Disclaimer-I do not own Mother 3
I deleted all of the chapters and stared editing and I added a little bit of new stuff.
Prologue
Lucas, a young 10 year blond hair boy, was sleeping in his bed when he hear Claus said, "Lucas come on down so we can play." Lucas got up and went downstairs and a woman with a pink dress and long hair said, "Good afternoon Lucas."
Lucas said, "Good afternoon mom."
Lucas was about to go out when his mom said, "You can't go out and play in your PJ's now go upstairs and change."
Lucas said, "No I want to go out in my PJ's."
"Then you can stay here for rest of your life."
Lucas cried, "But if I stay here for the rest of my life then I'll never see Dad, my talking dog Boney, old man Wess, my friends, or Wess son who I forgot the name of again. I will also never know what this PP thing for nor go in that castle with Claus."
Lucas is unable to go on this is the end of the story.
The End
Lucas said, "Fine I'll change." So Lucas went upstairs and changes into a red shirt with yellow strips or a yellow shirt with red strips and his hair combed and he went outside. Lucas saw his Grandpa Alec. Alec wore a hat, shades….why am I wasting my time describing all of the people in the game if the only people who be reading this are people who played the game. You know what I just leave it to your memory. Now where were we… oh yeah.
Lucas talked to Alec and said, "Good afternoon Grandpa"
Alec then said, "Good afternoon Lucas. It is a shame that you are leaving today."
"Yeah it is. Well I going to go talk to the talking cow now then find Claus."
"You go and do that."
As Lucas walked away Alec said under his breath, "Weirdo." Lucas then went to the cow and said, "Hi talking cow how you doing?"
The cow then said, "Moo" (Lucas let get something straight. All cows no matter what they're thinking go "Moo." It'd be handy to remember that.)
"What do you mean?"
"Moo" (It means that none of us animals are talking you just happen to be hearing our thoughts.)
"I still don't get it."
"Moo" (You are a weirdo now go before I ruin that hair of yours.)
Lucas covered his hair saying, "No not my hair!" He then ran off only to bump into a frog. The frog said, "Hi weirdo I am the save/review frog. I can save you progress and save readers reviews."
Lucas happily said, "Can I save my progress?"
"Yes you can."
One saving later
When Lucas got to Claus he saw him ramming a Drago and Claus said, "Took you long enough."
Lucas said, "So what are we going to play? Are we going to play ram the drago, a game that prove you smarter then me, or look at naked girls in the hot spring. If it the third chose then I'm out because you know how I am around girls. I can't even save a girl."
"Good thing I was there. But the thing we going to do is ram Drago. Now watch me do it." Claus rams the drago causing it to fall over. Claus then said, "Now you do it."
Alec came and said, "Did anyone said naked girls?"
Claus then yelled, "We not doing that again you almost got us busted!"
"I will be quiet next time."
"Ok but next time is going to be our next visit hopeful dad be there to help."
"Ok and Lucas in order to run you…..umm where is Lucas." While Claus and Alec were talking Lucas already ran into the drago…from the side. The Drago got up and they saw laying there flat.
Lucas got up and said, "Good thing Chuck Norris my uncle who I never had a chance to meet because he live outside of Nowhere Island or I would have died."
Claus said, "Chuck Norris is your Grandpa not your uncle."
"But Grandpas are old and Chuck Norris looks at less the age of Dad."
"He been around since umm…well he older then everyone on Nowhere Island age combine."
"That like 100 years old."
"You really need to learn Math." All the sudden a mole cricket came to try to ram the drago. It said, "I am the powerful mole cricket and I will see if you two boys can fight."
The first fight of many began Claus just stepped on it. Lucas said, "We did it and gain 2 whole exp." The mole cricket said, "I will have my revenge one day in the mole cricket area." It went only to be stepped on again by someone.
It was Lucas mom Hinawa and she said, "I stepped on a mole cricket. I hope it alright."
Lucas said, "You gain 2 whole exp mom!"
"It time for lunch and I fixing your favorite, omelets."
Lucas and Claus went to the house and Hinawa said, "You too dad." When Hinawa left Alec speaking to the reader said, "Remember to go by review frogs and review this story. You can do it on you user name or without it. Review a lot. I got to go now." Alec ran saying, "Save some omelets for me."
At the dinner table Claus said, "So what is your favorite food mom?"
Hinawa said, "It omelets."
"That our favorite food too."
"Good to know now we are going home tonight so you better get ready." Alec said, "I bet Lucas and Claus can get home alone heck I bet even Lucas can do it alone." Lucas jumped up acting scared and everyone laughed. Hinawa went to write her letter to Flint.
Dear Flint,
The kids are doing find always running around. Claus is as hyper as ever and keeping on asking what my favorite food is again and Lucas still think Chuck Norris is his Uncle just because his recent picture looks like he not old. I forgot how good the fresh mountain air is. It too bad you have to take care of the sheep. Next time we find someone to watch the sheep for you and we can come here as a family. I will be home at night because walking home at night is so much safer the walking home in the day time and when I get home I am making you some omelets.
Your Dearest Love,
Hinawa
Hinawa put the letter on a pigeon and let it fly off to Flint. Right when Hinawa was about to go back in the house she saw something flying. She said, "I wonder what that was." She then went back in the house. Now for the title.
Mother 3
Well that the end on the prologue and go to the review frog and review.
