was tied up in a bed.
So? What do you think so far? (Please leave comments suggesting what I should fix and What else I should do with it.) Any help is appreciated! ;)