This is my first ever fanfic! So review and if you hate it… well that sucks for you. ENJOY! This is chapter 1 of my cliché story. So read my loyal subjects read!

Disclaimer: I do not own Maximum Ride or any of the characters. JP does. (runs and sobs in a corner)

"Well here we are!" Mrs. Kibble said when we arrived at my new foster home.

This house was huge! It was like a mansion. Oh yeah, I forgot. Incase you're wondering, I'm Maximum Ride; Max for short. I know it's a weird name but get over it. I have dirty blond hair and, apparently, I have striking green eyes. I am 16years old, turning 17in 2 weeks. Anyway back to the house. It was white with a bloody red colored roof. There was a garden underneath the windows and the lawn was freshly mowed.

"Yea… great." I wasn't excited at all. This family will probably be exactly like the rest. Abusers with nothing better to do then hit me and lock me in a closet. Chances are I won't get attached because I'll be leaving soon anyway. No way in hell am I staying here! Mrs. Kibble got out of the car and I followed slowly, with my one single bag over my shoulder. Just as I was about to knock, a woman about 30 opened the door with a really creepy smile on her face. She looked happy, I guess.

"Hi! You must be Max. It is great to meet you. I'm Valencia Martinez but you can call me mom or Val. It doesn't matter. Why don't you come in and meet the family?"

"Um… sure." Damn she was perky! She was almost bouncing up and down with joy. That's not weird… Mrs. Kibble (A/N stupid name I know, it was all I could think of considering I have 7 dogs) walked in behind me and closed the door as I stepped into a room filled with kids… wow she needs a hobby. (A/N if you guys think this is creepy, it wasn't me. My friend corrupted my mind. Dirty, dirty mind. Lol. Back to the story)

"This is Monique but you can call her Nudge. She's a bit of a blabber mouth, so if you want to, you can always tell her to shut up." I have a feeling I will be doing that a lot. Monique was a dark skinned girl with bright brown eyes, and her hair was a bit of disarray, but her clothing kinda made me shiver. I'm not gonna tell you… actually I will. She was wearing a pink tank top that actually covered everything, a pink mini skirt that went to about mid thigh and then pink high heels. UGH! SO MUCH PINK! (A/N No offense to anyone who wears pink. I just don't like the color. But my friends love it so I can't criticize. ) "And this is Gary, but you can call him Gazzy." Gary was a cute little boy that looked about 12 with blond hair and big blue eyes that looked a little mischievous. "Don't ask about the nickname because I don't think you wanna know. This is Amelia, also known as Angel." Amelia looked about 12 years old, too, with the same blond hair and blue eyes but her eyes held something that looked like innocence. "Don't be fooled." Angel looked pissed when she said that. Should I be scared? Yea right. "And these 2 boys are our neighbors. This is Nicholas," the insanely cute boy with black hair, black eyes, and black everything, "and this is James." The complete opposite of Nick. He was extremely pale, and it was kinda weird. This is gonna be interesting.

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