hello again, this is my fourth story on fanfic so far, I just love this site and posting stories for me is addictive. My fourth story is call Bang! I think ye know already from the name how it is going to play out, I hope ye enjoy! Some serious whump in this story since I am a huge whump fan they are my favourite type of fanfics so enjoy!

Chapter 1

The smell was the first thing that Steve took into account, the strong smell of fumes filled the air. He was confused, what the hell happened? One minute he was working on a case trying to figure out who killed a 17 year old girl the next he was sprawled across the floor of the Five-0 Headquarters inhaling smoke as the flames bellowed around him.

His vision was beginning to grey as he tried to get to his feet, he couldn't help coughing trying to empty his lungs of the thick black smoke. He couldn't see much the only source of light was the bright orange flames as they licked the walls slowly tearing apart the centre of Five-0.

He felt a hot liquid run down his forehead and when he put his hand up to his forehead to investigate his hand came back red with his own blood. He found it hard to breath as the fumes and smoke invaded his body. He was in big trouble. He just had to find the exit, easier said then done! The explosion blew Steve from the main corridor into his own office he stumbled a few times but thankfully never fell as he made his way out of what used to be his office. He eventually made his way to the shattered glass doors and barely managed to push them open. He nearly made his way to the main exit when he looked around and saw Danny lying motionless on the ground, his left arm alight with flames feeding off his body. He looked dead but Steve knew he had to help him.

He managed to crawl beneath the smoke to Danny, he tore off his t-shirt and began fighting off the flames off Danny's mangled body. After what felt like an eternity the flames finally disappeared off Danny but more were already beginning to sneak up behind him, they had to get out..Fast!

Steve tried to wake Danny up by shaking his good shoulder lightly but to no avail. At this point he didn't even know if he was shaking a dead man. Steve placed two fingers on Danny's neck, and thankfully there was a pulse, it wasn't very strong but it was still there. Steve knew he had to get out but to be honest he didn't have the energy to carry himself and Danny out at the same time. Heck, he could barely carry himself not to mind Danny. But he knew he couldn't leave Danny to die he would never be able to forgive himself.

Valuable minutes passed and the fire was getting closer and closer, Steve panicked. He began to drag Danny by his shoulders through the shattered glass doors, he knew that dragging Danny by the shoulders might only aggravate the burns but he couldn't possibly drag him any other way.

He was a few feet away when he saw Chin and Kono apparently unconscious outside Chin's office. He couldn't leave them nor could he carry them, should he just get out of there himself? No he couldn't do that not to his best friends!

The building began to creak under pressure and Steve knew they didn't have much time left. He boldly decided to leave with Danny and as he was exiting he saw Catherine sprawled out and guess what, she was unconscious! How many people were in the God damned building! Dragging Danny further and hearing the muffled sound of sirens slightly relieved him. Steve was aching, he couldn't breath, he felt dizzy and nauseous like he was going to pass out at any minute. But he kept going, he had to. Nobody was going to die because of him! Nobody that he cared about anyway.

Somehow he managed to make it down the stairs and as he turned the last corner he half smiled when he saw the sun streaming through the door, he could smell and taste the fresh air already as he coughed harshly to try and remove the acrid smoke from his body. He was finding it harder to breath, harder to see, harder to walk but at the foot of the door he could finally make out the figure of Sergeant Duke Lukela as he shouted "Steve!" and started to run towards the building.

Steve couldn't stop now, what about Kono, Chin and Catherine? They needed saving and fast, he knew the building was going to come down but he hoped that he would be out of there before it did. So Steve lay Danny down gently before turning around and without hesitation went straight back into the burning building in order to rescue his friends. Duke was shouting, everybody was shouting but Steve just had to ignore the professionals orders because if he didn't he knew help probably wouldn't come in time for the three remaining unconscious victims in the building.

He made his way through the building, climbing up the rocky stairs, flames licking his skin on either side of him hoping the steps wouldn't collapse under his weight. He was sweating, obviously as he went up with no top on as he used his t-shirt to put out the flames on Danny. He first came to Catherine who was lying on her side, blood flowing from a cut on the side of her head. Steve noticed her breathing straight away, it was uneven and she struggled to inhale, her exhales were coming out husky and sharp. He coughed as he picked up Catherine in his arms and headed for the dreaded staircase.

Thankfully the staircase was made out of marble so it was slower to collapse but it was hot! The marble burned the sole of his shoe and his feet were now starting to feel the heat. He made it down and dropped Catherine in the exact same position as Danny. In the distance he could see Duke laying Danny down on a gurney while the paramedics started cutting off his shirt and giving him oxygen. It worried Steve that he still had not woken up.

Steve once again turned back into the non-stable burning building, he made his way back up the stairs and finally made it to Chin and Kono. He threw Kono over his shoulder and made for the exit. Twenty minutes later he was back up, he felt awful, he needed oxygen and he needed some quick. He was sweating and his breaths were coming in uneven and raspy.

He made it to Chin and started dragging him towards the exit, he was halfway down the stairs when the inevitable happened.

With one loud bang the building started to crumble around him and Chin. Steve managed to carry Chin around the waist as he hurried to get out of the falling building. As the building began to fail, flames blew in every direction and managed to burn Steve in many areas, some severe some not so severe but on top of everything else Steve just couldn't cope anymore.

On the last step of the once fancy and shiny white marble stairs Steve collapsed on his stomach along with Chin as bits of the building surrounded them. Steve blinked and coughed before trying to stand once more, but before he had the chance to a huge beam came crashing down from the ceiling striking Steve in his back before crashing down on his head.

Another piece of debris had pinned Chin to the ground by the waist

The situation looked dire for Steve and Chin as they both lay unconscious, rocks and wooden pieces from walls and ceiling raining down on them. Steve looked horrible blood covered his body but most severe was the trickle of blood coming out of Steve's ear.

Both could only try and survive until rescue came...

well what do ye think as a first chapter there is a lot more to come by the way, and the story will be revealed how they got themselves in this situation in the first place in the next chapter, which will be up soon! don't forget to Review..thanks