First fanfic let see how badly this turn out.
Naruto's characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto, Misfile's characters belong to Chris Hazelton.
This story was witten by scapheap i.e. me
"You ready?" human level speech
'I'm a idiot' human/animal thought
"Yes little one" demon level speech/jujitsu
'The fourth hokage what a joke' demon thought
Misfile Bijuu
Chapter 1: limbs 14?
Ash Upton opened her eyes. She was in a lightly flooded cell. 'Ok what happen last night' she thought as she got to her hands and knees 'really small cell not enough room to stand up'. Prop up at the side of the cell was a simple looking broadsword with blue handle 'Odd they let me keep my sword through it looks oddly small' Ash mused. 'Two arms, two legs, nine tails, ok good to...' Ash's thoughts came to crashing halt.
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A blond little boy walk along a flooded path as he reflected on his 6th birthday. 'not much of a birthday'.
wake up in a bare bones bedroom, got smaller than everyone else breakfast, mange to eat half of it before it got stolen. Blame for stealing someone toy, punish even if the toy was in the pointed hand, miss lunch because of the punishment, push in the pond (pusher got off scot free), smaller dinner, go to bed.
The boy pause hearing splashing and with nothing better to do ran toward it.
000
Out of every thing the boy thought what it could be, giant fox did not cross his mind. A giant red nine tailed fox that may be having a panic attack. He tried think of was it could be ('Kyuubi?, no, one it dead, two it a large scary monster, not a giant non-scary fox.' etc etc.) but came up blank.
The boy took a deep breath "Hello!". The fox froze before turning it head toward the blond "Um hi, are you an angel by any chance" asked the fox in a deep voice. The boy shook his head "no I'm Naruto a human" he pause "or maybe a demon the adults call me that a lot" another pause "why did you ask if I was an angel".
"Well last time I woke up in a different body an angel turn up to say how he mess up my life" the fox replied "O and don't mention that last sentence to any one. Anyway my name is Ash and I used to be human but now I'm a nine tail fox, last thing I remember before waking up here was going to sleep as a human in my house."
Naruto smiled "Same here, the going to sleep thing not the change into some else, only it was the orphanage" he slip in to a thinking face "you're nicer than everyone else will you be my friend"
Ash blinked "um, sure kid" 'nicer? I'm only talking to him' "any idea on where we are kid" Ash asked.
"No" yawn Naruto looking unsteady. "Get on my back kid it drier than the floor" Ash said.
After Naruto got to a stable part and fell asleep Ash eyes were drawled to a piece of paper with a symbol on it. 'What that?' were Ash's last thoughts before she join Naruto in sleep.
Yes it a short opening this is scene setting after all. A few questions I think will be ask and misc info
Ash age is 20 (or at least she think she is). Ash's sword is similar but not exactly like Vashiel's sword, it also one of three with the other two being different weapons let see if anyone can guess them. Naruto will not get mob in the street but his life will be bad. Yes Ash has human thoughts but demon speech.
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