My 1st story: TECHNO's NOBLE 1ST PRIZE WINNER by varietygal15
Please review! I just made it for me & myself & for those who'd love Coco Bandicoot & Dr. Neo Cortex couple. If you don't, you'll get crazy about this story………
It was a fair weather here in Tokyo & everybody was so excited about the event. One day, Dr. Neo was testing his new invention. But the invention was a great success. And then, he & his friends (Tiny Tiger & his mutant Spike) went to the Ashiteru Junior-High's gym. Tiny & Spike were carrying his new invention.
"Here we are, the moment that I've been waiting for….." Dr. Neo said as he felt so very excited.
"Oh boy…" Tiny was bored and yawned.
"I heard that!" Dr. Neo yelled.
"Anyway, is this invention work?" Spike asked as he doesn't know if it works.
"Whatta stupid question?! Of course it'll work, I promise!" Dr. Neo felt so angry because of Spike's stupid question.
When they went inside the gym, Tiny Tiger noticed that Coco was there also.
"Uh sir…"
"What do you want Tiny?" Dr. Neo yelled.
"I-I-I-I think Coco was there too?!" Tiny said it as he felt so nervous.
"What are you talking about Tiny?! She's w/ Crash! Plus, Crash has a high fever remember?" Dr. Neo made his point.
"No, I'm serious sir." Tiny also made his point.
"Tiny, are you making me blind since you know that I have a SECRET HUGE CRUSH to Coco Bandicoot?" Dr. Neo whispered angrily.
After then, he saw Coco Bandicoot at the next of him. Since Dr. Neo Cortex was #15, Coco Bandicoot was in #16.
"Hey, Mr. Cortex!" Jenkins (new character of mine), the nun greeted.
Dr. Neo felt so surprised. He was so speechless.
"Cortex, are you alright?!" Coco asked. Then she snapped her hands to him.
"Uh, uh, yeah, YES I AM." Dr. Neo answered as he was in a tears of joy. "Jenkins?! How are you? I miss you so much since you left when I was 25 years old."
" I'm fine, my old pianist student." Jenkins answered. "I miss those times when we worked together, my favorite student & servant of God"
Coco was surprised on what Jenkins said. "What? He's what?"
"I'm a Roman Catholic, woman?!" Dr. Neo pointed her out.
"Okay!" Coco made her point.
"So, are you a nominee?" Coco asked
"Oh boy, please don't tell me that there's 1 contestant that is stupid here?" Dr. Neo whispered.
But Coco heard about it. "What did ya tell me? Excuse me Mr. Crainiumhead, I'm not stupid!" Coco complained on what he had said.
"Admit it sir, you just said it 'coz YOU LOVE HER!" Tiny opened up.
"Will you shut up Tiny!" Dr. Neo ordered Tiny because he doesn't want his secret to be spoiled. But, he blushed secretly to Coco.
"You have a what?!" Coco gasped and shocked about it.
Dr Neo sighed angrily. "Never mind about it!"
TO BE CONTINUED (after I sing 'BEAT IT'- kidding)………………………….
