Okay, so I haven't written in a few years but this idea has been in my mind for several days so I finally decided to start writing it last night, anyway. Reviews are welcome as well as constructive criticism cx the first few chapters are gonna be basic dialogue but I promise it'll get better soon.
"Watches! I've gotten watches here! Yo! This shit cost you 600 dollars in the store. Aw whatever... Watches!"
Fi walked down the street slowly, night time in Stilwater wasn't always the prettiest time to be out and she knew that, but it'd been a few weeks and she still hadn't found a place to stay.
"Hey baby, I could show you a good time."
Fi shrugged her off and kept walking before she heard a few men in yellow yell,
"Oh hell no!"
"Shit it's the Vice Kings." She mumbled under her breath, she hadn't been in Stilwater long but she quickly learned about all the gangs that inhabited it. She knew should run now but she didn't think going the other way would be any safer. She walked casually past the gangs who were now beginning to shoot.
"Hector says Buenas noches..."
"And that would be the Carnales." She said softly to herself as she kept walking before getting knocked over by their car. It drove straight into a wall, almost instantly catching on fire. Fi lay there in shock, she couldn't move or even scream. "Well this is it. I'm going to die here." She thought as she prepared herself. She had been saying she needed a gun for a few weeks now but couldn't round up the money to buy one.
"Wrong time, wrong place, dawg." She closed her eyes shut before hearing a gun shot. She opened her eyes and saw two men standing in front of her.
"You okay playa?"
"Julius lets move." The guy she assumed was Julius helped her up, she started walking but it hurt. Seconds later the car that knocked her down exploded, Julius sat her down.
"That don't look so bad, you should be fine. That's Troy, you can thank him later." Fi looked up at Troy then back to Julius.
"Hey." Troy tried to cut in, he seemed eager to leave.
"Hell I am." She thought to herself.
"The row ain't safe no more, We got gangs fightin' over shit that aint theirs, and you in the way. They don't care if you representin' or not."
"Julius, this is no time to recruit."
"We need all the help we can get, son."
"No! We need to get our asses out of here."
"In a minute! Look, The Row's got a problem. Come to the church when you wanna be a part of the solution." And just like that they both left.
