If you already know and have read this story, this information is for you.
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As I was saying.
I have begun to fully update and rewrite each chapter of Part One of Alpha. Why? Because I am not happy of how it was written/typed.
These rewritten versions will be more detailed and MUCH longer than the originals.
For those who want me to continue the story from the End, I AM considering about it. Currently, I have no...real...reason to..continue the story. But I am brainstorming.
Have fun Reading!
The room was made of checkered sheet metal and was stained with blood. The lights above shined down, revealing clumps of hair and bone that scattered the floor. Two figures stood side by side, one yelling at the other in rage. In the right corner was a figure the size of a small boulder.
"How many times do I have to tell you: No More Strays! It's already beyond cruel that we are killing pegasi for failing a simple flying test or any other lesser crime, but being a stray? That isn't something that they pick, that they want to happen! You don't prepare or study to be abandoned by your parents! This is wrong." The galaxy-blue coated princess spoke out, slamming her hoof into the floor for emphasis. Her armored hoof rang out, waking the figure in the corner.
"I would apologize but it'll fall on deaf ears." The Princess of Equestria spoke out with both sorrow and regret. "I had no choice. After his defeat, harmony began to collapse and the Economy seemed to follow close behind. I had to find a way to restore peace and harmony."
"You don't need to give me another history lecture. Where I was," Luna replied with a frown. "I had a view of everything. Just make sure he doesn't get hurt." She replied, looking at the young figure whose breathing had returned to normal.
Celestia shook her head. "Living and working here is a life fraught of depression, sadness, and no will to live. He will hate his life; become isolated; and eventually become victim to this dreadful place. You do realize what you are condemning this soul to, do you not?"
Luna nodded, confirming that she knew exactly what she was doing. The colt, pretending to be still unconscious, had opened his tree-bark brown eyes and turned his head around slowly to look at the Legendary Princess nodding her head, sentencing to a life that, after a quick glance around the room, the colt knew wasn't going to be good.
Luna turned to look at the colt and noticed the reflection of the light on his eyes. "He is awake."
Celestia nodded and walked toward the corner of the room where the colt laid, Luna behind her. "Listen here, my colt. The life you know is over and a new one fraught with peril and death waits. The choice to live is now up to you and only to you. You will not survive and eventually, you will find yourself victim to this place. In a few hours, you will begin working at this place; if you fail to respond or do your work, you will be punished severely. Remember only to be strong and no matter what you do, fear him"
Alpha stayed quiet and looked up to Celestia and watched as she lifted her hoof and brought it down onto his face, not once or twice, but three times, knocking him unconscious.
"Welcome to the Rainbow Factory, Alpha."