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So im a live but taking a brake from American Factor. ill say this i will start working on it again if Penmaster cole finises CH 3 of cry Horvic or after i return from basic for the US Army National Guard which ever comes first.
Here's a few things you need to know.
1: Constructive Criticism VIA PM ONLY!
2: K.O.P.O.C. (Kinda OP Original Character)
Team RWBY was facing against a very old Nevermore and needed Backup so Team RNGR (Ranger) was sent into relieve them. Team RNGR is pretty much me… alone… well … shit. "RNGR YOU BETTER GET HERE SOON OR WE'LL BE A SPLATTER ON A WALL" Yang Yelled over the radio. I jump up high and I see the Nevermore it's diving towards the ground. I deploy a wing suit which causes me to glide towards the Nevermore. I literally tackle the Nevermore in midair and drive its head into the ground. I jump back and land while pulling out my Mk-1 Rorshe railgun I see Ruby, Blake, and Yang land to my right. I ask "Where's Weiss?" then all of a sudden something hits the square of my back and I fall to the ground. "Never mind." I Groan. Ruby, Yang and Blake laughs "You should have been paying attention." She practically screeched in my ear "As Much as I like the taste of soil… can you get THE FUCK OFF OF ME!" I Growl. "FINE!" and she got off of me I saw that the Nevermore finally got its head out of the ground. I got my semblance ready lightning arced across my skin I focus it to the railgun I took aim and fired the Nevermore was obliterated. "Well the Nevermore is now a Nomore" I say after looking at the giant crater. Yang and Ruby laugh Blake just smirks. While Weiss just smacks the back of my head and says "Shut up idiot. You're not even strong." I smile and it wasn't a friendly smile it was a smile that promised pain. Yang, Ruby and Blake tries to intervene. "Hey Weiss how bout we all go and get some food." "Yea we can go to that pancake place before we have to report in to the headmaster." Ruby stated. "fine." Weiss sighed. As we started walking I stated "Ruby that sweet tooth of yours is going to cause problems with your health." "What do you mean John?" she asked "What I'm saying is if all you eat are sweets and candy then your body will not develop properly." "WHAT YOU WANT ME TO GIVE UP ALL SWEETS!" "No I didn't say that you couldn't have them all I said is that you need to cut back and eat from the other food groups. Blake tells them about your diet." "I eat meats, vegetables, some fruit and some bread, three times a day." I tell them "I have one meal a day which includes all six food groups." "WHAT!?" they all yelled "you are Beyond stupid." Weiss says. I glare at her and say "No I'm not stupid. It's just that my body is conditioned to use the food most efficiently." I paused thinking "Except at thanksgiving, then I just eat, sleep and hunt." "So you got three things in your life that you love is there a number four?" Yang asks sultrily. At this I got very, very close to Yang and lean in lips almost touching making her blush and said "Teasing you." After wards she reeled back stuttering incomprehensible sounds. I Laugh "Come on let's get you gals some food."