This is my first fanfiction story ever so if anybody actually reads it I'd love to know what you think. Even if you absolutely despise it and think that I deserve to die for what I have created, please tell me so I'll know if I'm any good at this or not. Also, any suggestions as to what I should do with this story are welcome, because I do have my own ideas but I haven't yet decided, so help me out if it's not too much trouble!
Disclaimer: I do not own PJO, that's Rick Riordan's job. Fortunately, he does an excellent job so I'll let him keep it.
The fact that three new demigods had suddenly appeared at camp was not what bothered Percy Jackson. That had been happening constantly lately. What did bother him however, was that these three demigods happened to have 'suddenly appeared' out of the sea, which was odd enough alone, but the situation was extremely peculiar considering that every single other new demigod in the history of Camp Half-blood had entered the camp via half-blood hill. Percy had been 'spending some quality time' with his girlfriend, Annabeth Chase, on the beach just before curfew when Percy saw three figures stumble out of the surf. As Annabeth noticed that Percy had been distracted from their 'quality time', she pulled away from their kiss (A/N: If anybody thought I was hinting at something a bit more…um…mature, then you sir/ma'am, need to get your mind out of the gutter.) and followed his gaze to the trio of weary teenagers. As the confused lovers stared dumbfounded at them, the only boy in the group spoke up in a deep and powerful voice:
"Who are you? What is this place?" he asked suspiciously
"That depends," Annabeth said as she carefully inspected the three travelers, "Who are you and where did you come from?"
"We asked you first," said one of the girls aggressively.
"Meredith, don't be so hostile," the other girl admonished.
"Well Meredith, that's not how it works around here, especially if you just mysteriously walk out of the ocean," Annabeth spat out the girl's name like it was poisoned.
"Relax Wise Girl," Percy insisted "I don't know why, but I feel like we can trust them." He turned his attention to the strangers and gesturing to his surroundings declared, "This is Camp Halfblood, home and training ground of the mortal children of the Greek gods. This is Annabeth Chase, daughter of Athena, and I am Percy Jackson, son of Poseidon." The three new arrivals were definitely caught off guard by this answer, and they all looked at each other for a couple of seconds until they began to slowly back away.
"Oooookay then… We're gonna go ahead and leave now…" the boy trailed off as Percy raised his hands and willed the sea to rise into a thirty foot wall of sheer watery force. He then let it drop to the ground, intending to splash the shocked teens.
"Believe me n-?" Percy started to ask. He stopped midsentence when he realized that the water had stopped right in front of its intended targets. Percy turned towards the sea and in an exasperated tone exclaimed, "You're just pulling my leg right? I thought that was a joke!" Annabeth, being a child of the goddess of wisdom, despised not knowing something, so she started to examine Percy suspiciously
"What's…" she trailed off as three shimmering images of golden three pronged spears, also called tridents, appeared above the newly-claimed demigods.
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