Blood and Pain
Disclaimer: I do not own Dragon Ball, Dragon Ball Z or Dragon Ball GT!
Author's note: Well here is the revised edition of Blood and Pain. I hope you like it. There will be a few new things in the story, because I screwed up the old one, to a point, and the grammar and spelling sucked, so hopefully the story will look better!
Well, the extended Blood and Pain edition will be out soon, and then Blood and Pain 2 will be out after that. I hope you're excited, because I know I sure am. If you like any of my other fan fictions I should have them updated and revised soon! Anyway, on with the story!
Chapter One: Goten's Pain
Goten has always been cheerful, when he was a kid. Now he has change, and he is not the
same. Goku and Chichi have always thought of him as failure. Goku never trained Goten. Instead, Goten does chorus and works.
Goten has never really been close to anybody except for his niece, Pan. Trunks and Goten were friends a long time ago until they got into a fight about who had a stronger dad.
Now, Trunks and Goten are enemies at school, and do not speak to each other. When Trunks would want to fight Goten, Goten would always lose, because Trunks trains all the time.
Goten has started to train everyday. When he would fight Trunks, Goten would never go Super Sayian, because he was afraid of being known as a freak. Trunks would always go Super Sayian or Super Sayian 2, and would end up beating Goten down until he is bloody and is in pain.
Goku yells at Goten for getting beat up. The first time that, Goten got beat up by Trunks, Goten began to train. Since Goten started his training, by himself, he has gotten to Super Sayian 3.
Over the years, Goten became much stronger then Trunks, and every time that Trunks and Goten would fight, Goten would get a little closer to beating Trunks.
Goten has hated his whole family, except for Pan, and his families friends. He has never met Bra. Trunks have always told Bra that Goten is an asshole, and she had to stay away from him. Pan has always told her that he is kind and sweet.
Goten has always wanted to runaway or kill himself but, Pan always tells him not to leave, so Goten doesn't, but there has been many close calls were Goten was going to kill himself or runaway.
Pan is the main reason Goten is alive, and is Goten's only reason for living, but sometimes Goten does not care and Goten just wants to escape everything, and start all over again.
* So what did you think of the first chapter revised. Did you like, I hope I didn't screw up, if I did please forgive me!
I proof red the story a couple of times, so hopefully it should be good, if not, tell me, but don't flame me!
Remember, to review and tell me what you thought of my story and if I improved the chapter and what you thought of the story. I should have the next chapter up soon! Bye! *
Disclaimer: I do not own Dragon Ball, Dragon Ball Z or Dragon Ball GT!
Author's note: Well here is the revised edition of Blood and Pain. I hope you like it. There will be a few new things in the story, because I screwed up the old one, to a point, and the grammar and spelling sucked, so hopefully the story will look better!
Well, the extended Blood and Pain edition will be out soon, and then Blood and Pain 2 will be out after that. I hope you're excited, because I know I sure am. If you like any of my other fan fictions I should have them updated and revised soon! Anyway, on with the story!
Chapter One: Goten's Pain
Goten has always been cheerful, when he was a kid. Now he has change, and he is not the
same. Goku and Chichi have always thought of him as failure. Goku never trained Goten. Instead, Goten does chorus and works.
Goten has never really been close to anybody except for his niece, Pan. Trunks and Goten were friends a long time ago until they got into a fight about who had a stronger dad.
Now, Trunks and Goten are enemies at school, and do not speak to each other. When Trunks would want to fight Goten, Goten would always lose, because Trunks trains all the time.
Goten has started to train everyday. When he would fight Trunks, Goten would never go Super Sayian, because he was afraid of being known as a freak. Trunks would always go Super Sayian or Super Sayian 2, and would end up beating Goten down until he is bloody and is in pain.
Goku yells at Goten for getting beat up. The first time that, Goten got beat up by Trunks, Goten began to train. Since Goten started his training, by himself, he has gotten to Super Sayian 3.
Over the years, Goten became much stronger then Trunks, and every time that Trunks and Goten would fight, Goten would get a little closer to beating Trunks.
Goten has hated his whole family, except for Pan, and his families friends. He has never met Bra. Trunks have always told Bra that Goten is an asshole, and she had to stay away from him. Pan has always told her that he is kind and sweet.
Goten has always wanted to runaway or kill himself but, Pan always tells him not to leave, so Goten doesn't, but there has been many close calls were Goten was going to kill himself or runaway.
Pan is the main reason Goten is alive, and is Goten's only reason for living, but sometimes Goten does not care and Goten just wants to escape everything, and start all over again.
* So what did you think of the first chapter revised. Did you like, I hope I didn't screw up, if I did please forgive me!
I proof red the story a couple of times, so hopefully it should be good, if not, tell me, but don't flame me!
Remember, to review and tell me what you thought of my story and if I improved the chapter and what you thought of the story. I should have the next chapter up soon! Bye! *