Hey guys :)
I finally decided to make the first Chapter!
It took me awhile because I kept changing things around.
I did pick some of the characters you guys sent me.
And the winners are...
i kissed danny and he liked it
Acadjonne d'la Baie
Midnight The Magician.
Congrats!
Anyways if anyone else has any idea or suggestions for the story. Feel free to message me.
I DO NOT OWN DANNY PHANTON AT ALL. BUTCH DOES! I DONT OWN ANYTHING!
Chapter 1
"Natasha Lilith Fenton get up! Its time for school" Danny Fenton yelled to his daughter.
A tired 14 year old girl groans and gets out of bed. She looks at the time on her phone. 5:30am it read.
(really dad) Natasha thought (We don't have to leave untill 7:30am)
Natasha gets her cloths together and walks to the bathroom. She tries to open the door but its locked.
"Jason hurry up!" Natasha yelled to her older brother.
"Hold on" Jason Tucker Fenton says through the door.
Finally a 17 year old boy opens the door. He looks just like his father did. The same black hair and icey blue eyes. Wearing a simple blue t-shirt, blue baggy jeans and black sneakers.
"Woah look at the rats nest" Jason joked.
"Shut up. Not now ok. The stupid box ghost wouldnt let me sleep last night" Natasha said annoyed.
Natasha walks into the bathroom yelling "I'm taking over the bathroom". Then shuts and locks the door.
She takes a shower. She gets out and dries off. She gets dressed and tries to dry her hair. She brushes through her hair to get the nots out and puts it in place. She does her hair make-up and puts on her jewelry.
She looks at herself in a full leight mirror.
She is wearing a black flowey short skirt, a purple tank-top, a black crop jacket, and purple flats. Her midnight black hair straight down with her bangs covering one of her purple eyes. Simple natural looking eyes shadow and black mascara. And a simple black string with a heart charm on it.
She walks out of the bathroom and back to her room. She grabs her smart-phone that has a purple case with black sparkles. She grabs her purple school bag then walks down stairs to see her mother, father, and older brother in the kitchen.
" Well look who is all dresses up" her mother, Sam Fenton said "you look awesome"
"Thanks mom" Natasha said "Morning daddy"
"Morning sweetheart" Danny said.
"Thanks for the help with the box ghost you guys" Natasha said sarcastically.
"Sorry sweety but I was at work" Danny said.
"I know but why didn't Jason help me"Natasha asked.
"Because its was the box ghost" Jason said.
"True" Natasha said
They all ate there breakfast. Jason looks at the time.
"Come on Nat" Jason said "We have to get the guys"
"Alright" Natasha said
They grab there bags and head outside. They get into Jason's car which is a black mustange convertable and drive to Jason's friends house.
" I know why your all dresses up" Jason said.
"Shut up"Natasha said
"I don't want you hanging out with him"
"Why? He's not a bad guy. He has never done anything bad to anyone" Natasha said defending her best friend.
"I just don't trust him"
"He's been with me every single one of my death days. He was even there on the day of my half death days and you don't trust him? I really like him Jason. Could you please except that?" Natasha pleaded
"Fine. But I swear if he hurts you in anyway ever he's dead" Jason said his eyes flashing ecto-green.
"Ok, ok, calm down. The guys are waiting" Natasha said
They got to Jason's friends house. Brad and Brian got into the back seat and they drove to school. Of course Brad and Brian teased Natasha for being all dresses up and girly. Natasha, Jason,Brad and Brian get out of the car when they arrive at the school.
"I'll see you guys later" Natasha said
"See ya later sis" Jason said
Natasha walks to the oak tree where her and her friends meet up at everyday. There she say 3 of her friends.
"Hey guys" Natasha said
"Hey Natasha" Christina (Chris) Keith said.
Chris was wearing a neon green tee under a purple sweater, a black one piece skirt/leggins with a white stripe on the right side of the skirt and ballet flats with mismatched socks. Her strawberry hair straight down to her waist. Her grey eyes sparkling.
"Hey crazy" Erin Foley said.
Erin was wearing a turquoise tank-top, black jeans and purple high tops. Her black wavy hair to her mid-back. Beautiful green eyes and carmel skin.
"Hey Nat" Angelo Jackson Foley(Ajax) said.
Ajax was wearing black jeans, green hoodie and grey timbland boots. His black dredlocks in his signature pony tail. Grey eyes shiny.
"Why are you all dresses up" Ajax asked "You look great"
"Thanks. And I don't know. Maybe I wanted to start looking more girly" Natasha said.
"Are you sure you didn't dress up to impress Shane" Chris said
Natasha blushed and started playing with her necklace."No I didn't dress up to impress Shane"
"Your lieing. You always play with that necklace when you lie ghosty" Chris said.
"Shut up" Natasha said.
"I don't know why you like him so much" Erin said.
"Oh stop it. He's not a bad guy" Natasha said.
Then someone puts their arms around Natasha and hisses in her ear. She jumps a little then giggles.
"Hey Shane" Natasha said turinging around and giving her best friend a hug.
He happily hugs back. "Hey ghost girl"
Shane Baxter is wearing a red t-shirt, baggy blue jeans and grey sneakers. His brown hair messed up like usual but you can still see his adorable brown eyes.
"Whats up" Natasha said.
"Nothing really. Can I ask you something in private" Shane asked
"Sure" Natasha said.
But before anyone could walk away Natasha's ghost sense went off.
"Sorry Shane but I have to..." Natasha started
"I know, I know. Go kick that ghost ass" Shane said "But be carefull"
"Always do" Natasha said "Going ghost"
A black and ecto-green ring forms around her waist. It splits into 2, one goes up while the other goes down. Her outfit transforms into a two piece HAZMAT suit. The top shows her stomach and is long sleeve and black with an ecto-green flaming design around a NP on her chest. Skin tight black pants, black lace-up knee high boots with ecto-green laces, black leather fingerless gloves with ecto-green outlining. Her midnight black hair goes to snow white and her purple eyes to ecto-green.
Natasha flies off to find the ghost. She is shot with an ecto blast and falls to the ground.
So what did you think of the first chapter.
It wasnt as long as I wanted the first chapter to be but its good enough I think.
So please R&R and tell me if I should continue or not.
BYEZZZ
-Randomchick14